RAGYA FF THE ANGEL IN DISGUISE Chapter 2 Updated (pg.6) - Page 2

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Posted: 10 years ago
#11
It's nice. But I don't like it
I hate ragz!
I love swalak/Swarya!
I hope it'll unite Swarya! And will new girl for Sanskar! Ragz will send away to study some place, get new life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
plz do continue as u have raised hope in ragini's fan heart plz continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
luvly concept great some thought of a positive aspect. plz do continue
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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
great work. sounds interesting. plz do update
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Posted: 10 years ago
#15
Thanks for the love everyone ans now I can kind of see what is being wanted of this ff. I'll try to update every wednesday from now on for how long I think it should go. But thanks a lot everyone for motivating me to continue.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#16
Thanks guyz!!! I will update by wednesday
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
Hey @Veebhalover the prologue seems to be very interesting, can you please update? Some love for Ragini is really needed so bring on some! ❤️
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Posted: 10 years ago
#18
Hey veebha plzzz update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#19
I'm updating tomorrow stay tuned ... Btw sorry for the delay got caughr up with school!
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey guyz!!! After a long wait here is chapter one. Btw i'm sorry for the delay and sorry that it's short because I'm in a tight schedule at the moment. If u like it plz comment so I know if I should continue or not and thanks for all the support. I need it because this is my first time writing a ff. Thanks again. Enjoy... I guess


Chapter 1:


Maheshwari House

As he returned to his room which seemed to be brighter than usual, he realized she was already there slightly turned away from his view. Her smooth hair flowing down her back and hands so soft like a baby's ... He realized she was always the reason for his brightness. Her every simple act was to protect and serve him, her smile only came after his, her choices only was his. He paused a moment to see the shining mirror in front of her ... To see her glowing face, her sharp eyes and shining smile ... But to his regret he saw what he never wanted to see ... The visual of water running down her face until it rested on her cheek bones ... The very beautiful cheekbones that forgot to lift up to her gorgeous smile since the day he married her!!!! He became frustrated and upset of what he did and what he couldn't do!!!! HE WAS SO MAD AT HIMSELF FOR BEING THE REASON OF HER DEEP SORROW. He felt more sorry for her than himself! As he decided to leave her alone for awhile and not cause more pain to her already broken soul, he turned sharply and headed towards the exit ... All of a sudden... A gentle hold on his stiff hands stopped him.

Ragini: where r u going laksh ji? R u okay?

His heart melted hearing her gentle tone and innocent voice which he had believed to be the one of a betrayer. He turned further away from her trying to hide the tears creeping up on his cheeks.

Laksh: don't worry. I'm fine ... I just need to be alone!

He tried to cover up his face and sorrow but said it in such a way with such harshness that it could be seen it hurt her furthermore.

Ragini: okay laksh ji. Don't worry I'm leaving ur room now ... But ur life forever tomorrow.

And with such a normal tone she stated those piercing words which left him in some stabbing pain and shock. He knew she was right ... tomorrow would be their last day together!

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