SWASAN TS : DO YOU LOVE ME (Part 3 updated on page no 10)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hey frds i m sonal...u all can call me sona or sonu

This is my first story on swasan...i hope its good...fingers crossed n yeah its a TS ( Three Shot )

N my grammar sucks so plzz bear haan😆

So here it goes

DO YOU LOVE YOU

Part - 1

(in swara's room...she was watching the beautiful sky...shomi enters)

Shomi-shona what r u doing beta...tomorrow is ur engagement na...now go n sleep

(no response)

Shomi-shona...(this time louder) shona

Swara(she came back to her senses)-ji maa

Shomi-i was talking to u na...tera dhyaan kahaan tha...tujhe pta hai na kal teri aur laksh ki sagayi hai...beta itni mushkil se tum dono ek hue ho aur phir

Swara-maa what is love

Shomi-what...are u mad...aadhi raat ko tu mujhse yeh sawaal kar rhi hai

Swara-maa plzzz tell me na...i want to know

Shomi-pyar wo hai jo tu laksh se karti hai

Swara-plzzz maa...dont change the topic...plzz tell me what is love...i seriously want to know

Shomi-hmm...sabse pehle pyar kuch sabdon mein byaan nhi hota

Swara-yeh konsi language thi...maa plzz in hindi or English

Shomi-we cant express love in just some words...love is the most beautiful feeling...pyar mein dard hai toh dawa bhi hai , pyar agar khushi deta hai na toh gam bhi deata hai , kai baar jo hamare liye kuch nhi hota woh hamara sab kuch ban jata hai , uski khushi mein khush hone ka man karta hai aur dukh mein dhukhi aur

Swara-aur

Shomi-aur jab aankhen band karo na toh bhi sirf uska hi chehra nazar ata hai

Swara-r u sure maa

Shomi-hmm...i told u na love is crazy but still the most beautiful feeling...now go to sleep...tomorrow is

Swara-my engagement

Shomi-hmm...good night

Shomi-good night

(and shomi goes to her room)

Swara-yeh sab pyar hota hai

(she again goes to the window n starts admiring the sky which is full of stars)

(She remembered something)

aankhen band karo na toh bhi sirf uska hi chehra nazar ata hai

swara-really(she closed her eyes n then she saw something...she opened her eyes with a horrified look)no that's not possible...sanskaar...nhi yeh nhi ho sakta...main toh laksh se pyaar karti hoon...i love laksh not sanskaar...toh phir sankaar kyun...now she is confused

(at MM...in sanskaar's room)

(sanskaar was looking at the sky suddenly he heard a knock on door...he turned)

Sanskaar-arey adarsh bhaiya...lucky...come na

Laksh-bhai tomorrow is my engagement

Adarsh-puch rha hai ya bta rha hai

Laksh-bhai aap bhi...okk leave it

Sanskaar-okk okk guys lucky i know that tomorrow is ur engagement (he took a pause) with swara (adarsh noticed that...n he felt bad for him)

Laksh-haan toh bhai tell me which sherwani is better(laksh shows him two sherwani one is blue n other one is golden)

Sanskaar-blue one

Adarsh-r u sure

Sanskaar-hmm...swara loves blue...blue is her favourite colour

Laksh-really bhai well i didn't know that...u r my saviour...chalo bye bro m going to sleep after all tomorrow is my engagement...chalein adarsh bhaiya

Adarsh-tu chal main ata hoon...mujhe sanskaar se baat karni hai

Laksh-okkk...good night

Sanskaar n Adarsh-good night

(he went from there)

Sanskaar-what happen bhaiya...is everything allright

Adarsh-for a change u tell me...is everything allright

Sanskaar-bhai what do u mean

Adarsh-sanskaar what r u doing

Sanskaar-what am i doing...bhai plzz stop talking in puzzles

Adarsh-okk toh main sidha point par ata hoon...tu chahta kya hai

Sanskaar-kya matl

Adarsh-let me complete...why r u doing all this...agar tu swara se pyar karta hai toh uski shaadi laksh se kyun kara rha hai

Sanskaar-bhai plzz...i don't love her...she is my frd

Adarsh-no she is not ur frd...she was ur wife n that too for 11 months

Sanskaar-woh sab plan tha...ragini ki sacchayi saamne lane ke liye hamne jhoothi shaadi ki thi...sacchayi saamne ayi aur wo chali gyi

Adarsh-wo shaadi jhoothi nhi thi...agar hoti na toh tum dono ko divorce nhi lena padta

Sanskaar-i mean legally fake nhi thi but

Adarsh-stop it sanskaar...just stop it tum kisey bewkoof bana rahe ho mujhe ya khud ko...listen accha hona acchi baat hai par bohot accha hona bewkoofi kehlati hai...pyar bohot kismat se milta hai...so value it n yeah one more thing ragini se shaadi karna laksh ka apna decision tha ab vo sahi tha ya galat ye uski problem hai...listen u both r my brothers aur main tum dono ko khush dekhna chahta hoon...laksh ne jo kiya wo uski marzi thi nobady forced him toh ab woh khud bhugtega but tu apne aap ko saza mat de...tune kuch nahi kiya...just think about it...hmm

(adarsh was about to leave)

Sanskaar-vo mujhse pyar nhi karti...n i guess its a proof that

Adarsh-did u ask her

Sanskaar-excuse me

Adarsh-yeah did u

Sankaar-no

Adarsh-then how do u know...think about it...kahin aisa na ho ki tu teen teen zindgiyaan barbaad kar dey...have a nice n thoughtful night

Precap-swarya engaegement but swasan r unhappy

Plzz leave ur comments n tell me should i continue


INDEX


Part 1 : above

Part 2 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4444189/swasan-ts-do-you-love-me-part-3-updated-on-page-no-10?pn=5

Part 3 : https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/swaragini/4444189/swasan-ts-do-you-love-me-part-3-updated-on-page-no-10?pn=10

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Ooolalala thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG amazing please please continue.
This is so good. This is amazing. I am waiting for next part

SwaSan❤️
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Sonal its awesome yaar..
you write well ..
I loved Shomi - Swara part..
And three brothers bonding..
And ofcourse finally Aadersh kuch toh kaam aya 🤣..
I read this only coz its written by you warna you know I love SwaLak only ❤️

But tbh it was awesome 😳
waiting for next part 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Saraa.

OMG amazing please please continue.

This is so good. This is amazing. I am waiting for next part

SwaSan❤️

thanks saraa
will update soon😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishi-

Sonal its awesome yaar..
you write well ..
I loved Shomi - Swara part..
And three brothers bonding..
And ofcourse finally Aadersh kuch toh kaam aya 🤣..
I read this only coz its written by you warna you know I love SwaLak only ❤️

But tbh it was awesome 😳
waiting for next part 😊

i know u r a swalak fan so m happy that u liked it😃
N yeah adarsh kuch toh kaam aya😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: SONAL30

i know u r a swalak fan so m happy that u liked it😃

N yeah adarsh kuch toh kaam aya😆

itna accha likha hai toh pasand toh aana hi tha 😃
BTW if m not wrong this Aadersh guy is NAUC wala Sumeet na? 🤣
SONAL30 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Vishi-

itna accha likha hai toh pasand toh aana hi tha 😃
BTW if m not wrong this Aadersh guy is NAUC wala Sumeet na? 🤣

yep the first sumit...postive wala
Second was mr hoo🤣
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it! plz do continue 👏
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: zoya6

Loved it! plz do continue 👏

thanks survi😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
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sonu sonu sonu :-D:-D:-D yar thank u for pm and may toh gussa hu tum say yar becoz itna chota story wo ek part update kiya bas am seriously waiting for next part and finally thank u for ff of swasan wo be super wala ff and ur so good as writer keep it up

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