Nairan FF: Journey of Love updtd ch19

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chandmeinchupi

@chandmeinchupi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#101

Hey everyone!

Tried to write a bit of a different update. I think I wanted more comedy but it didn't turn out so. None the less I hope u all like this update. I am not gonna be able to update in the next week but I promise when I get back I'll get a super double hot scene. 😉

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JennyD

@JennyD

Beginner

Posted: 8 years ago

#102

OMG..

AWESOME UPDATE.. LOVED IT TOTALLY

The fair idea was superb.. Also the scene..

And.. The restaurant scene was the cutesttt.. Drunk Naina was beyond adorable.. Love confession in front of public..which made Karan blush.. Aww..

Finally our Naina gave some sense to Idiot Karan.. 😆😉😉.." Sirf Ek din bacha hai..! "Haha.. Cute and bold.. ❤️

U write so beautifully.👏. I could imagine drunk Naina doing her antics..

Beautiful update as always.. Ur updates are worth waiting..

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nawshi

@nawshi

Explorer

Posted: 8 years ago

#103

Another superb update Rizka!!! Story is getting better and better, im absolutely loving it!! Loved drunk naina, she reminded me of simran aka kajol in DDLJ in zara sa jhoom loon mein. Looking forward to the next one!!😊

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chandmeinchupi

@chandmeinchupi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#104

Originally posted by: -Namita-
Another awesome update Rizka.

thanks so much

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chandmeinchupi

@chandmeinchupi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#105

Originally posted by: JennyD
OMG..
AWESOME UPDATE.. LOVED IT TOTALLY

The fair idea was superb.. Also the scene..

And.. The restaurant scene was the cutesttt.. Drunk Naina was beyond adorable.. Love confession in front of public..which made Karan blush.. Aww..

Finally our Naina gave some sense to Idiot Karan.. 😆😉😉.." Sirf Ek din bacha hai..! "Haha.. Cute and bold.. ❤️
U write so beautifully.👏. I could imagine drunk Naina doing her antics..
Beautiful update as always.. Ur updates are worth waiting..

Thanks so much. Yes I needed a shopping sequence and the fair worked. Glad u enjoyed drunk Naina!! Was so worried that I wouldn't portray it correctly. Hehe yes so now Karan will make the most of the last day.

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chandmeinchupi

@chandmeinchupi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#106

Originally posted by: nawshi
Another superb update Rizka!!! Story is getting better and better, im absolutely loving it!! Loved drunk naina, she reminded me of simran aka kajol in DDLJ in zara sa jhoom loon mein. Looking forward to the next one!!😊

Thanks yaar! So glad ur enjoying it. Don't miss the next update. I think it's gonna be worth the wait.

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dilwali

@dilwali

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Posted: 8 years ago

#107

thanku for uploading last night. It was as beautiful as it should be. I love the way you write dear.
I thought only Karan wants to do all naughty stuff but here Naina is equally naughty n her truth came out with one drink 😉 . The way she bought presents of all showed how much she loves his family n its beautiful n he too bought for her family. When husband cares for wife's family nothing more beautiful than that. So Nain unknowingly drinks n i loved its effects on her. Her playful n naughty side came out n it was a treat to read specially when she said to him she wanted more. Karan was today on shy mode. He must be thinking why i took slow approach 😉 . Amazing update n waiting for next one

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chandmeinchupi

@chandmeinchupi

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Posted: 8 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: dilwali
thanku for uploading last night. It was as beautiful as it should be. I love the way you write dear.
I thought only Karan wants to do all naughty stuff but here Naina is equally naughty n her truth came out with one drink 😉 . The way she bought presents of all showed how much she loves his family n its beautiful n he too bought for her family. When husband cares for wife's family nothing more beautiful than that. So Nain unknowingly drinks n i loved its effects on her. Her playful n naughty side came out n it was a treat to read specially when she said to him she wanted more. Karan was today on shy mode. He must be thinking why i took slow approach 😉 . Amazing update n waiting for next one

Thanks so much. Always a pleasure to wait for your comments. I'm so glad u didn't feel Naina was over the top. I know Naina is a shy girl but she is equally a strong one and I wanted her to show that today. Yes Karan on shy mode. Hopefully in my next update I'll show how he can really be 😉