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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Part Sahas
Suvreen childhood and past was really sad evil step mother should be thrown of cliff... at least she done one good thing got Yuvreen married... I wonder whats Yuvrajs past?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update sahas👏 continue soon👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow my bacha is back with a bang.👏
One more story from my fav writer and once again a master piece.
You know very well bacha how much i love your stories, i just don't find enough words to express my thoughts towards your writings.
Just keep up your good work 👍🏼
God Bless You 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sahas my girlie awessome story plz plz plz plz do continue it sooon 🤪 its damn interesting 👍🏼
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 2

She needed some motherly love that moment.She had no idea what to do. So she kept her face hidden and tried to calm down. Just then Sneha's voice broke into her ears.
"Suvi,main tumhe kuch batana chahti hun...mujhe lagta hai tumhe yeh sab pata hona chahiye."
Suvreen looked up as a little glint of pain reflected in her mother's eyes.She said-"Jee boliye na..."
Sneha moved ahead.
"Tumhe yeh sab jan na chahiye ki mera beta waisa kyun hai jaise woh hai."
Suvreen just nodded a little.
"Tumhe uske bare mein kuch toh pata hi hai...par who bachpan se aisa nahi tha.Uske saath jo hua hai who usse aaj tak bhula nahi paya.Woh sochta hai ki sabki jimmedar who khuud hai.Jab who bahot chota tha tab uske papa hum sabko chod kar chale gaye.Uske papa jab thhe tab hamesha usse yehi yaad dilate thhe ki ek Yuvraj hi sabke liye musibat hai.Tab toh Annie aur bhi choti thi.Fir bhi maine isko aur Annie ko bada kiya aur inn sabse durr rakha.Yuvraj kabhi nahi chahta tha ki hum dukh se rahe toh usne bahot mehnat kiya hai hum sab ko khush rakhne ke liye.Dheere dheere sab theek hota jaa raha tha aur Yuvraj bhi badalne laga."
Suvreen just sat and began to relate both hers n his story.She realized that both of them had led difficult life.She got herself out of her thoughts to listen.
Sneha continued-
"Phir jaanti ho kya...woh pyaar karma bhi seekh gaya tha par phir se uske saath taqdeer(destiny) khelne laga.Woh jisse pyaar karta tha woh bechaari ek accident mein hamesha hamesha ke liye chali gayi. Zindagi bhar usse kismat ne dhokaa diya hai"
By then both Suvreen's and Sneha's eyes were flooded.Sneha kept wondering what mistake her son did to have face all this an on the other side Suvreen thought what would have happened if that all happened to her?She was sure now his life was worse han hers.He faced more than she did.
Annie was also listening to their talk standing outside and tears overflowed from her eyes too.She hated that part of her life and hated to hear this story.She had seen the scene before eyes when her brother collapsed on the ground when he heard the doctor saying-"sorry.We could not save her". She wanted to bring a change in her brother but couldn't.So she tried to be as funny and chirpy as she could to atleast bring some smile and fits of laughter on his face.Annie again diverted her mind to listen as she knew what would be the next thing her mother will tell.
Both the ladies wiped their tears and Sneha said-"Tumhe pata hai main yeh sab tumhe kyun bata rahi hun...mujhe tum par vishwaas hai kit um yeh sab theek kardogi.Annie ko tumpar vishwaas hai.Woh dinbhaar kya kya pagalpanti karti rehti hai sirf uski bhai ko hasane ko.Usi se hi usse raahat milti hai.Ab bas tum hi ho jo usse jyada samajh sakte ho aur usse uske pichle zindagi se nikaal sakte ho...tum karoge na?"
Suvreen was confused.She thought about what to do.She replied-"Par main kaise...woh toh mujhe sirf ek dost maante hain aur main toh abhi... "
Sneha-"Suvi,dekho beta ye tum bhi jaante ho aur main bhi ki tum Yuvraj ke liye tum ek dost se badhkar ho.Par who yeh sabke liye fires tayar nahi hai.Usse dar lagta hai aur woh ye sab fir se sehna nahi chahta.Tum hi kaise bhi karke usse wapas Yuvraj bana sakte ho jo who asal mein hai.Ek maa ki maang hai yeh...mere liye karoge na?"
"Mere liye bhi bhabi"
Annie came inside and both looked at her.She said with a cracking voice-"Main who har kuch kar sakti hun bhaiya ko wapas smile karane ke liye par mujhse yeh hota hi nahi hai.Bhabi aap akele todi hai.Hum dono hai na aapke saath...bas aapki madat maang rahe hain.Please"
Suvreen could not decide what to do.Her one and only family had so much of expectations.She even did not know if she could do that that too in this state when they were standing poles apart.
"Main koshish karungi"she replied just for the sake of those who gave her a reason to smile.
Precap- Suvreen's reports came and the test gives a positive sign to her pregnancy.
Yuvraj comes to know about that.
Hello dear ones.Namastey!Hope you all are doing well.So as I promised I updated in 4 days.Actually in 3 days :P.Well the whole story is based on flashback and only in the epilogue the present will be told.Hope you all liked the update.Thank you everyone who commented and liked the update before.Actually from Monday I'll be more active on the forum replying to comments,posts and all.Right now its just the update that makes me online.Then I'll answer all those TOTY questions and MissMizzie's post. :P Just read the topic Jmiu will be leaving.Will miss her a lot 😭 😭 Hope she atleast reads my pms sometime when she can be online.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Sniff sob...😭😭
If all of you start to write such emotional stories..what will happen to me???😭😉😉

Wow..update in 3 days..not bad..👏⭐️ Sapil's gone on vacation kya..?😉😆
Yaa Jmiu left SGland..we're all in the depths of despair..😭About the update..It was fantabulously fantastic..👏👏👏
Now waiting for the next part..😃😃

Edited by mizzle22 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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sahas great wala update 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It was a fantastic update. Jimu ka naam sunte hi ajkal ankhein bhar jati h. I mis her loads. She wnt cum online on IF much. I told her tab woh online aake post ki.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wonderful Part Sahas
very nicely written
I really want to know Yuvrajs past so much suspense
looking forward to see Yuvi entry
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Edited by Anam Ali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow bacha once again a fab update 👏
loved every bit of it 👍🏼
cont soon 😊

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