Yuvreen SS- Ray of Hope (Last part and epilouge updated)

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Yuvreen SS- Ray of Hope

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She was restless.She had been feeling unwell and different since a few days and now when her mother-in-law had called the doctor she was too worried about herself.Finally the doctor came with a smile in her face.Suvreen could not smile back.She was too worried.The doctor sat beside her and started to check her and was asking questions about the symptoms and how she was feeling these days.After a few minutes of checking and questioning she stood up and smiled at the worried facesof the kind-faced lady and a young pretty girl standing at the other sid eof the bed.She said- "Chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai.She fine.Actually there's a good news Snehaji.Aapki bahu aapko abhi daadi banana walli hai.I tink she's pregnant.Main kaafi sure hun par fir bhi aap ek baar test karlijiye."

Both the faces turned extremely happy hearing the news.The young girl even started shouting-"OMG bhabhi...hamare ghar ko ek naya member aayega.Congratulations!" and saying so she hugged her bhabi.

Suvreen,she never got happiness in her life.All those little moments of happiness in her life she got after coming to the new house,after getting married to Yuvraj'. Still her life was never perfect.She worked hard to change it but her fate didn't help her anyway.Everything was going on somewhat well by her caring mother-in-law,funny yet loving sister-in-law and a friend-like husband. They were all very close to her heart. Though hers and Yuvraj's relationship never went beyond friendship they still lived like the best friends and Suvreen was happy with that. But now what happened?Her biggest fear came true.Now how would she face him and tell him that she had become the woman who is bearing her husband's baby!

What will happen? What is the other side of the story? All questions will be answered in the upcoming parts of the SS and don't worry I'll update 1 part every 4 days.That's fast right :P Atlest its fast for Sahas and this time I'll not break my promise! :)

Characters

1.Suvreen Singh-A simple girl who faced and is facing too many hurdles in life.

2.Yuvraj Singh-Suvreen's husband.He is afraid as his past was always harsh to him.He has never come out of his insecurities.

3.Annie-Yuvrej's bubbly and caring sister.

4.Sneha-Yuvraj's and Annie's mother.Caring lady and loves her family.

Well sabhi toh show se hi hain.Only Sneha nahi hai so jisko imagine karna chahte ho as Sneha karlo. :P

This is a chota sa story which will be only of 3-4 parts not more.I had planned to write it as OS but it would be to lengthy as an OS.So decided to make it an SS. :) Hope you all like it. :)


INDEX

1. Part 1-Page 1

2. Part 2-Page 2

3. Part 3-Page 3

4. Part 4-Page 8

5. Part 5-Page 10

6. Part 6-Page 12

7. Part 7-Page 13

8. Epilouge - Page 14

Edited by SahasYuvreenian - 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Firstly Welcome Back Sahas🤗 so nice to see you on forum
Another Story from you all
Great idea very interesting
Glad you will update regularly also dont forget ur other stories too do update when ur free
Edited by Anam Ali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Yay sissy back. 🤗 Chakde phatde! [:D/] Osum idea sahas 👏 Looking forward. Update sum. Always luv to read ur stories.
Edited by McSteamy - 11 years ago
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Part 1

She sat on the couch and looked out of the window.She rested her back on the recliner and enjoyed the soft breeze againse her face.The thick,black clouds had covered the sky not raining yet.She closed her eyes while her thoughts drifted back to the events of the previous days. These days she had been living a different life.She rested her soft palm on her stomach and looked out of the window.
~Flashback~
She had been crying thinking about her life.She didn't want to live anymore.Her life had given her nothing except sadness and when there was a ray of hope shining that ray was again covered by the dark clouds.That ray was nowhere to be seen now.There were only thick black clouds pondering over her giving her no way to get out of all this.She had struggled all her life and was still struggling now too. Her mother left her alone in this world when she was too young.She didn not even remember her mother's face.Her father remarried and got a step-mother for her but she wasn't one to be called mother.She had made her life hell right from her childhood but still she said nothing or complained anything to god.She had believed that one day her day will come as they say- Every dog has its day. She was waiting for that fine day till now.
A few years latter when her father died too she became the unpaid servant of her step mother.The only thing that her strp-mother did for her was sending her to school and college for education.Suvreen was still grateful to her for doing that atleast.Just after the completion of secondary studies she wanted to marry her off of release the burden on her head.After a lot of persuading and pleading Suvreen could take two year for her fashion course. Just after she graduated from the college she wasn't allowed to study higher or apply for any internship.
The life changed a little better after she got married.Her mother-in-law and her sister-in-law gave her all the love and happiness. Her husband had never been a husband rather he was always a great friend for her due to his own insecurities.A lot had happened in his life which she didn't know but still she knew some bits of his past.She never was unhappy with this family.They all had become very close to her and she could find her happiness within them only.
She had been showing out some different symptoms and changes so her Mamma' got worried and called the doctor to check if everything was fine with her. Suvreen was restless. Finally the doctor came with a smile in her face.Suvreen could not smile back.She was too worried.The doctor sat beside her and started to check her and was asking questions about the symptoms and how she was feeling these days.After a few minutes of checking and questioning she stood up and smiled at the worried facesof the kind-faced lady and a young pretty girl standing at the other sid eof the bed.She said- "Chinta karne ki koi baat nahi hai.She fine.Actually there's a good news Snehaji.Aapki bahu aapko abhi daadi banana walli hai.I think she's pregnant.Main kaafi sure hun par fir bhi aap ek baar test karlijiye."
Both the faces turned extremely happy hearing the news.The young girl even started shouting-"OMG bhabhi...hamare ghar ko ek naya member aayega.Congratulations!" and saying so she hugged her bhabi.
Her world came crashing down when she heard that statement-" I think she's pregnant.".Her biggest worry came true.Her eyes filled with tears and threatened to fall off at any moment.She lifted her eyes to see the happiness in her mamma and dear Annie's face.She dropped her eyes immediately as Annie hugged her to hide her tears.The doctor went off and Sneha suddenly noticed the fallen face of Suvreen.She immediately realized what Suvren was thinking.She told Annie to go outside and leave them alone for a moment.Then Sneha lovingly hugged Suvreen as Suvreen started sobbing on her mother's shoulder.Sneha patted her to sooth her down and said-"Kya hua beta..."
Suvreen broke the hug and looked at her with teary eyes.
"Mamma main yeh nahi kar sakti.Woh mujhe ek patni ki rup kabhi nahi apnayenge aur naa hi iss bachhe ko"
She started breaking down and let her tears flow continuously.Sneha hugged her again to calm her.She patted her back and said-"Sab theek hojayega beta.Tum himmat mat haaro."
Precap-Yuvraj's story of his past
Ok sorry for the small update but the I'll be updating again soon.Just 4 days.So I don't think its an injustice :P So how was it?Am I going well or it's a full gadha wala script?Please apna comments de do. :) And I hope ki Missmizzie if you are reading this now then you are being able to understand all those hindi dailouges. :P :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
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@Didu-Its fyn didu :) 🤗

@sassy-I am glad ki tumhe acha laga :D le huggie 🤗

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcoem back Sahas... awesome hai re chakde phatte ...

continue soon..its different

Res Part On ebhi aa gay ..let me read that 😉
Edited by ShivinkiJas - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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aree it is fabulous sahas...
great work and script is awesome...

oye yahan bhi yuvi ka past... ahaa lagta hai hum dono ko uske past se bahut pyaar hai 😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Fantabulous! The story sounds interesting... Eagerly waiting for the next part! Do continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Well..well..someone has come back..that too with a surprise..a SMASHING surprise..👏⭐️
Loved it prncess..very different concept..😊
Yuvreen married already..😃 and Ya..Sneha can be Sneha..
The first image I had was of Ranvi's mom in Veera..played by Sneha Wagh..😊

Wow..promises n all..nice..👏 lets see if you keep it..😉
At least you'll come online for updatin..😛😆
And We wont have to wait long for updates..😃😃

Superb..CONTINUE SOON..⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Oh..and I'm not sooo weak in Hindi..he he..😛😛
I'd actually learnt it in school..okay TRIED to learn..😆😆
But our Hindi teacher was really funny..with a bald head and odd way of speaking..so we were more interested in copying him after class than what he was teaching..😆😛
Hence the result..horrible hindi..😭😆😆

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