|| Yuvreen SS:Life can be more beautiful|| Part 7 updated on pg 26 - Page 3

Originally posted by: Afrin_RaqBhi

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Yaar!!! Tune yeh Post ko aise hi like kardiya? not waiting for me to unres 😒

No problem 😉 Now u will suffer! Punishment for you 😛😆

Read my long Comment Now! 🤣😉

First of All - Cant believe its your 1st story!! 😲😲😲 Its like... Like... wht to say!!! Its Awesome!!! Jhakaas!!! 👏👏 I Never saw Suvreen Guggal 😳 So ur writing an different story so surely i will read & give long comments 😃 & if u dont PM Me then 😈 😡 😡 😆😉 Its written Perfectly!!!& u know wht i love dark stories like the one you wrote 😳 Cant wait for next update 😊 If u dont update soon then 😡😆 I Will give chocolates to u , while i hate chocolates 😆😳 Im an writer & an reader but i never thought such an beautiful storyline!! Storyline is awesome! & I DONT KNOW ABOUT The casts of SG So do explain about them a bit to me ☺️ Even i will try to write an story on SG Couple if i can 😃😆 😉Its aweosme!! Do PM Me 😊 Hope ur punishment i gave is fulfilled 😛

P.S - When will we get an AvRaj ff 😛😉

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With lots of Roses & love,

Afrin

Originally posted by: krupaa

Very Nice Start Jas 👏👏👏

Loved your way of writing

the ss is of yuvreen so defo the guy is yuvi and girl is suvi 😃

why u and ani are behind Heer 😆 always pairing her with yuvi or ranvi . Whats so special in this name.

In my SS Heer is yuvi's neice its so complicated 😕

Anyways do continue soon

once again a very nice job keep it up 👍🏼

Originally posted by: cutekk

😆😊very nice di...i like the concept.. i think that girl in the cafe was suvreen n guy has to be our yuvraj... 😉 just a wild guess from me.. 😆

Originally posted by: LASmirti

Nice one... Do continue soon! Loved the beginning!

Originally posted by: ..Breeze..

That's a great start di! Continue soon :)

Originally posted by: SSimra

Well it was awesome
I am kinda new to this forum
Plzz pm me the next time you update

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

OMG OMG Jas you wrote the SS finally so happy🥳

Im gna beat u with sandal honestly you can write i loved it so much suspense very nice way to start the story loved the way u included flashbacks also very nicely done.. both people have to be Yuvreen am I right? looking forward to the next part I best get update quickly or else you know exactly what I will do🤣😆 JasEndar🤣

Guys this is the only way Jas listen when I blackmail her about her date with Birender in TRT😆

I agree you should write more on Yuvreen and AvRaj...you can write no need to be scared everyone will appreciate your work writing is creative work and u can do it 😃

I'm very happy you posted the the SS now you best be regular in updates or else you know consequences.😆🤣. what is this Jimu you are not taking Didu side?😭

Originally posted by: tina_sre

Congo Jas on ur 1st story👏
rite now in office n I've just started my work...wil defo. read n comment as m super excited


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Wow! Nice SS Jas👏👏👏...very beautifully written I got so engrossed in reading dat wen it ended I wz lyk Oh no...can't wait 4 d update...plez. do update soon...aagay kya hoga yeh jane ke liye m super excited

Wel, d guy is none other den Yuvi...rite Jas?

Originally posted by: minu_G

Very nice Jas di👏
Loved the first part..concept is good👍🏼
Do cont. soon😊

Originally posted by: .LiveLaughLove.

Awesome start. loved it. please continue soon. thanks for the pm. gud luck! 😃