|| Yuvreen SS:Life can be more beautiful|| Part 7 updated on pg 26

Page

Next Last

jaskiran kaur

@AnkitGuptaKiAC

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
The Author of this post have chosen to restrict the content of this Post to members only.

Quote

Frequent Posters

JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

congratulations jdi 4 donning d writers hat 1st 👍🏼
sorry no tomatoes or eggs bt sweets n chocolates n garland 4 u 👏🤗

boy must b yuvi girl suvi ?
waiting to find out 4m ur nxt update impatiently..its very nice n am sure wd b interesting 😊

Edited by JustMySelf - 11 years ago

Quote

Looks like you are new here. Register for free, learn and contribute.

mizzle22

@mizzle22

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

Awesome Shivinkijas di..😉👏

Thank you so much for writing a story..🤗and thanks to Ani di for giving you the right type of encouragement..😉 poor Birender was waiting for you..🤣

Hmm..I think the guy is Yuvraj but not sure..didn't get the Heer part..😕There's only one way to find out..and that is wait for your next update..😃😃

Continue soon..😊

Edited by mizzle22 - 11 years ago

Quote

Afrin

@Afrin_RaqBhi

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

Res

Unres

-------------------------------

Yaar!!! Tune yeh Post ko aise hi like kardiya? not waiting for me to unres 😒

No problem 😉 Now u will suffer! Punishment for you 😛😆

Read my long Comment Now! 🤣😉

First of All - Cant believe its your 1st story!! 😲😲😲 Its like... Like... wht to say!!! Its Awesome!!! Jhakaas!!! 👏👏 I Never saw Suvreen Guggal 😳 So ur writing an different story so surely i will read & give long comments 😃 & if u dont PM Me then 😈 😡 😡 😆😉 Its written Perfectly!!!& u know wht i love dark stories like the one you wrote 😳 Cant wait for next update 😊 If u dont update soon then 😡😆 I Will give chocolates to u , while i hate chocolates 😆😳 Im an writer & an reader but i never thought such an beautiful storyline!! Storyline is awesome! & I DONT KNOW ABOUT The casts of SG So do explain about them a bit to me ☺️ Even i will try to write an story on SG Couple if i can 😃😆 😉Its aweosme!! Do PM Me 😊 Hope ur punishment i gave is fulfilled 😛

P.S - When will we get an AvRaj ff 😛😉

-----------------------

With lots of Roses & love,

Afrin

Edited by Afrin_RaqBhi - 11 years ago

Quote

jaskiran kaur

@AnkitGuptaKiAC

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JustMySelf
congratulations jdi 4 donning d writers hat 1st 👍🏼
sorry no tomatoes or eggs bt sweets n chocolates n garland 4 u 👏🤗

boy must b yuvi girl suvi ?
waiting to find out 4m ur nxt update impatiently..its very nice n am sure wd b interesting 😊

aww... so sweet Jimu U lyked it ..my darling behna 🤗

Thanku for liking it,... i was so scared of writing still dun know wt to write in next chappy 😆

Finally ek behna se to chocos and garlands and lets wt i gonna get from others 😉

Awww U will get to know in next chappy if its Yuvi and Suvi or not 😊

ya i will try to make it good

Thanku once again for liking...🤗

Ek baat batau...I wrote this one just to escape going date with Birendra in TRT 🤣
Anam , manasi dekho dekho main bach gayyi...

Jimu inhone ne mujhe dhamki di for that Date waala thing 😉😆

Quote

krupaa

@krupaa

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Very Nice Start Jas 👏👏👏

Loved your way of writing

the ss is of yuvreen so defo the guy is yuvi and girl is suvi 😃

why u and ani are behind Heer 😆 always pairing her with yuvi or ranvi . Whats so special in this name.

In my SS Heer is yuvi's neice its so complicated 😕

Anyways do continue soon

once again a very nice job keep it up 👍🏼

Edited by krupaa - 11 years ago

Quote

JustMySelf

@JustMySelf

Rocker

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ShivinkiJas

aww... so sweet Jimu U lyked it ..my darling behna 🤗

Thanku for liking it,... i was so scared of writing still dun know wt to write in next chappy 😆

Finally ek behna se to chocos and garlands and lets wt i gonna get from others 😉

Awww U will get to know in next chappy if its Yuvi and Suvi or not 😊

ya i will try to make it good

Thanku once again for liking...🤗

Ek baat batau...I wrote this one just to escape going date with Birendra in TRT 🤣
Anam , manasi dekho dekho main bach gayyi...

Jimu inhone ne mujhe dhamki di for that Date waala thing 😉😆

🤣

dnt worry jdi till i am iin trt u wnt hv 2 go on date with that biru 😉..i wd kick that biru out 😆

1st time its scary i know..wen i started writing i was very scared bt wen u guys said u liked i felt better so dnt worry am sure every1 wd appreciate n encourage u to write more.🤗update wen u gt time 😊

Quote

jaskiran kaur

@AnkitGuptaKiAC

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: JustMySelf

🤣

dnt worry jdi till i am iin trt u wnt hv 2 go on date with that biru 😉..i wd kick that biru out 😆

1st time its scary i know..wen i started writing i was very scared bt wen u guys said u liked i felt better so dnt worry am sure every1 wd appreciate n encourage u to write more.🤗update wen u gt time 😊

Aree ya rite when Jimu is there what tO Fear ...😉😆
Jimu pehel hi uss biru ko bahar phenk do... telling ur Veerji 😆

Yup its scary to write first tym..i was saying for this SS sice 2 months but i wasnot having courage to write and pata hi nahi tha kahan se start karoon.
Yupp all liking it...i m so happy...

so sweet of u for motivating me 🤗
Will try to give next update tomm. 😉

U too write more now as u are back
😆

Quote

kajal khatri

@cutekk

Explorer

Posted: 11 years ago

😆😊very nice di...i like the concept.. i think that girl in the cafe was suvreen n guy has to be our yuvraj... 😉 just a wild guess from me.. 😆

Quote

771047

Hibernated

Posted: 11 years ago

#10

Sorry I'm new here and dunno about the characters etc... but JAS your story is awesome!!! please continue and keep it up considering its your First work!!!

Just One Word.. WOW!!! you write really surprising and gripping stories!!! Plz. make one for our AvRaj too!! 😉