FOREVER LOVE :) [FF]~CHAPTER 5 UPDATED! - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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its me again!
wow! the update was awwwesum!
thanx for the Double-dose! how the story jusss got changed!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: angel_anisha

its me again!

wow! the update was awwwesum!
thanx for the Double-dose! how the story jusss got changed!


Thanks for the compliment buddy
Glad u like it
smiles :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#23
Thats a double treat,yoohooo i just love it,im really eager to know what happens when yuvreen will regain her memory back...this FF is surely becoming one of my favourite,you just rock mia...continue soon and thank you for the pm and two amazing update🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is really very good and interesting .Thanks for the double update.I really like reading your ff.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#25
Amazing Mia!...totally love suvreen's transformation into the cute and fun-loving young girl!!😆 Also really liked the flashback of Yuvreen friendship...esp reading it today, felt like a cool coincidence with today's epi when suvi says "you're my best friend (to yuvi), don't take my best friend away!"😕
You have a great way of holding your reader (eg, writing event out of order like the crash explaination)...Keep Writing!👍🏼

...and thanks for the PM😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow..!!dis is an awsm FF...👏
m in luv wid it..!!!! ⭐️
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Posted: 12 years ago
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...CHAPTER 4: CRAZY HIM?...
Suvreen opened her eyes and she realize that she's in her room. Suvreen wake up from her bed and turn to her right side where she found Yuvraj is still sleeping soundly.
"Did he carry me to the room?" Suvreen scratches her head "Who cares!" She jump off the bed and rushed to the bathroom.
Around 10 a.m Yuvraj woke up finding Suvreen was not in the room. He walk to the hall after getting ready and Suvreen is still not around.
"Where is she?" Yuvraj mumbles himself.
Yuvraj search for Suvreen everywhere in the house when he finally saw Suvreen sitting at the garden with a book in her hands and her I-pod turned on.Yuvraj shook his head and secretly walk towards Suvreen.
"BOO!" 😲Yuvraj shouted from behind after pulling Suvreen's earphones
caused Suvreen to jumped off the garden swing.
"WHAT THE! YOU!ARE YOU TRYING TO KILL ME!" Suvreen said while giving Yuvraj an evil stare.😡
"So..Sorry" Yuvraj said controlling his laughter
"Are you trying to APOLOGISE!?" Suvreen said in a serious tone "If u are...Your APOLOGY IS NOT ACCEPTED!"
Yuvraj realise that Suvreen was still mad at him afer what happened last night. He wanted to apologise to Suvreen again when Suvreen walk away from him.
"Suvreen wait" Yuvraj said
Suvreen tries to walk away pretending as if she never heard him calling.
Yuvraj walk towards to Suvreen and reached for her hand.
"Suvreen..." Yuvraj said.
Suvreen stood without any reaction
"Suvi...Say something"Yuvraj plead
"Fine...I HATE YOU!" Suvreen said angrily...
Yuvraj let go off Suvreen hand's and pulled her by her waist. They were closed enough that their nose touched and their lips are few centimetres away from each other that he could feel Suvreen hot breath.
Yuvraj could feel Suvreen's heart beating fast against his chest and he admits to himself that he is feeling the same way especially when their eyes met.❤️
Yuvi: "What did you say?"
Suvi: "I...I..Ha..te"
Before Suvreen could finish her sentences Yuvraj move his face closer making Suvreen more nervous...
Suvi: "What...what are you trying to do? Don't you dare come closer to me!"
Yuvi let out a smirk and move closer to Suvreen ear.
Yuvi: "Another words from your smart mouth, I'll kiss you"😲☺️😆
Suvreen widen her eyes
Suvi: "What!? Don't you dare Yuvraj Singh Khurrana!"
Yuvi: "Try me"He smirked "after all you are my wife" He let go off suvreen waist.
Suvreen ran away from Yuvraj."You're crazy!" She shouted before entering the house.
After Suvreen went in,Yuvraj place both his hand to his heart.❤️
"I'll definitely go crazy if this happen again"
After a while Yuvraj drove to his office while Suvreen kept on locking herself in the room after the incident with Yuvraj.
YUVRAJ OFFICE (EVENING)
Yuvraj was doing his job when the thoughts of Suvreen came up in his head.He chuckled recalling Suvreen nervous face and her last word before running into the house.
"I'm crazy huh?" He smirked
Suddenly a thoughts came up in his mind.He took out his cell phone and called Suvreen.
Suvi: "Hello"
Yuvi: "Its me"
Suvi: "What do you want?"
Yuvi: "Come by my office...i need your help on something"
Suvi: "Not interested"
Yuvi: "I'm not asking your opinion...just be here"
Suvi: "Nopp"
Yuvi: "As u wish princess..."Suvreen smiled "before i hang up...there's something i need to tell you"
Suvi: "What?"
Yuvi: "Your I-pad is with me...and i wouldn't mind digging secrets out of it" Suvreen smiles fade.
Suvi: "Wait...wait...i'll come"
Yuvi: "Be here soon princess...bye" Yuvraj hung up.
"ARGHHH!!!!HE'S CRAZY!!!!!!" Suvreen shouted in her room.
AFTER AN HOUR
Knock knock...
Yuvi: "Come in" Yuvi said but his eyes is still focusing on his laptop.
Suvreen walk in the room
Suvi: "Why do you need me here?"
Yuvraj turn to look at Suvreen
Yuvi: "Hello princess" He smirked "You are good at drawing right?"
Suvi: "Drawing...urmmm...just the simple ones"
Yuvi: "That will do...i need you to draw something nice...a scenery maybe...for my office"
Suvi's mindthought: "How am I supposed to draw without any materials?"
As if he could read her mind Yuvraj pointed to the coffee table in his office "All the drawing materials you need is on the table"
Suvreen walk towards the coffee table and start drawing...Suvreen would steal a glance towards Yuvi while drawing and most of the time he'll concentrate on his laptop.
After a few hours "DONE!Yaay!"
Yuvi: "Your I-Pad is in that drawer"
Suvi: "Thank you MASTER" Suvi said sarcasticly
Suvreen walk out of Yuvraj office but yuvraj was too busy that he ignored her.After a while Suvreen walk back into the room with to mugs in her hands.
Suvi: "Coffee" She place one of the mug on Yuvraj desk.
Yuvraj turn to look at Suvreen.
Yuvi: "Did you mix something in that coffee?"
Suvi: "What the! I didn't mix anything in it!" she sighed "Fine...don't drink it"
Suvreen trying to take back the mug she placed on the desk.
Yuvi: "NO...I'll drink it"
Suvreen shook her head and walk towards the couch in Yuvraj's office.
Yuvraj smiled looking at Suvreen and he took a sip of the coffee she made before he continues with his job.
YUVRAJ'S OFFICE (NIGHT)
Its already 7.30 pm and Yuvraj's has just finished his work. He turn to look at Suvreen when he found Suvreen was fast asleep on the couch. He walks closer and took the drawing that she made. It was beautiful; A scenery of a beach. Then his gaze fell on another piece of paper on the table. He took the paper and flip it; It was a sketch of him. It was so detail as if her eyes was copying all the detail and her fingers print it out.. "You know me more than I could know about myself...Suvi"
He smiled and kneel to her. This is the first time he looks at Suvreen's face closely, his eyes were roaming to every parts of her face. He just realise that he knew less about Suvreen. His eyes sudenly stops at Suvreen's lips..Her lips look so delicate and it was attracting him...Yuvraj stood up and walk out of his office before he loses control of himself.
"What is happening to me?"
SUVREEN P.O.V
Suvreen opened her eyes and she found herself sleeping on the office couch.
"Damn! I fell asleep!"
Suvreen take a look on the wall clock
"Its almost 8"She closed her mouth with both her hand "For how many hours have I stayed here? and where is he?"
Suddenly she heard someone knocked the door
Knock knock.
Suvi: "Come in"
A man walk into the office.Appearance wise the man look like a middle aged corporate man.
"I Thought this is Yuvraj's office" the man said
Suvi: "It is" she smiled
"I'm David Jay from DJ Group of company" The man gave his hand
"Hello sir" Suvi hesitantly shake his hand." Why don't you have a seat sir...He'll be here soon"
DJ: "Thank you beautiful" He settle himself at the couch
Suvreen was concentrating more on the magazine on the table to hide the awkwardness that she doesn't realize DJ was staring at her the whole time
DJ: "So beautiful...what's your name?"
Suvi: "Owh i'm so sorry Sir...I'm Suvreen"
DJ: "The name is as beautiful as the one using it" He let out a smile
Suvi: "Thank you Sir"
DJ: "Drop that Sir beautiful...call me DJ...sounds closer"
Suvreen let out an awkward smile
Suvi's mindthought: "This DJ turns out to be a Don Juan...he's trying to flirt with me...If he's not Yuvraj's client...I'll surely give him a punch on his face!"
Yuvraj entered the office...
Yuvi: "DJ...I'm sorry for the delay"
DJ: "Its okay...i just arrived"
Yuvi: "Glad to hear that"
DJ: "Thanks to the beautiful lady for accompanying me" He pointed to Suvreen
Yuvi: "Owh...you've met her...She's"
DJ: "Suvreen.."he smiled "Yuvraj...is he your secretary?"
Yuvi: "No she's not"
DJ: "Then?"
Yuvi: "She's...ermmm"Yuvraj hesistating "She's my..."
Suvreen could see that Yuvraj was hesitating to tell DJ about their relation which affects her a little..
"I'm his cousin" Suvreen said emotionless
Yuvraj look at Suvreen in shocked.
DJ: "Owh..cousin huh...great"
Suvi: "I'll make a move now...its late"
DJ: "Sure...hope we will meet again"
Suvreen gave out a light smile and leave the room without saying anything to Yuvraj which made Yuvraj felt guilty.
On her way home...Suvreen kept recalling the moment when Yuvraj was hesitating to introduce her as his wife...
"Am I really his wife?"
She recalls the days after she was discharged from the ward..Besides sharing a bed with her..he never touched her and he never once said that he love her.
"I don't think we are married because of love"

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Edited by vidya.G - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#28
Great Part Vidya
Yuvi should of said Suvi his wife
Cont Soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#29
Thanks for the lovely update ,was waiting to read it.Its really very good.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#30
A really good update. Thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Looking forward o the next update... Keep it Up!!

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