YuvReen OS : I Miss You Part 7-A update pg.14

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey :) This is the first tym that im writing something..Hope you all like it :) Dont mind the grammatical errors please as i wrote in a hurry


She was lying on her bed..thinking of him and his unexplained absence..Maybe he understood her longingness unknowingly..her phone beeped wid his msg..Glowing wid happiness she opened it ..It read : " Topper 😊 "

Instantly she replied :

"Tum ???? Aaj me yaad aayi huu 😡"

She was angry at him..indeed very angry..she had every right to be because he didn't msg her for the past one week and it bothered her..She didn't knew why but it bothered her a lot.

He didn't expect that she would be angry..all he thought was he was just one of her friends and his absence wouldn't bother her much. Her reply surprised him pleasantly..wid a smile on his face he replied

" Yaad toh tumaari roj aati thi topper ;😉 "

She blushed seeing the reply..but she decided she wouldn't give in easily..

Suvreen : " Ha woh toh dikh raha hey 😡 "

Yuvi : Naraaz ho ? 😭

Suvreen : BAHUT !!

Yuvi : Sorrryy.. 😔pata hey tum pehli ho jisko mein ne sorry bola hey

Suvreen : Itni akdu jo ho 😛

Yuvi : Accha ! Mein akdu ?

Suvreen : Ofcourse tum hi 😛 Clge ke starting mein kitna ladte the mu

Yuvi : Tum kam thi kya madam 😛 Chal chodo..ek baat bolu..I MISSED YOU TOPPER !!

just a sec b4 sending the msg he realized what he was gonna say. Quickly he cancelld the msg..His fingers wer doing lil tap dance on the keypad as he didn't know what to say..could he say her that he missd her..How would she react ?? Breaking him out of his thoughts was her msg saying

" Sorry baba mein toh majaak karahithi..ye batao ki inte din kaha gaayab hogaye ho ? Ek msg ya call bhi nahi..sab theek hai naa ??? "

She was worried for him..it was evident and it made him happy..happy in the true sense 😃

To assur her he said " Haa sab theek hai topper.."

In response to that she typed what was in her head " Toh phir mujhse itne dinosey baat kyun nai ki ? 😔"

He found that cute..actually super cute..To tease her he replied " Kyun miss kiya mujhe ? 😉"

" Haa bahut !!! " That was an honest confession..never did he expect that..not even in his wildest dreams that his topper would miss him and on top of it would confess him that'he felt special..he felt like he was important to her as much as she was to him. He couldn't stop beaming..Certainly this was the best day of his life 😳 ⭐️

It striked her then after sending her msg..the gravity of what she had sent. Did she miss him ?? Alot answrd her heart and honestly that was what she had sent . She was afraid.. not abt how he would react..bt upon realizing that she missed him..indeed missed him very terribly..!!

This was the starting of what could possibly be the world's sweetest love story 😳


Index :

Part 2 - Pg.3

Part 3 - Pg.4

Part 4 : Pg.8

Part 5 : Pg.11

Part 6 : Pg.13

Part 7-A : Pg.14

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Ahw! That was a super cute OS,
it was like really how they are.
Both are impulsive, but Yuvraj thinks
a little before he does things and Suvreen
just listens to her heart, and thinks after
her deeds! Really cute, you should
definitely write more!
Will you PM me when you do so?
Edited by BrunoMars - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ BrunoMars - Thnkuuu :) To be frank i didnt write it actually on the basis of how they actually are..texting and waiitng for sum1's text is sumthing we all do..i just wantd to c dat wid Yuvreen so wrote it..luckily it matchd wid dem :) If i write another OS ill surely PM u bt im nt sure bcz it all depends on sumthng striking me..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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It's Awesome...
Liked it...
Different one... Wow... Their feelings through Mesgs.. That's Super cute..

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awww taht was such a cute one!! LiKED it a lot!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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⭐️Hey :) This is the first tym that im writing something..Hope you all like it :) Dont mind the grammatical errors please as i wrote in a hurry

She was lying on her bed..thinking of him and his unexplained absence..Maybe he understood her longingness unknowingly..her phone beeped wid his msg..Glowing wid happiness she opened it ..It read : " Topper 😊 "

Instantly she replied :

"Tum ???? Aaj me yaad aayi huu 😡"

She was angry at him..indeed very angry..she had every right to be because he didn't msg her for the past one week and it bothered her..She didn't knew why but it bothered her a lot.

He didn't expect that she would be angry..all he thought was he was just one of her friends and his absence wouldn't bother her much. Her reply surprised him pleasantly..wid a smile on his face he replied

" Yaad toh tumaari roj aati thi topper ;😉 "

She blushed seeing the reply..but she decided she wouldn't give in easily..

Suvreen : " Ha woh toh dikh raha hey 😡 "

Yuvi : Naraaz ho ? 😭

Suvreen : BAHUT !!

Yuvi : Sorrryy.. 😔pata hey tum pehli ho jisko mein ne sorry bola hey

Suvreen : Itni akdu jo ho 😛

Yuvi : Accha ! Mein akdu ?

Suvreen : Ofcourse tum hi 😛 Clge ke starting mein kitna ladte the mu

Yuvi : Tum kam thi kya madam 😛 Chal chodo..ek baat bolu..I MISSED YOU TOPPER !!

just a sec b4 sending the msg he realized what he was gonna say. Quickly he cancelld the msg..His fingers wer doing lil tap dance on the keypad as he didn't know what to say..could he say her that he missd her..How would she react ?? Breaking him out of his thoughts was her msg saying

" Sorry baba mein toh majaak karahithi..ye batao ki inte din kaha gaayab hogaye ho ? Ek msg ya call bhi nahi..sab theek hai naa ??? "

She was worried for him..it was evident and it made him happy..happy in the true sense 😃

To assur her he said " Haa sab theek hai topper.."

In response to that she typed what was in her head " Toh phir mujhse itne dinosey baat kyun nai ki ? 😔"

He found that cute..actually super cute..To tease her he replied " Kyun miss kiya mujhe ? 😉"

" Haa bahut !!! " That was an honest confession..never did he expect that..not even in his wildest dreams that his topper would miss him and on top of it would confess him that'he felt special..he felt like he was important to her as much as she was to him. He couldn't stop beaming..Certainly this was the best day of his life 😳 ⭐️

It striked her then after sending her msg..the gravity of what she had sent. Did she miss him ?? Alot answrd her heart and honestly that was what she had sent . She was afraid.. not abt how he would react..bt upon realizing that she missed him..indeed missed him very terribly..!!

This was the starting of what could possibly be the world's sweetest love story 😳

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thank you all for such sweet comments :) I jus posted the edited version because i felt they are some mistakes in the original one
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice one do continue👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Dia121 - Will try to :) im clueless about what to write next so..
Edited by medhahps - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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welll,u wrote so well surely if u think u will get more brilliant ideas..after all one who writes thinks great😊

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