YuvReen OS : I Miss You Part 7-A update pg.14 - Page 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
#41
what!!!!!!!
cliffhanger!
can't wait what suvi says!!!!!
this is the most adorable thing that I have ever read!
keep up the amazing work and update soon!
plz pm when you update!😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ dia121 - Thanku :)
@ LoveAngel21 - thanku :) For sure ill PM u
@ vaidehi1995 - Aww..Thanku :) Im so happy that u all r liking it so much..Ill PM you
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Posted: 13 years ago
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I have run out of ideas as to how to continue it..So i want little help from you guys..Can u please tell me how u want me to take the story forward..Please do reply..Will be waiting for ur ideas..Then i can update soon..:)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear.. try taking it to the YuvReen confession side.. after few updates.. for now im liking the confusion they both hav for each other.. they dunno wat the other mi8 think.. keep putting in sum more kinda stuffs like tht which may lead them to think the other doesnt like him/her & at the end they end up confessing in tention or anxiety for each other..😉

P.S. dnt take my idiotic ideas, may lead to disaster in ur FF..🤣
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ Jyo_Ksg - Wow :) Your idea sounds too good..Will try to do something lyk dat..Thankuu :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#46

" If dreams weren't dreams & dreams came true i wouldn't be here I would be with u….Distance is one thing dat keeps us apart.

But ull always remain in my heart...Good morning 😊 "

Nearly after an hour she realized that he would be waiting for her reply….But then she couldn't come up wid what to say..after much thinking she typed a quote she had read recently..Never did she think that she owuld use it..that too to him 😉 But then she wondered..Is that fyn ? Will he be happy ?? She didn't want to cross the line this tym ..she couldn't help but blush when she recalled their last nyt conversation 😳..Now she realized that she spoke quite a lot yesterday 😆..She warned herself that from now onwards she'll be in her limits..Little did she knew then that this msg of her would be enough to drive him crazy..😉 😳

" Bhai bolo naa..Usko Bhabhi bulaawu ya nai ?? " Mannu asked him 😛..In a low voice he said " Ha teek hai..bulao " " Kya bhai..mujhe kuch sunaai nai dheraha hai..todha jhor se bolo naa " Mannu was njying It totally..for the first tym he got a chance to tease his bhai..he couldn let it go that easily 😆 😛… " Bulao " he replied little loudly now..he was already worried that she isn't replying and on top of it this Mannu was irritating him.." Kya bulaao ? Bhabhi ya Suvreen ? " Super irritated Yuvi shouted aloud 😡 " Bhabhi bulaao aur kya " After those words escaped his mouth he realized..His slapped his face lightly at his foolishness 😆…But then it was already late..Mannu's face was glowing with mischief 😉..Now there is no escape thought Yuvi..😆

" Ofoo..Kya solid confession hai…Ek baar mein Bhabhi se bhi puch kar dekhta hu ko une koi prob. Toh nai 😉"

" Mannu..mera bhai tu aisa kuch nai karegaa..Mera best buddy he na tu " 😆

Before Mannu could say anything Yuvi's ph. Beeped..It was her msg..he just knew it..Before he could reach his phone which was on the bed..Mannu caught the phone in his hand….Then the chase began 😆 …which continued for a while but then who could win in a challenge wid the Cheetah..Finally he had his phone bak 😊…Before he could open her msg..his phone rang..It was her..Never did they speak in phone before..All their conversations wer through messages till now..he was a bit nervous ..Controlling himself he slowly picked up the phone.. " Itni der kyu lagaa di reply karne mein..pata hey mein wait kari thi " said no no actually screamed a sweet voice..Iski voice tho bahut sweet hey he thought 😳.." Oye hello mein tumse baat kari hu..Pehle mere msg ka reply nai dete ho aur ab ph. Kari tho kuch bol bhi nahi rehi hu " " Accha Madam toh pichle ek gante se mein tera reply ka wait kar raha tha uss ka kya " " Mein toh so rahi thi na tab..So it cant be counted "She lied ofcourse she couldn't tell him that she was re-reading that msg for the past one hour..😳 😆

" Raat ko toh sone ka naam hi nai leti aur subha toh utthi hi nai ho..very bad Topper :P " " Bahut dino ke baad tumse baat karrahi thi na issi liye didn't feel like saying bye.. " 😃She said innocently…He felt like hugging her right then 😳 😳..Controlling his thoughts he said " Mein toh bas majaak kar raha tha….Pata hai tum sapne mein bahut cute lagrahi thi kal..Bheegi billi ki tarah 😛 " " Mere sapne mein toh Tum bahut handsome lagrahe the.." she said dreamily 😳….Shit !!! She covered her face in embarssment after she realized what she had said…She was nervous..God.woh kya soch ra hogaa..suvreen tu toh paagal hein..sach mein bahut badi paagal she couldn't stop cursing herself..Just to escape from the situation she cut the call and switched off her mbl 😆. She finds me handsome ??? he was surprised at what he just heard…He was beaming..He pondered upon her sentence for a long time..Suddenly sumthing striked him..Did he hear it right ??? She said mere sapne mein..Was she dreaming of me ?? 😳 😃 His joy knew no bounds..but then he was still unsure..He wondered why did she have to say all such beautiful things in a hurry..Kabhi tike confess nahi karti ki mein usko kaise lagtahu

The whole day he was occupied with something...Her message was left unread..

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Posted: 13 years ago
#47
sooo cute 😛😛😛 juat awesome😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
#48
haiye...hope he reads d sms soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: medhahps

@ Jyo_Ksg - Wow :) Your idea sounds too good..Will try to do something lyk dat..Thankuu :)


Really.. hehe.. thankoo..😳 ill be waiting to read it..😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
#50
Amazing update Medha.. thanks for sharing..🤗
Keep up the good work! 😉 update soonish! 😳

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