~~KaYu OS - Unsolicited Blessings~Part 3 Added Pg5

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Posted: 9 years ago

#41

beautiful end
it was really a touching part..
described yudi emotions beautifully..

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Nirmala

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

Great work and I am speechless. This looks complete. The poem is just awesome. Wrote it exactly the way Yudi would have contemplated the comvo before the war.

Thanks Riti, I am humbled that you thought of writing after my comment.

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: ramya06
I didn't know another part was coming!
But it was a pleasant surprise and very very touching indeed. Those last poetic lines were beautiful! Amazing! 👏

Thank you dear for liking and comment😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: KURT15
Wow!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you so much for this!!! That poem was the icing on the cake! Poor Yudi. He was so torn apart by the revelation. And the way he remembers Karna is really heart wrenching. 😭 . Thank you once again for this Ritima. 🤗.

🤗Aww thank you so much Geetha ma, you inspired me for quicker updates.. thanks for showing so eagerness to read this.. I am really touched😊

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

Originally posted by: MBcrazyfan
Hi Ritima, thanks for pm..I read all 3 parts and I must say don't evr think f giving up on writing.. U hv picked my 4rite pair as I alws feel yudi hd his doubts abt karna(plz don't ask for citation.. Just gut feeling😲)...karna wud hv been wonderful brother to him..yudi was devastated after knowing d truth n ur poem says it all...Thanks a lot for giving us amazing moment btwn these lost brothers..😭 Will b looking for ur next write up dear..do pm me👍🏼

Thank you dear 😃, you can call me Riti😊, riti ma is due to my motherly feelings towards karna😆..glad to know you felt yudi had doubts about karna coz i feel the same😳

Will surely PM you , thanks for showing interest dear😃

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: Nonie12345
Awesome part⭐️

Thank you dear😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra
Riti, this really made me really speechless!!! And that poem, touching to its full-stop.😊 Great writing.👏

Thank you Jamy for your kind words always😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: dhivyakrish31
Riti ma! wowww darling..🤗that was so excellent!
first time i am reading your work..that was amazing dear.. ur clean language..perfect words which described the emotions.. well its a whole package..

I loved this karna..that sooo ! iam speachless 😭

I am standing against my own!! those words of karna made me to 😭

the moment they apart..yudishtir's impulse to touch karna's feet and karna's silent blessings was very very emotional..

take this tight hug and kiss darling..

a great drithrastra alingan

keep writing ritima..and don't forget to pm me!

dhivi thank you for lovely comment and liking my work.. Glad you liked my perception of Karna😃.. will surely PM you my work 😊.. and drithrastra alingan was too sweet😆

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: shrutigaur37
beautiful end
it was really a touching part..
described yudi emotions beautifully..

Thank you dear😊

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riti4u

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: nimmu96
Great work and I am speechless. This looks complete. The poem is just awesome. Wrote it exactly the way Yudi would have contemplated the comvo before the war.
Thanks Riti, I am humbled that you thought of writing after my comment.

Thank you 😊,you have been quite encouraging and thanks for motivating to write this final part😃.