Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Last part updated page 8)

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Shiney19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#41

Oh my gosh! I can't believe Sayyam slapped Krishna! He will have a lot of making up to do now! I'm sure she won't forgive him too easily.

Great chapter again, I'm sad it's ending.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

#42

Originally posted by: Shiney19
Oh my gosh! I can't believe Sayyam slapped Krishna! He will have a lot of making up to do now! I'm sure she won't forgive him too easily.

Great chapter again, I'm sad it's ending.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

Thanx shaz😃

N Krishna is tantrum queen..So Saiyyam is gonna face hell😆

I'll try to post very soon..

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#43

Sorry for commenting late Anjali! Loved the update, but I'm sad it's ending soon 😒

It was so cute in the beginning, but then Rags came in. Didn't expect her to be Sayyams mum 😆Poor Krishna, can't believe Sayyam slapped her! I'm really looking forward to the next update, I want them to make up quickly!

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Faeeqa
Sorry for commenting late Anjali! Loved the update, but I'm sad it's ending soon 😒
It was so cute in the beginning, but then Rags came in. Didn't expect her to be Sayyams mum 😆Poor Krishna, can't believe Sayyam slapped her! I'm really looking forward to the next update, I want them to make up quickly!

Thanx faeeqa😃 n plzz don't say sorry

Suhani ko nhi le sakti thi..Wo negative nhi lagti..So went for Rags😆

I'll try n post soon.. Rilli soon

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itsAveesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#45

OMFG.. Did saiyyam really slap krishna!! That was so intense. And did he feel no remorse about it... Girl you are taking my breath away never thought of something like this.. Why are you ending your ff so soon I mean you just started it. Anyway I literally loved your story waiting for the next part!!!

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: itsAveesha
OMFG.. Did saiyyam really slap krishna!! That was so intense. And did he feel no remorse about it... Girl you are taking my breath away never thought of something like this.. Why are you ending your ff so soon I mean you just started it. Anyway I literally loved your story waiting for the next part!!!

Yes dear..He did!! He's angry right now..N in anger we always do wrong..We loose our sense of right n wrong..Same is d case wid Saiyyam..

I hv very less readers..Still I'm adamant on updating😆 only for 3-4 readers..U r one of them 😃..I'm trying to post d final part soon..

Thank u so much for your comment

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Tia

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Posted: 8 years ago

#47

Behen prologue padha...oooh!!...kya krne chale gai ye log...what okay janu...noo..noooi.

Okay🤣gutter mind activated...

Very interesting prologue...going to chappy 1

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Tia

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Chappy 1

This is so cute...

So cute ...just like movie..

So i was right he wants to move in with her...badmadh chokra...

Running to read next chappy

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Tia

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Hahaha extra sweet chapy chappy no 2...

He is so cute...such a nice boyfriend and she..well she is so nautanki...it was such a good chappy. I dont need to know who are they but this story have hoooked me up

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: -TIARA
Behen prologue padha...oooh!!...kya krne chale gai ye log...what okay janu...noo..noooi.
Okay🤣gutter mind activated...

Very interesting prologue...going to chappy 1

Tera gutter mind😆 har jagah shuru ho jata h

Originally posted by: -TIARA
Chappy 1

This is so cute...
So cute ...just like movie..
So i was right he wants to move in with her...badmadh chokra...
Running to read next chappy

Yeah..they r cute..thank u padhne k liye😊

Originally posted by: -TIARA
Hahaha extra sweet chapy chappy no 2...
He is so cute...such a nice boyfriend and she..well she is so nautanki...it was such a good chappy. I dont need to know who are they but this story have hoooked me up

Boyfriend goals u know😉 thank u so much for commenting😃

Time mile to baki chapters bhi padh lena..last chapter post kr dungi kuch din mein..

Love ya❤️

Edited by Anjali33 - 8 years ago