Kriyyam SS- Ok Jaanu!! (Last part updated page 8) - Page 4

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is such a cute story! They have such a sweet relationship. Update soon!
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Originally posted by: Shiney19

This is such a cute story! They have such a sweet relationship. Update soon!


Thank shaz😃 I'll try to post soon..N whenever I say dis I'm late😆
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Hey everyone!! Dis time I'm bit early..At least my record says so.. Lolll😆


Part 4

The alarm ringed, much to d dislike of both Saiyyam n Krishna who were sleeping cuddling into each other. Krishna said in a sleepy voice "baby..Alarm off kro" to which Saiyyam replied a hmm. Krishna again said "babyyy..Alarm off kro" n she kept a pillow on her ear so as to not hear d alarm ringing. Saiyyam whined "tum kr do..N plzz don't wake me up again" Krishna pushed Saiyyam from her hands n said "band kro na" finally Saiyyam had to switch off d alarm. He again laid down next to Krishna. She kissed his cheeks n said "Thanx Jaanu" wid a smile, her eyes still closed..N she slept again.

Both had got out of d bed (finally) n were in d washroom, brushing their teeth. They made wierd faces while brushing n then laughed at each other. After coming out, Krishna quickly took her clothes n went back inside d washroom n shouted from inside "sorry baby.. Tumhein baad mein nahana pdega" Saiyyam frowned n shouted "dis is not fair Krish" Krishna giggled n shouted "love u"

Saiyyam had bath n came out n he exclaimed "tum ab tak taiyar ho rhi ho!!" Krishna, who was applying her eyeliner replied wid a "shut up" Saiyyam slightly pushed Krishna from in front of d mirror n said "kitta make-up krti ho tum ladkiyan!! Ab hato bhi mirror k saamne se" n started combing his hair. Krishna gave a haww wala look n when Saiyyam was done wid his hair, she messed up his hair again. Krishna smirked while Saiyyam was shocked. But soon Krishna's smirk vanished bcz Saiyyam was smirking now. He messed up her hair n said "tit for tat Jaanu" Krishna frowned n said "I'll kill u some day"

Both had their breakfast n left for office in Saiyyam's car. In d car, Krishna said "u're such a cheater Saiyyam. Maine kitti mehnat se wo hairstyle banayi thi aur tumne sab kharab kr diya!! Tumhare balo ka kya h, banao na banao ek jaise lagte h" Saiyyam said "cheater to tum ho..Jaldi jaldi brush kr li taki pehle naha sako!!" Krishna said "tum ab tak use le kar baithe ho..ok..Kal se tum pehle naha lena" Saiyyam said "nhi" Krishna asked "arey, kya nhi??" Saiyyam said trying to sound casual "Kal se koi pehle nhi nahaega..Dono saath mein naha lenge" n shrugged his shoulders. Krishna narrowed her eyes n muttered "such a one-track mind"

Both of them reached Krishna's office. Krishna gave a quick peck on Saiyyam's lips n got out of d car waving him a bye. Saiyyam drove to his office.

At Krishna's office, she met her colleague n frnd Rhea, who was also Saiyyam's best frnd Jai's girlfriend. They met through Saiyyam n Jai. First they were, to each other, just d girlfriend of their boyfriend's best frnd. But wid time, they too became very good frnds, as Saiyyam-Krishna n Jai-Rhea used to hangout together many a times. Both of them greeted each other wid a congratulations..Wierd right!! Both laughed at it. Rhea asked Krishna "how's your n Saiyyam's live-in relationship going?? Hope u both haven't decided to kill each other!!" Krishna laughed n said "ab tak to nhi..Btw, tum batao..Tumhari aur Jai ki wedding preparations kaisi chal rhi h??" Rhea said "it's all on full swing..N don't forget, u n Saiyyam hv to stay wid us for two days to help us" Krishna replied "of course" n both reached their cubicle.

In d evening, both Saiyyam n Jai came to Krishna's office. Krishna n Rhea came out of d office together n were surprised seeing Saiyyam n Jai together, waiting for them. Both d girls hugged their partners. Krishna congratulated Jai for his wedding. Jai replied "Thanx Krishna. But only congrats won't do..U both will hv to be wid us all d time during our wedding..Promise us" Krishna nodded in a yes, smiling. Saiyyam said "tum dono se hi to humein relationship goals milte h..Tumhari shaadi mein to aana hi pdega" n all laughed. Rhea asked "waise, tum dono apne naye ghar ki housewarming party kab de rhe ho??" Krishna looked at Saiyyam n said "ab tak to kuch socha nhi h" Saiyyam said "Saturday ko rakhte h na..Phir Sunday ko off bhi rehta h..So late night party..Wats say!!" All agreed. After some more chit-chat, all left for their home.


Few days passed n it was Saturday. Both Krishna n Saiyyam were back from their office n were decorating d house for d party. Jai n Rhea were also there to help them. After d decoration was done, all were bit tired. Krishna n Rhea made coffee for four of them, by d time Saiyyam n Jai brought some snacks from d store nearby. Krishna n Rhea both were getting ready in Kriyyam room, while Saiyyam n Jai had to manage in d guest room.

Saiyyam n Jai, both were waiting in d hall, since 20 minutes..But both d ladies didn't come out. Jai said "yaar ye dono kitta time le rhi h!!" Saiyyam said "Krish ko to roz hi aadha ghanta lagta h taiyaar hone mein..To aaj to ek ghanta lag hi jaega..Mujhe pehle hi pata tha" Jai made a pouty face n said "hmm" Saiyyam took out his phone n said "jab tak ye dono aati h chal hum minimilitia khelte h" n both d boys got engrossed in playing.

When Rhea n Krishna came out of d room, Saiyyam saw Krishna n he totally forgot he was playing d game. He was jst admiring Krishna. Jai asked him "bhai ruk kyu gya?? Khel na" he tried to shake Saiyyam's hand but Saiyyam jerked his hand. Then Jai saw him staring at Krishna n said "ye to gya aaj!!"

Krishna blushed when she noticed Saiyyam staring at her. Saiyyam moved towards her n stood close to her. He held her by her waist n whispered in her ears "u look.. Mesmerizing" she kissed his cheek n said "thank u" wid a smile. Saiyyam was getting closer to Krishna. Rhea coughed n said "guys, hum bhi yaha h!!" Kriyyam moved away.

It was around 9 pm n all of Kriyyam frnds had arrived by now. All looked around d house n praised it. All of them enjoyed d drinks n music. One of Krishna's frnds, Yuvaani played a romantic song n insisted Kriyyam for a dance. Saiyyam placed his hands of Krishna's waist n Krishna's hands were on Saiyyam's shoulders. They were swaying to d music n were lost in each other's eyes. Saiyyam held Krishna's hand n kissed it. They were leaning closer when Yuvaani stopped d music n said "guys, rest u do after we all leave..Hv pateince till then" n she giggled.

It was 12 now n all had left. Kriyyam had jst came back after bidding a bye to their frnds. Krishna sat on d ground n raised her hands in air indicating Saiyyam to pic her up n said "Jaanu, plzz" Saiyyam smiled n picked her up n said "Aaj Ms Krishna Unromantic Sehgal romantic kaise ho rhi h!! Tumne drink to nhi ki!!" walking towards d room. Krishna looked at him n narrowed her eyes "r u mocking me??" Saiyyam smirked n said "yes..I m"

Saiyyam put Krishna on d bed n turned to move, but she pulled him on d bed n got on top of him. She sat on his waist wid her legs on either sides. She bent n held his collar n said "u think I'm unromantic!?" Before Saiyyam cud say anything, Krishna leaned closer n kissed him. She pulled him more close. Saiyyam slid his hand inside her top. His fingers lingered on her waist which felt so smooth. His hand moved upwards n he fiddled wid d strap of her clothing n teased her.

They broke d kiss , feeling out of breath. Saiyyam changed d position n came on top of Krishna. He kissed her again wid more passion. He deepened d kiss, their tongues fighting for dominance. She didn't let him win easily. He tickled her waist n she giggled. He used dis opportunity n entered her mouth. He broke d kiss n placed his lips on her neck. He left butterfly kisses on her neck while her fingers opened his shirt buttons.

He lifted her top n quickly discarded it on d ground. Krishna lifted her upper body n kissed Saiyyam's earlobe. Saiyyam kissed her shoulders n Krishna threw her head back on d pillow, feeling Saiyyam's love. He slid down d straps off her shoulders n placed open mouthed kisses, sucking her skin. He bit her shoulder which made her let out a moan n arch her body. He moved his hands on her back making random patterns. He moved from her neck to her collarbone. He then whispered in her ears "I love you" n pulled d blanket over them n both of them made love to each other.




Precap- Saiyyam's raises his hand on Krishna.



Ok..I know nothing was expected..Niether d consummation (without clothes..Lol😉😆) nor d precap..I know I'm very bad at writing intense romantic stuff..But trust me I tried my best..Baki ka khud imagine krlo😉 moreover d dialogues weren't much creative too..N I had to include Yuvaani..Couldn't stop myself

N more two parts r left..Actually d 5th part will hv two parts..So many parts😆 so plzz, all readers..Comment kro
Edited by Anjali33 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you for updating Anjali, I was sad today, but this made me smile 😊 It was so lovely and the end really made me blush 😳 Nicely written! But wait, Sayyam raises his hand on Krishna?? 😲 Can't wait for the next update!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Oh my goodness! Anjali this was really good! I didn't expect a consummation scene. It was so passionate! You say you're bad at describing intense romantic scenes but you described the consummation scene very well!
Yes we got a consummation scene without clothes on lol!!! 😳

Really good chapter, well done!! Can't wait for the next one!
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: Faeeqa

Thank you for updating Anjali, I was sad today, but this made me smile 😊 It was so lovely and the end really made me blush 😳 Nicely written! But wait, Sayyam raises his hand on Krishna?? 😲 Can't wait for the next update!


Aww rilli😳 I think I'm of some use now😃
I'm too naive at writing consummation scene..It's d first time I'm writing it..Still glad u liked it😊

N yeah.. Saiyyam raises his hand on Krishna..But y?? Wo next time bataungi😆
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Originally posted by: Shiney19

Oh my goodness! Anjali this was really good! I didn't expect a consummation scene. It was so passionate! You say you're bad at describing intense romantic scenes but you described the consummation scene very well!
Yes we got a consummation scene without clothes on lol!!! 😳

Really good chapter, well done!! Can't wait for the next one!


Thanx Shaz😊
I too didn't expect I'll include consummation in dis part😆
dat too without clothes😉

Wait to krna pdega..Kyuki main itni jaldi update krti hoon na!!😆
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It was really amazing.. Loved it!! Thank God I found your ff.. Such a treat to read!!
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Originally posted by: itsAveesha

It was really amazing.. Loved it!! Thank God I found your ff.. Such a treat to read!!


Thank u dear..N I'm updating now..Do read n comment😊
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Heya guys!! So dis is d second last part of my ss..Let's begin


Part 5


Krishna n Saiyyam were sleeping..Saiyyam holding Krishna from her waist n their legs entangled..Saiyyam woke up, rubbing his eyes n saw Krishna sleeping next to him..She looked so innocent in her sleep..He caressed her hair n said "baby..Wake up" Krishna snuggled in her pillow n mumbled ummhm. Saiyyam sat on d bed n said "hey..U shud be snuggling into me.." n he slightly frowned. Krishna thought to tease him n said "Kyu?? Tum kaun?? Kya main tumhe janti hoon??" Saiyyam smirked n said "oh rilli!! Kal raat k baad bhi..U don't know me!! Shud I remind u" while nuzzling on her neck.

Few days passed like dis. Krishna's tantrums, Saiyyam's all-time-romantic mood, their love n lots of fun. One night, Krishna had come out of d washroom after freshening up. Saiyyam was on a video call on his laptop. Krishna jst came n sat next to him n saw he was talking to his mom (Rags). Rags made a face seeing Krishna. Krishna made a straight face but faked a smile, jst for Saiyyam. Rags excitedly said "Saiyyam, main kal aa rhi hoon..Tumhare paas." Saiyam beamed joyfully n said "rilli mom..Dats great" Rags then said "but ab to Krishna bhi tumhare ghar mein rehti h, I hope use mere aane se koi problem na ho" taunting Krishna.

Krishna sternly said "ye hum dono ka ghar h aur.." but then Saiyyam held her hand indicating her to stop. He said "Mom, Krishna no kyu problem hogi..Right Krishna" he turned towards Krishna but Krishna got up n left from there. "Mom..I'll talk to u later..Bye!!" Saiyyam followed Krishna to d hall after shutting his laptop. He went towards her but Krishna turned to leave. Saiyyam held her arm n turned her to face him n asked "wat is all dis Krishna?? Tum aise kyu chali aayi??" Krishna replied "kyuki mujhe wahan accha nhi lag rha tha" n before Saiyyam could say anything she said "plzz..mujhe us bare mein baat nhi krni..Main sone ja rhi hoon..Waise bhi kal Jai aur Rhea k ghar bhi jaana h unki wedding preparations mein help krne" n she left without waiting for Saiyyam's reply.

Dat night both of them slept on their sides, without even looking at each other..Their backs facing each other.

D next day, Krishna returned from office n yelled all d way from d door to d room "baby, tum mujhe lene mere office kyu nhi aaye.." but stopped when she heard Rags n Saiyyam sitting in d guest room, talking n laughing. Rags, wid a smirk on her face, said "Saiyyam mujhe lene airport aaya tha" Krishna said to Saiyyam "tum mujhe bata dete..Main wait to nhi krti office k bahar" Rags interrupted saying "I'm so sorry Saiyyam. Meri wajah se Krishna ko wait krna pada. I'm so sorry.." Saiyyam held her shoulders n made her sit n said "no mom..It's not your fault" he turned towards Krishna n continued "n Krishna..It's ok, itti chhoti baat pe overreact kyu kr rhi ho.." Krishna shakes her head in disbelief n said "I'm overreacting!! Great!!" n she left d room.

Saiyyam followed Krishna to their room. Rags stood outside their room, trying to hear their conversation. Saiyyam held Krishna from her arm n asked "wats wrong wid u Krish?? Y r u behaving like dis??" Krishna asked "wat did I do??" Saiyyam yelled "y r u making mom feel dat she shouldn't hv come here!!" Krishna jerked off his hand n said sternly "I didn't hurt her..Aur wo kuch galat nhi soch rhi" Saiyyam felt anger build up inside him. "Wat do u mean??" he asked in a raised voice. Krishna too yelled "yahi hota h har baar..Jab bhi tumhari mom aati h humara jhagda hota h..Aur unhi ki wajah se hota h" Saiyyam shouted "shut up..U can't blame my mom.." Krishna asked him "Kyu?? Jst bcz wo tumhari mom h, to kya wo galat nhi ho sakti!!" Saiyyam gritted his teeth saying "for d last time I'm telling u..Meri mom ko blame mat kro" Krishna was not ready to listen to him. She said "no Saiyyam..Tum nhi samjhoge..Tumhari mom ye sab intentionally kr rhi h..Wo mujhe pasand nhi krti isi liye.." she stopped bcz Saiyyam slapped her on her cheek.

Krishna put her hand on her cheek n looked at Saiyyam wid shocked eyes. Tears welled up in her eyes. Her voice became heavy. She said "wow Saiyyam!! Aaj tumne prove kr diya ki main kitta galat sochti thi ki tum mujhe kisi aur k liye hurt nhi kroge.." Saiyyam said loudly "mom h wo meri.." Krishna too shouted "rilli..Aur main kaun hoon tumhare liye?? Who m I to u Saiyyam??" Saiyyam said wid a straight face "koi nhi" Krishna looked at him shocked. He continued "agar tum meri mom ki respect nhi kr sakti, to tum mere liye koi nhi ho" Krishna moved backwards saying "wow..Dis is wat I get in return of my love.." Saiyyam turned his face d other side. "I can't live here anymore.." said Krishna n she immediately started packing her bags.

Krishna immediately left d house. She went outside d building, when Rhea called her. She answered d call. Rhea said "hello Krishna..Tum aur Saiyyam kab pohoch rhe ho??" Krishna took a deep breathe n said "I'm coming" n she cut d call. She took a rickshaw n left for Jai n Rhea's house.

Saiyyam was still boiling in anger. He threw his phone in anger. Rags came to him n pretended to be great. She said "y did u do dis..U love her..I don't hv any problem wid her..Bring her back to your life" Saiyyam said "no mom..If she can't respect u, then she has no place in my life..N I don't want to talk abt it anymore" His phone rang n Jai's name flashed on d screen. Saiyyam picked up d call n said "I'm sorry Bhai..Main bas thodi der mein aa rha hoon." He cut d call n left for Jai n Rhea's house after informing Rags.

Krishna reached Jai n Rhea's house n ringed d doorbell. Rhea opened d door. Krishna tried to smile. Rhea called her inside. Jai came n greeted Krishna. Rhea noticed something n asked "Krishna.. Tumhare gaal ko kya hua?? Itta laal kyu lag rha h??" Krishna tried to hide her cheek wid her hair n "kuch nhi hua.." she stuttered. Rhea held her hand n moved back her hair n said "jhoot mat bolo Krishna..batao kya hua" Krishna couldn't control her tears anymore n she told everything to Jai n Rhea.

Before they could say anything, they heard d door bell ring. Jai opened d door n saw Saiyyam standing at d door.


Precap- Both Krishna n Saiyyam at Jai n Rhea's wedding..Final chapter


Huff!! I'm rilli tired now..Bohot type kiya.. I know it was dramatic..But..Wat to do..I'm also total drama😃
Edited by Anjali33 - 8 years ago

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