Teri meri Kahani: KriYam SS* UPDATED CH7, pg12

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Oh my goodness Pooja, this was just sooo romantic! I loved it! I was just smiling through the whole chapter, every scene was so cute and romantic in this The hair scene, Sayyam singing, the kiss, drunk Krishna, I can't pick one fave part because it was all amazing and it was written so well too! The way you express their feelings, you can really tell how deep their love is for each other. I wish I could write such romantic scenes like you 😳 I can't wait for the confession and Kriyam in the shower?! Omg can't wait for that too!

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RaindropsNRoses

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

this part was just full of so many emotions ...
it will be my favorite 😃...
it was romantic...(the kiss)
IT WAS FUNNY ( matching tie ) 🤣

I m really very happy after reading this update...
it was just amazing...

u penned each n every emotion so marvelously ...

that I really don't have words seriously...
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I just love ur ff a lot...

the precap and the name half wife sounds interesting 😆

update the next part soon 😳
just can't wait for the future story...

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MetaphorMaggy

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Posted: 8 years ago

#93

oh mu lord! dis was killing.. my halaat..☺️🤪 half-dead 🤣☺️

dis mixture of bold n shy krishna is deadly osm. eee... how he knows 2 make hair-style? or he was learning it luka-chupping 4 his wife?!!! 😈☺️ i jst luuuv "jealousious sayyyam"!

the song was so perfect.. it tuk my heart ❤️

uuuhhj.. the kiss.. speechless.. n abt the last scenes.. m 2much speechless 2 commnt anything,really! i jst can say.. i was expecting such romance only.. i jst luvd luvd luvd it..🥺(oops wrong emoji. its not going ☢️. anyways here r the ri8 emos:) ❤️

i cant literally w8 2 see thm in shower. i hop krishna will b conscios thn. half-wife seems so interesting! 🤪

do update plz by 22nd if possible. my xm will start again at 24rd. nw m having gaps.ohh

.. i cant stop myself imaginaning!

btw,half gf is releasing on my bday 😃

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Anjali33
Half wife.. Lol😆😆

D matching tie part was hilarious🤣🤣 i laughed a lot while reading it..

Finally Saiyyam accepted her as his wife Infront of everyone.. Yayyy👏👏

Krishna bhi pagal h..Khud se hi kiss kr diya😳😳 d kiss was... Intense...N controlling my gutter mind now is...Oh my God bohot mushkil h😉😉

Dis episode was my favourite...For obvious reasons😳😉

When r u gonna update next..N btw, is d next part gonna be d confession part??

Thank you Anjaliii🤗

Half-wife.. Yeah To be honest, even I don't know what I'm going to write 😆

Umm maybe confession or the chapter after that 😉 only doing 10 chapters, so 9th will be confession and 10th will just be full of guttery stuff.. I hope I can finish it properly lol..

I just gave you spoiler of my FF..but I seriously don't know when I'm writing the next part. Weekend is going to be busy.

And I'm also waiting for you to update yours!

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#95

Originally posted by: itsAveesha
Ahhh.. This was so romantic the way you expressed their feelings and that hairstyle idea was so unique no one could come up with such a thing and the cherry on the cake was drunk krishna.. mann you are so creative like seriously I wait for you to update and kriyam in the shower... Wowww I have been longing for such scene and I know no one can write it better than you.. till that time I would only be fantasizing about it!!

Good to read a positive feedback on the hairstyle scene.😊 I thought if he knows how to drape a saree..then why not hairstyles 😆 Saiyyam baba is too talented lol!!

We've seen KriYam drunk and it's absolutely cute..but sadly CVs rushed all their romance. So I'm just trying to fill in the gaps ..

Thanks for having faith in my writing 😳 I will try my best to match your expectation for the shower scene..

And once again thank you for such a sweet comment! 😊

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Poojaa_P

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Shiney19
Loved this again! There is so much passion there between them, they just can't help kissing each other all the time. All that's left is for them to confess to each other. Loved the hair braiding part and Sayyam kept on asking for his prize. I thought the prize he wanted was a kiss but he actually wanted her forgiveness although I don't think he minded the kiss! You describe their desire for each other so well. Kriyam in the shower? Looking forward to this!! Seriously these are the kind of scenes we needed from Kriyam, they would have portrayed the passion so well, but the cvs decided to skip all romance and just go straight to consummation. They have left everything for our imagination instead.

Can't wait for the next chapter!

Originally posted by: faeeqa
Oh my goodness Pooja, this was just sooo romantic! I loved it! I was just smiling through the whole chapter, every scene was so cute and romantic in this The hair scene, Sayyam singing, the kiss, drunk Krishna, I can't pick one fave part because it was all amazing and it was written so well too! The way you express their feelings, you can really tell how deep their love is for each other. I wish I could write such romantic scenes like you 😳 I can't wait for the confession and Kriyam in the shower?! Omg can't wait for that too!

I wait to read comments from both of you 😆 Honestly, you guys are too sweet! Made my day 😳

Yes, I always wanted to see a shower scene but alas..we got to see the consummation with clothes on 😆

My new MEME:

So how's your relationship going? oh it's at the peak level just like KriYam's consummation. 😆

Anyways jokes apart, I really appreciate your support and i'm left speechless after reading your comments, so I have nothing more to say than a big thank youuu to both of you. 😳

I don't think I will be able to write the confession in next part but definitely in chapter 9. 😊

Edited by Poojaa_P - 8 years ago