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LOVE it, been reading it from day 1. Its so so good!
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@Pooja, thank you for the comment, it's really sweet and encouraging. I hope I can make the next chapter more interesting. Don't say sorry, I'm just glad you read my ff, I appreciate it! 😳

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Amazing update...
Lovely chapters...
Cant wait to read more Saiyyam and Krishna scenes...
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Hey faeeqa I luv ur story so so much n luving it more n more wid each new chapter. Sry I couldn't comment bcoz my xms bt I'll lyk it always since I luv it.
My fav 2 scenes were the wedding ni8 scene n the bedrum scene of honeymoon. Ahhh.. They made me so much I can't say! Jst harmful 4 studies ☺️
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This ff is one amonng my favrites...in my top 5 list...love it to the core...plsss update soon...u r an amazingly talented writer..
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@chandaniebinda Oh I didn't send a pm 😕 but anyway thank you for your comment! 😊

@Metaphor No worries! Hope your exams r going good. I noticed you liked my chapters and I appreciate you read and liked them! 😳 Haha I hope it wasn't too harmful! Thank you so much for commenting!

@Rockstr897 Aww your being too kind, thank you! 😳

Guys I'll try my best to update by tomorrow.
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Hello everyone, I'm back with another chapter. I know this honeymoon has become a bit boring, I dragged it on too long, but this is the last part. It's a pretty long chapter and I didn't have time to check it over properly, so I apologise for any mistakes and if it doesn't make sense in some parts. Anyway I really hope you like it! 😊

Chapter 9

Sayyam woke up and peaked over the mountain of pillows that Krishna had laid out between them, to see if she was awake, but she wasn't there. He got up and walked to the bathroom to see if she was inside, but she wasn't there either. Where could she have gone, so early in the morning? He thought to himself, going to the bathroom to get ready. Once he was ready he went downstairs and found Krishna sitting in the living, reading her novel. Finally your awake, shall we go now She spoke up without looking at him. Tum kaise itni jaldi ready hogay? He asked her. She didn't reply, getting up and walked pass him, towards the front door. Sayyam looked on perplexed by her behaviour. He grabbed her arm and turned her around to face him. What's wrong with you? He looked at her suspiciously. Krishna pulled her arm away Nothing, can we go now? Krishna opened the front door. Wait aaj Yuvaan aur Baby ka intizaar nahi karna? He asked. Krishna let out a sigh Tum itne questions kyu pooch rahe ho? Woh pehle se nikal gay hai, ab chale? She went outside before he could reply. Sayyam didn't know what was up with her, but followed quietly. They met up with Yuvaan and Baby and went around, passing the most beautiful sights. However Sayyam was too distracted by Krishna. He observed her as she acted normal around Yuvaan and Baby, in fact she was a bit too happy. So why was she ignoring him? He couldn't take it and decided to walk around on his own.

Baby was having her own problems with Krishna. She was clinging onto Yuvaan since this morning and she didn't like that. Yuvaan suggested to go to a nearby park. Haan Yuvaan lets go! Krishna said excitedly. Baby had enough and pulled Krishna to the side. Yuvaan tum aage jao, mein aur Krishna thori dare main aate hain. Yuvaan nodded and walked away. Baby turned to Krishna. Krishna tumhari problem kya hain, tum Yuvaan ka peecha kyu nahi chor thi? Krishna was slightly shocked by her sudden question. Baby muje pata hai tum muje pasand nahi karti, par I can assure you ke muje Yuvaan main koi interest nahi hain! Woh sirf mera dost hain Krishna replied sternly. Baby could see she was telling the truth, but was still a little uneasy. Ok fine, lekin tum mere pati se ziyada apne pati pe nazar rakho She signalled Krishna towards a direction. Krishna looked towards it and noticed Sayyam talking to some girls. Good luck Baby smirked and left. Krishna looked on and saw him smiling at the girls. What is he smiling about? He's never smiled at me like that. Forget it Krishna, your ignoring him remember. But she couldn't stand it and walked up to him. Sayyam was just waving them goodbye when she got there. Woh kaun thi? She asked him. Oh so you've decided to talk now He glared at her. Krishna looked at him with a cute pout, but he was not going to give in. Well I don't feel like talking to you now He replied arrogantly.

He walked towards the park nearby, where Yuvaan and Baby were sitting on a bench. Krishna stomped after him to the park. Who does he think he is? She got an idea and gathered some snow and threw it at the back of his head. Sayyam stopped, feeling something cold and wet seeping down his back, making him extremely uncomfortable. He turned around to see Krishna looking at him in shock. Krishna couldn't believe what she just did, feeling a little scared as she backed away. You did not just do that! He shouted walking towards her. She threw another snowball at his face in her defence, before he could get to her. Yuvaan and Baby witnessed everything and burst out laughing. Sayyam turned red from embarrassment. How dare she make a fool of me! Fine if this is how she wants to play. He narrowed his eyes at Krishna silently challenging her. He gathered some snow, forming it into a ball and threw it at her. She dodged it, staring at him in disbelief Are we seriously going to do this?!...Fine your on! So a full on snowball fight pursued, with Yuvaan and Baby joining in after some time. They ran around laughing and playing just like little kids, forgetting about the complications of their relationships.

Sayyam was chasing after Krishna and was about to grab her when he suddenly slipped. Krishna tried to stop him from falling, but couldn't hold his weight, stumbling backwards. She closed her eyes as she hit the soft snow, with Sayyam landing on top of her. She open her eyes and saw Sayyam staring at her. He was lost, admiring the reddish hue on her small nose and cheeks. She pushed him off and got up. Yuvaan and Baby ran up to them and asked if they were ok. They decided to head back to the cabin and go out for dinner together later that evening, since it was their last night here.

Krishna sat on the dressing table, getting ready for dinner. She heard the bedroom door open, but didn't look up and carried on with doing her makeup, pretending to not notice Sayyam. She glanced at him through the mirror as he went to the bathroom. Krishna was already late, so decided to quickly change before Sayyam came out the bathroom. She wore a long, elegant dress, that hugged her curves in all the right places. If there was any criticism, it was a little too revealing at the top, but she thought of wearing a scarf to cover herself. This was a good choice by Yuvaani. She only had the zip to do up at the back, but it seemed to have gotten stuck. She was struggling to close it when she heard the bathroom door open. Oh no he's coming out! She started to panic and ran and stood against the wall to cover her back.

Sayyam came out and saw her standing very awkwardly, with one hand behind her back. Yeh kya kar rahi ho..aur tumhare peeche kya hai? He asked taking a step closer to her. Oh god ye tho mere paas aa raha hai Umm kuch bhi nahi hai...Krishna stuttered nervously. Sayyam knew something was up. Oh really? Toh tum itni nervous kyu ho? He was standing in front of her now, looking down at her suspiciously. Dekho Sayyam tum mujse door ho, meine kaha na kuch bhi nahi hain Krishna desperately told him, starting to feel uncomfortable. Acha..mein phir khudhi dekh lehtha hoon He reached for her arm Ok ok fine, I'll tell you...woh actually meri dress ki zip stuck hogay hai...She spoke quietly, turning slightly red. Sayyam couldn't help but notice how cute she looked when embarrassed. Bas yehi baat hain? I can help you then Sayyam suggested. Krishna looked up, surprised by his proposal. Um...nahi I'll do it myself, tum bas iss kamre se jao She told him. Sayyam folded his arms not moving. Krishna we don't have time, just let me do it! He demanded. Krishna knew there was no point in arguing with him. Ok lekin pehle apni aankhein band karo Sayyam rolled his eyes Ok fine ab jaldi karo! He closed his eyes as Krishna hesitantly turned around. She jumped slightly, as she felt his cold fingers touch her bare back. His fingers continued to lightly grazed her back, trying to find the zip, sending shivers down her spine. She held his hand, directing it to the zip, unable to take his touch any longer. He zipped up the dress and stood back as Krishna turned around.

Sayyam looked at her properly for the first time. She indeed looked beautiful, but he noticed the revealing top and did not like that. How can you wear this, change it. He told her. Krishna was taken aback by his demand. Tum kaun hote ho muje ye kehne wale? She asked. Mein tumhara pati hoon aur tum meri biwi ho He replied matter of factly. Krishna couldn't believe what he was saying. Excuse me let me remind you ke humari shaadi sirf ek fake marriage hain, isliye tumhara koi haq nahi hai muje kuch kehne ka! She replied fuming with rage. Sayyam was shocked by her anger, but hated to admit what she said was right. Fine do, whatever you want! He shouted storming out the room. This guy is so confused, making me his wife whenever he wants, it's good that I'm ignoring him! Krishna tried to calm down as she finished getting ready. Once everyone was ready they left for the restaurant.

They arrived at the restaurant and was seated. A waiter came and asked for their orders. Sayyam kyu na hum apni wives ke liye order karte hain aur dekhte hain ke unko pasand aata hai ke nahi. Yuvaan proposed. Please Yuvaan Sayyam muje itna nahi jaanta ke woh meri pasand ka pata ho Krishna scoffed. Come on Krishna don't be like that! Sayyam tum order karo Yuvaan urged him. They placed the order and waited for the food. While Yuvaan and Baby were engrossed in each other acting like the typical honeymoon couple, Krishna and Sayyam sat in an awkward silence, not knowing where to look. The food finally arrived and much to Krishna's annoyance, Sayyam had ordered pasta for her, her favourite. She literally inhaled her food. Lagta hain Krishna ko Sayyam ka choice of dish achi lagi Baby teased her. Haan ab pasta kisko nahi pasand, it's a safe choice She replied. Nahi muje yaad hai ke kaise Krishna maa ko beg karthi thi ke woh uske liye pasta banaye Sayyam spoke up glancing at Krishna. She didn't react to this and carried on eating, but she couldn't help feeling happy inside that he remembered such a small thing about her. After they finished Yuvaan suggested going to a nightclub.

Once they arrived Baby and Yuvaan went off to dance, while Krishna went and sat at the bar. Sayyam came and sat next to her. Tum mera peecha kyu kar rahe ho? Krishna asked Sayyam acting annoyed. He looked at her completely baffled by her behaviour. Mein tumhare saath yahan aya hoon, of course I'll sit with you He replied. Krishna got up from her seat Well I don't want to sit next to you She said that and walked away. Sayyam sighed in frustration, watching her sit somewhere else. What is wrong with this girl, why is she acting so cold and distant today, but shouldn't I be happy she isn't all up in my business anymore, right? Ugh this is so confusing! He shook his head, trying to clear his mind and ordered a drink. He looked at Krishna again and noticed her talking to a guy. Who the hell is that?! Sayyam was about to get up and go to them, but his ego stopped him. Whatever why should I care, it's not like I'm her real husband. He downed his drink and ordered another one. He could see her laughing with the guy, from the corner of his eye and felt an unknown feeling grow inside him. He didn't like it and downed another drink.

Yuvaan and Baby walked up to Sayyam and realised he was completely drunk. Sayyam tum theek ho na? Aur Krishna kaha pe hain? Yuvaan asked looking around. I don't know where she is, I don't care about her! Sayyam spoke with slurred words, getting up from his seat. Yuvaan held onto him as he was losing balance. I think we should go now, Baby go find Krishna. Yuvaan looked at Sayyam with concern. Tum dono ke beech main sab kuch theek hai na? He asked. Sayyam started laughing Of course! Sab theek hain, we are the best of friends! Yuvaan didn't know what was happening between them, but decided to let it go. Baby came with Krishna, who looked at Sayyam with disgust. How can he get drunk like this! She thought to herself. They left for their cabin in a taxi. Yuvaan helped Sayyam get inside. Baby started pestering Yuvaan to go to their room as she was tired. Krishna held Sayyam and signalled Yuvaan to go. Krishna tum Sayyam ko handle karlo gi na? Yuvaan asked. Yes I'll be fine, thanks, tum jao raat bohat hogay hai Yuvaan nodded and left for his room with Baby.

As soon as he left Krishna let go of Sayyam, making him stumble backwards. She turned around to leave. Hey tum kaha ga rahi ho?! He grabbed her arm, pulling her towards him Sayyam muje choro! Krishna struggled to pull herself free, but Sayyam only backed her up against a wall, pressing his body against hers. She looked at him anxiously, her heart rate increasing. S..Sayyam ye tum k...Ssshh Sayyam placed his finger on her lips, making her quiet. His intense gaze was making her feel vulnerable, as if he was staring in soul. She felt his fingers lightly run down her bare arms, making her skin quiver under his touch. He leaned in closer resting his cheek on hers You can never ignore me Krishna He whispered harshly into her ear. Krishna closed her eyes, feeling his hot breath tickle her ear and neck. She was trying her best to regain her composure, but he unexpectedly pinned her hands on the wall. Why do you make me lose control? He spoke looking into her eyes. Krishna shuddered, her eyes locked on his.

He was nearing dangerously close to her lips, she could stop him, but she didn't have the strength to do it. She closed her eyes as his lips met with hers. She didn't know how to respond at first, but an unknown, hidden desire crept up inside her, as she kissed him back. She felt his arms snake around her waist, as she clutched onto his shirt, pulling him closer to her. Krishna let out a moan, feeling his body rub against hers, as he deepened the kiss. They kissed desperately, as if quenching a long, deep thirst for each other. Sayyam pulled away after awhile, giving Krishna a chance to catch her breathe, but she let out gasp as she felt his lips on her neck. He left wet kisses all down her neck and shoulder, her skin burning wherever his lips touched. She felt his hand remove the thin strap off her shoulder, making her come back to her senses. She knew where this was headed. No, this is wrong, I have to stop this. It took all her strength to push Sayyam away. Krishna stared into his hazy eyes, still burning with desire for her. She felt a knot form in her stomach as the situation dawned on her. He was drunk, not fully in his senses. But she was fully aware of what she was doing. How could you let this happen Krishna?! She felt sick, embarrassed and ran to her room, wanting to get away from him.

Precap They head back home

Guys I really wanted to put in at least a small kiss, since it was their 'honeymoon' after all 😆😳 And forgot to mention to thank Pooja for giving me the idea for the snowball fight!
Edited by Faeeqa - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Ahh..After seeing all d rubbish drama in d show, such an episode was a must..A MUST

Krishna ignoring Saiyyam was...Interesting n fun👍🏼

"Small kiss"!! Seriously!! Woahhh!! Then I rilli want to know wat wud be a big kiss😆😆 lol big!!

But, their honeymoon ended🥱 although we can nvr be satisfied u know😳

I luv u for dis episode Faeeqa🤗
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Originally posted by: Anjali33

Ahh..After seeing all d rubbish drama in d show, such an episode was a must..A MUST


Krishna ignoring Saiyyam was...Interesting n fun👍🏼

"Small kiss"!! Seriously!! Woahhh!! Then I rilli want to know wat wud be a big kiss😆😆 lol big!!

But, their honeymoon ended🥱 although we can nvr be satisfied u know😳

I luv u for dis episode Faeeqa🤗


Aww thank you Anjali! Ye the show is pretty bad right now, we only have Kriyam ffs to enjoy for now. Hahaha yes I guess it's not really a 'small' kiss, I don't think I can go any bigger then this! 😳😆
Edited by Faeeqa - 8 years ago
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This was brilliant Faeeqa!! I loved it all! The snowball fights, Sayyam helping Krishna with the zip on her dress, both Kriyam fighting their feelings for each other and then finally them both succumbing to their feelings. I loved it all!! I really wish these scenes had happened in SSEL, it would have been amazing to watch!! I didn't expect Kriyam to kiss, it was so passionate! I'm glad you put that scene in, a honeymoon wouldn't be a honeymoon without it.

Can't wait for the next chapter. I can't wait to see if Sayyam remembers the kiss and how will Krishna behave with him. Will she confront him about it??

This was so good!!!! Well done and thanks!! We needed this after how rubbish SSEL has been at the moment.
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