Kriyam ff- The one year marriage (Updated FINAL Chapter 13 page 21)

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itsAveesha

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Posted: 8 years ago

#91

Awww.. That was worth waiting..love the way u express their feelings.. U are literally reading my mind I always wanted such things to happen between them.. Waiting for next part!!! 😳😉

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Shiney19

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Posted: 8 years ago

#92

Loved it! This just made me smile! I agree with everything Pooja said. This is exactly how Kriyam would behave. I miss this! They're so nice to each other now, I miss their little arguments.

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: Poojaa_P
This was beautiful! So cute and could totally imagine KriYam acting like this. And you were saying you're loosing interest in writing!? Are you crazy! You've just made them alive again. This is the KriYam i fell in love with, they teased and had cute arguments wuth eachother. The spark that's missing in TV is so wonderfully seen in your FF. Love it!
I'm glad you made them sleep on the same bed haha. Waiting for more things to happen in the honeymoon. Update soon!!

Thank you so much again Pooja! 😳 It was still a struggle to get this out! 😆 Yes I imagine Kriyam exactly like this too and no other way! I really wanted to see them in the same bed. This is the advantage of writing an ff, you can write whatever you want to see and don't get from those useless cvs!

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#94

Originally posted by: Anjali33
It was great one yaar..N if u write such episodes without interest..Wat will u do when u're fully interested..Looking forward to d rest of their "honeymoon"..

Haha thanks Anjali! I'll try to make the next parts more interesting!

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: itsAveesha
Awww.. That was worth waiting..love the way u express their feelings.. U are literally reading my mind I always wanted such things to happen between them.. Waiting for next part!!! 😳😉

Thank you 😊 Hehe I'm glad you are getting what you wanted to happen between them! 😳

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Faeeqa

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Posted: 8 years ago

#96

Originally posted by: Shiney19
Loved it! This just made me smile! I agree with everything Pooja said. This is exactly how Kriyam would behave. I miss this! They're so nice to each other now, I miss their little arguments.

Thanks Shaz! I was smiling when I was writing it too, jokes lol. I miss the old Kriyam too. Wish we get them back soon! Btw waiting for you to update you ff too!

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Rockstr897

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Posted: 8 years ago

#97

This is lovely,plsss post the next part soon!!

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Anjali33

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Posted: 8 years ago

#98

Originally posted by: Faeeqa

Haha thanks Anjali! I'll try to make the next parts more interesting!

Already itta interesting h..Aur interesting hua to..I fear main phone k andar jake tum tak pahuch jaungi aur tumhe gunpoint pe mujhe aage ki story sunani pdegi😆😆

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Priya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#99

Nice update dear

Kriyaam scene was just awesome

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Mariya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#100

That was a fabulous chapter Fae, and the cliffhanger at the end... Oh God! I literally cannot wait for the next chapter. Please update it as soon as you can 😳 Oh My My, Krishna has become so confident around Saiyyam, that's what happens when you start living with a stubborn partner like Saiyyam and look at him encouraging her 🤣☺️ The chapter was beautifully written, the way you presented it made it so easy to imagine, again felt like I was watching a KriYam scene. Love you for that, keep up the good work ❤️YuvBy are always there to ruin KriYam moments, hopefully they won't interfere as much during this trip. Please update soon x

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