YuvAni FF- After Realization: Part 7, P. 15 - Page 2

Originally posted by: shinseen

👏great

its sooo nice and worth to read.

open the forum to check if any NEW thing in it.

Glad to saw and read it

very well written ,

each and every thing you describe so well..

waiting for next

Originally posted by: yusu1993

😭

how i have missed this feeling of reading a master piece by you..

i used to tell my self that i miss reading your work but today i feel,

how much i have missed reading each sentence, each word of your imagination.

how badly i needed to read a heading titled "suhani's POV" and "yuvraj's POV" and specially yuvraj ones...

no one and i emphasize on it no one can portray yuvraj the way you do it.

each word by you about yuvraj is magical makes me fall in love again and again..

i so missed you posting these exceptional stories by you and finally i feel fully over the moon and can't keep myself from smiling, crying and even feeling stressed... i am trembling literally.

YOUR WORK ABOUT YUVANI HAS NO COMPARISON..

you put soul in it...

omg omg omg omg omg omg omg

i can't believe this day is here 🤗

starting from excluding rohan and making lata feel embarrassed i want to give you a big tight bear hug for doing that.. itni khushi .. only you could do it . give me a real feeling of snjoying lata's embarrassment as if it is actually happening in the episode...

bhavna gave birth to a boy awww i always imagined it to be a boy...yayyy finally OUR yuvraja and suhani are maasi and maasu/ khala an khaloo #dreamy

I kept my phone off permanently. Each time I turned it back on, I had a dozens of missed calls from Yuvraj. He never messaged me, he only called.

eeeksss dozens of missed calls by him ... you already showed him a total gone case over here .. brilliant! 👏 only calls can be his style only! 😆

"Can we meet, please?" That's all it said.

desperation oh i am enjoying every bit of it... but what totally took my heart away was this

"Why do I love you so much, Yuvraj?" I asked myself. I had ignored his calls for a week, though it hurt. Why couldn't I ignore his message too? Why did I love him so much? Why couldn't I forget him? Was I cursed to be stuck on him for life regardless of whether he wanted me or not? I sighed.

MINDBLOWING!!!!!!!!! this is love.. there is no running away, no backing out... no change of emotions... brilliantly wrote... 👏

"Give me one more chance." It said.

my poor yuvi.. he wants her.. your every line about him shouts he is in so much love with her... omg i just can't read any further... my hearts heavy.. i missed this.. you are brutal behna .. you kept me away from feeling this happy.. but you are love too because you put life to words... EPIC!!!

I answered the door, and there he was. He looked breathless. I stared at him for a good minute before I opened my mouth. He stared back. He looked worried.

"Are you ok?" I asked.

"I should be asking you that. When you didn't reply back, I got so worried." He said. He exhaled.

"My phone broke..." I said.

"What? How? You were just using it...how could it break?" He asked.

in love with his care and fear... two of the emotions i love to see in yuvraj.. i have seen his care but not his fear . loved it...

I saw Yuvraj beside his car, with the door held open for me.

such chivalry!!! aur kis kis baat pay pyar karao gi mujhy iss banday ko??? and why?? i am already mad for him... you can also make me love his footwears with your descriptions 😳 in love with your style boss...

and here comes my favorite.. to be honest i love every bit of what you write but my basiv focus is this

Yuvraj's POV:

my heart skips a beat when i read what you have written for him... i can literally read this particular paragraph millions times and still smile... HATS OFF for such powerful and deepness of yours for his character...

All my anger dissipated the moment I laid my eyes on her. I drove here thinking I would lecture her about ignoring my calls. I would release my anger on her instead of random objects around my, correction, around OUR room.

lut lia behna... bs gai mai... i loved the whole thing actually.. i love his anger and bossy tone too but this side of his is like reading something beyond my control.. YOU HAVE NAILED IT... HE IS SMITTEN

But I was wrong. I kept trying to look at her from the corner of my eye. She was looking out the window. The sindhoor and mangalsutra were still there. I was relieved. The entire week where she didn't answer my calls, I was sure that she had taken them off. I was so wrong and so glad to be wrong. I decided that it was better not to ask her any questions. I was nervous and maybe her answer would make me even more nervous

i am dead!!!!!!! 😭 suhani's sindoor and mangalsutra which is her nishania of yuvraj... they are my weak links... and his fear on top of these two things.. killed it big time ...

I nodded. I wanted to ask her if she felt alright being home alone. I knew she knew everyone around the neighborhood but imagining her being all alone in her house worried me.

purely love... toh ruk jao na yuvraj.. darwazay kay paas beth jao.. biwi hai tumhari... i hope cvs take this trait of yuvraj from you make him fearful for suhani... this gives me some other feelings koi itni care karay and all...

"I miss you too..."

accepted yayyy dhink ka chika... such crispy acceptance... fab!

I wanted to tell her that I loved her. I wanted to tell her that I had finally realized how deeply in love I was with her and that I now wanted her back home WITH ME, where she belonged. I wanted her to take her rightful position beside me, so we could start our life together, at last, which had been postponed for a year due to me and only me.

But I couldn't, because I was a coward, and I couldn't, because I had messed up so badly. I had a lot of mending to do. I needed to convince her that I was worthy of being trusted again, that I could give her a household where she would be loved and respected and not plotted against mercilessly, viciously. Since I couldn't say all that, I decided to ask her something.

OH MY GOD.. CLASSIC MONOLOGUE OF HIS... THIS IS PURE CLASS...

TRUTHFUL ACCEPTANCE OF HIS MISTAKE..

WHEN HE CALLED HIMSELF A COWARD MY HEART CRIES, THAT WAS INTENSE

A HOUSEHOLD AWWW . I AM ACTUALLY SHORT OF WORDS ...

FANTASTIC... AND HE LOVES HER.. HE WANTS HER.. HE WANTS HER WHERE SHE ACTUALLY BELONGS.. TO THEIR ROOM YOHOOO..

ROCKED IT BEHNA.. YOU KILLED THIS PARA...

LOVE YOU LOTXXX..

ALLAH KHUSH RAKHAY..

HOUSEHOLD MAI BACHAY BHI ATAY HAIN NA...

ALLLAAA... 👏

She left and I watched her go. I finally smiled.

WOHOOO ... smiling...

Dear behna.. i have literally craved for this and i cannot thankyou enough of you to write after so long (mai waisay apko thankyou kehti ni ) but this comback of yours is awesome.

i know you craved to write too... and you are pure bundle of talent... reading your work is a feeling of pure bliss.. and what a comeback totally in love with this...

i missed every alphabet you wrote... and ab mai aur kuch ni keh sakti ... but i pray kuch bhi ho kuch bhi.. but you never stop to write because you are EXCEPTIONAL at your job of amazing everyone with your talent of writing...

this day is too good to be true..

going to read again... mwaaah live long.. aur i hope you write dozen of ff's again because i am your biggest fan... and the most loyal one too.. don't forget i read that seaparation one too just because you wrote it.. love that too.. puranay din wapis agaye hain... nothing better then this... hugsss... meray dil ki duaein hain 👏❤️

CONTINUEEE don't kill me waiting

Originally posted by: simpleton

Mehwu mehwu mehwu

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So beautifully written, I could imagine the whole scene... hahaha yuvi was dressed formally in my imaginations...

Awwieee i cant wait to read the next part... i wonder how he will say it... mmm. Its gonna be a nice one Im sure..👏👏👏