YuvAni FF- After Realization: Part 7, P. 15 - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: ridhiku

Mehwish u r a mind blowing writer well written i like ur scenario & I'm waiting for next part👏👏👏well done mehwish😉



thanks Laxmi 😃😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: srinithi25

awsm ff mehwu..👏want to read next part soon...dis waiting s gonna kill me...yuvi wants to propose suhani n take her back to BH soo sweet...his desperation for suhani i lovd it sooo much...i imagined of all d scenes u rote...really dey were killing n awsm...👏 yuvi know abt dadi sach..i wanna see his reaction as now he s n love wid his wife...his disbelief pain shattering n guilty feeling will b soo nice to see...

please update next part soon



Thank you Sri but I think he's quite guilty already and thats what i tried to convey in part 1 😃 thank u for commenting
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: bfsams

Thank U Mehwish for writing a FF finally and also thanks to the actors patch up that made ur mind to write...😆

Really this is a masterpiece. ⭐️ I just loved it... ❤️ You are the one to bring out the couple as we wish since u love and worship them the most...


Eagerly waiting to read the next part and pls add some hot stuff in the coming parts...we are really desperate for it...😉😆



Awww thanks Benazir and yes thanks to the ACTORS whose names we can finally use openly or is that still illegal will i be attacked now for calling them Sahil or Rajshri ?😉😛😆

hot stuff is why I write 😃😉
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Originally posted by: SunaP

Beautiful enjoyed sooo... much... 👏

Pls update nxt part soon.



thanks 😊

Originally posted by: pam789

Mehwish, this is for u👏👏...now I understand y everybody in this forum keep pushing u to write the ff's,now I am gonna join the bandwagon😆

U have brought out the emotions nd feelings of both yuvi nd suhani so beautifully, loved both their POVs especially yuvraj's since v don't c him opening up onscreen..but u have written his turmoil so amazingly d way he asks her out for dinner was soo yuvraj..😊

Suhani throwing her phone was a superb idea to get yuvi home😆

Loved it a lot mehwish, if only v get sumthing like this onscreen..don't keep us waiting now...😛



lol welcome to the bandwagon Rohini 😛😆 I love writing from Yuvi's POV and if only we'd get this on screen hope the CVs are spying on this thread.

Originally posted by: Lavina1996

Vowww is the word

I really like this idea well done mehwush



thanks a lot hun😃😳
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Originally posted by: rerose

It was awesome Mehwish thank u soo much for updating the FF it was mindblowing ,I loved each and ever yword in it ,come on Mehwish update the next part soon ,waiting for it.



thank u Jennifer

Originally posted by: princessmanu

Mehwish dear!! Thankyou for writing after long time...!!
I loved part1.. Especially Suhani's pov... that was AWESOME!!
Update soon...



Thank YOU! 😃😳 no need to thank me.😉

Originally posted by: sreelovesindia

mehwish...this is what i was craving for..your os...

its simply a master piece ...i think cvs will copy this from you



thanks hun 😃 so sweet i hope they copy

Originally posted by: prachi153

I was awaiting for your fanfiction👏



tthanks for waiting 😃
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Originally posted by: juhi98

Superb!! Superb!! W8ng 4 ur reply..pls update next part ASAP...



Hi Juhi 😃 thank u for the love & ill update today itself
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Part 2

Suhani's POV:

What had gotten into him? Now I had to go out with him again tomorrow night. Mummy and Papa would be home tomorrow and that meant I'd have to tell them what was going on. Explaining to them what I was doing with my estranged husband would be the hard part. Papa would be happy, but I didn't know about Mummy. Moreover, I didn't know what Yuvraj was doing and why. I kept my phone on after coming home. He called. I sighed and answered it.

"Are you still alone?"

I moaned. "Ugh, YES, I am..."

"Are the doors locked properly?"

"Yes they are."

"Check again...please..." He said. I checked again.

"They're locked. Goodnight, Yuvraj..."

"Wait, Suhani...someone wants to talk to you. He misses you." He said. I waited for whoever wanted to speak with me. Then I heard some breathing and a small "woof!" which startled me.

"Snoopy?" I said. I smiled. He replied with some more barking and then I heard some weird noises and Yuvraj's voice in the background.

"Yuck! He was licking the phone. Bad, Snoopy..." He said.

"No, Yuvraj, don't scold him. He's my baby." I said.

"You spoiled him...now I can't manage him. He barks at your side of the bed all night." He said.

I became quiet and so did he. I told him goodnight and hung up. I still didn't know what he wanted. I went to bed and thought about his behavior. He seemed, nervous and even scared. He looked like he weighed every word he said very carefully before uttering it. He watched me and I could feel his eyes on me throughout the outing. Maybe Maa had urged him to take a step towards me, but why? What use was it all if we didn't have a future together?

If I didn't know any better, I'd say tonight was actually like a date. Or if tonight wasn't a date, asking me to go to dinner with him tomorrow sounded like a date. But, I wasn't sure. I couldn't be sure. I didn't get excited. He said he missed me. He said he was worried when I didn't answer his message. He didn't scold me for ignoring his calls. All these things could mean something, or they could just represent his friendly concern for me.

The next day, Mummy and Papa came home exactly at dinner time, and I was busy with them when Yuvraj came as well. Both were astonished to see him. Once again, he appeared nervous, unsure, and worried.

"Dinner is still on, right?" He asked. I nodded. Mummy eyed me. Yuvraj shook Papa's hand. "Um, yesterday I wanted to take Suhani for dinner but she had already eaten, so I took her for ice cream. Tonight, we'll go for dinner. I hope that's ok with you."

"Of course it is, Yuvraj. You're her husband. You don't need our permission." He said. Yuvraj nodded but still seemed uneasy. Mummy left the room and his eyes followed her.

"I guess Auntie still doesn't like me..." He said.

"No, Yuvraj...she's just embarrassed at her behavior with you over the past few days. She doesn't know how to apologize. I'm sorry, on her behalf." Papa said.

"No, please, don't say that. We're a family. It happens..." He said. Papa smiled.

I found their exchange both bewildering, and heartwarming. I followed Yuvraj out the door, and Papa waved to us both. In the car, I watched him. With my eyes on him, I noticed that he kept his eyes ahead on the road. It's as if I was making him feel self-conscious by watching him. He licked his lips. He fidgeted.

I cleared my throat. He looked at me.

"Um, how are Bhavna and the baby now?"

"Di is fine. The baby cries all night..." I said. I smiled. He gave a sad sort of smile and continued driving. Yuvraj hadn't met the baby due to all that was happening when Di was in the hospital. I wondered if he wanted to meet him.

He didn't say anything till we reached the restaurant and entered it. We sat down and ordered our meals. He looked really upset and like he was lost somewhere in his own thoughts. I took out my phone and went through the pictures until I found one of me holding the baby. I showed it to him.

"They haven't named him yet..." I said. He took the phone from me and stared at the picture. He smiled. At first it was a tiny smile and then it widened.

"Hey, Suhani...he has your nose." He said.

"That's Di's nose." I said.

"Well, then you and Bhavna have the same nose, because I'm seeing your nose here." He said. He seemed a bit happier now. Did he really just want to see the baby? He stared at me for a few seconds and I blushed. I was completely confused.

"He's so small..." He said and handed returned my phone.

"He is...really small and delicate. But his voice when he cries...GOD!" I laughed. He smiled.

"Maa said I used to keep the whole house awake too...but Anuj was really quiet and really fat. He slept through the night. Saurabh bhaiyya slept all day and stayed awake all night. I never slept, apparently." He said.

He laughed.

"What about you?"

"Uh, Mummy never told me. Every time I ask her what I was like as a baby, she says she just wants to play with my baby and Bhavna's now." I said. Then I realized what I'd just said. There was an awkward silence. His hands were on the table, folded together. He looked here and there. I did as well. It was mostly quiet from here onwards, but after dinner, I thought he was taking me back home but to my surprise, he drove in the opposite direction.

"Where are we going?" I asked.

"For a drive...it's still a bit early..." He said. It was a long drive but he stopped the car near a park. It was raining very lightly. We got out of the car. I just followed his lead. It was a very pretty and secluded area where I'd never been to before. We walked side by side.

"Sharad and I used to come here early in the mornings sometimes and jog." He said. The park was big enough for that. It was late evening and there weren't many people. There were trees and flowers all around us. As we walked, his hand grazed against mine and I moved a few inches away from him. Even accidental touch was now something I couldn't handle.

We sat down on a bench. He moved a few inches closer and took my hand. I was surprised. I watched his face.

"I want to ask you something."

"Yes?"

"I want us to go and stay a night at our farmhouse...tomorrow. I think we need it. We need to get away from things for some time...and talk." He said. He was actually sweating. I could see how difficult it was for him to ask me this. Did he fear my rejection? My heart melted at seeing him struggling to ask me this. He paused several times and cleared his throat. He could barely maintain eye contact.

"I mean, if it's alright with you...I can't take you there in the daytime due to work." He said.

"It's...alright..." I said. Was it alright? I honestly didn't know anymore. Refusing him was physically and mentally painful. He smiled and looked very relieved at my answer. Seeing him smile somehow put me at ease as well. We continued our walk through the park. His mood seemed brighter. First the Ice cream outing followed by dinner at a restaurant and this long drive, and now the farmhouse, what was going on with him?

On the way back I stopped him midway.

"Take me to Di's house..." I said.

"What? But..."

"I'll stay with her tonight." I said. The truth is, I needed to have a serious talk with Bhavna Di. I needed someone to help me make sense of what was happening. He nodded. He drove me there and I told him to come inside. He refused.

"I don't think Bhavna likes me much, anymore..."

"Yuvraj, that's not true. Di is very softhearted. She knows you're a good person."

"No, it's just...you go. I'll pick you up tomorrow evening." He said.

"Wait...wait here...I want you to meet someone..." I said. I knocked Di's door and she was surprised to see me. I asked her if the baby's sleeping.

"No, he's awake. Why?"

"I'll explain later. Even I don't know why...I just need to let Yuvraj meet him." I said.




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Posted: 10 years ago
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part 2 was so sweet mehwish...
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Wow mehwish dr mindblowing yaar one day u will one of the famous writers it is for sure.Loved it a lot.
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It's awesome... 👏
nxt part asap pls...

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