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Posted: 10 years ago
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chapter 4

Recap : Suhani slaps soumya and ask her to leave from the room.



Soumya begins to cry.'Enough soumya enough,dnt make fake tears do u thnk i m a fool?I can undrstnd everythng ur my chldhood friend , i can understnd a small chnge in u soumya.Suhani brusts out in anger.'No suhani u didnt knw anything yuvraj loves...Stop this drama soumya and chale gao tum pls suhani folded her hands..Soumya runs out and bumps into dadi.Suhani closes the door and look at yuvraj..

Dadi is shocked to see soumya crying what happen soumya bato? Suhani suhani..slaps me dadi she cried out..Kya!!!!!how dare she is to slap u?wo apne ap ko samajthi kya he..U come with me i ll ask her..dadi pacifies soumya and walked to yuvaraj s room.

At room yuvraj is trying to speak suhani 'suhani pls ,pls understand u r mistaken there is nothing between us.pls believe me suhani..,suhani begins to talk bt is cut by sound of dadi..Ey ladki open door she shouts...yuvaraj go to open bt suhani stops.i ll open she wants to talk to me not u...Suhani opens the door and asked what happen dadi? Why are u shouting?kya tum soumya ko mara ?Dadi asked..Ha dadi is me problem kya he?Dadi gets angry and begins to shout at suhani hearing all these sounds pratima,sharad,rags,menka anuj sourabh come to yuvarjs room .What happens maa ji pratima asked to dadi..ur pyari bahu slaps soumya without any reason dadi replied to pratima.All gets stunned suhani soumya ko mara wo kabhi nay hoga they cannt belive it..

suhani:No dadi,there are so many reasons do u want to know that?suhani turns to soumya and ask her kya soumya dont u want to know that?soumya looks down..Look to my eyes soumya i ll tell u the reason..Tears fells from suhani s eyes..All of u know i consider soumya as my sisters i love her more than my own sister.Bt i was mistaken u r not my sister soumya sister to kya i feel shame to say that u r my best friend...Stop this lecture s suhani what is the matter wo bolo Rags cuts suhani..that s what i m going to say babhi.suhani replied and ask soumya Do u know what is this suhani shows her palms soumya looks in to it and is shocked to see the piece of cloth that she cuts from yuvraj s sweater.no i dnt know..what r u trying to prove suhani?soumya asked nervously..I dnt want to prove anything soumya.i just want to know the truth suhani continued..For what reasons u did this with me?For what purpose somu tume ye karnae padi to fall me in yuvraj s eyes?Soumya shooks her head no i dnt do anything soumya begins cry and ran 2wards dadi and said to dadi that i dont do anything she is lying dadi..Suhani gets angry hearing this agar tum ne kuch nay kia phir ye piece tumari cupbord me kyse aayi bathao soumya..u did this to snatch yuvraj this from me he na?I m trying to save ur marriage and u 2 broke my marrige suhani said and smiles in pain..suhani holds soumya and shakes her bolo soumya if i m wrong then correct me soumya bolo suhani shouts in pain...All are shocked and they cant what s heppening..Sharad looks at yuvraj he is also shocked and looking down..pratima runs to suhani and trying to pacify her.bt she didnt stop.No maa i want to know the truth muche patha he there is something iwhich i dont know bt tum sab janthe ho..Pls maa today i want to know what is happening around me suhani replied by wiping her tears..

suhani confronts soumya bathao somu kya tum krishna samjkar yuraj ko hug kia kya?again a shocking news for birla s..all are confused...all eyes turns to yuvraj he is silent and looking down as a theif..No suhani..tum ne jo kaha wo sab sach he..soumya begins to say' Ha suhani i love yuvraj and he loves me and yuvraj tum se nay he wants to marry me.bt i was blind in krishna s love and i cnnt see yuvraj s true love.. No i dnt beleive this suhani shouts yuvraj loves me u are lying and runs to yuvraj and asked she is lying he na yuvraj tell me yuvraj suhani cry vigoursly...rags and dadi smiles in happy bt remainig looks sad...





I need an opinion from u guys..In my ff do u need a crying suhani who leaves birla house by giving yuvraj to soumya or Ek suhani who fight against trio and soumya for her rights and keep her marraige with yuvraj ... ? i.e, a bold suhani...The next update will b of ur choices...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome chapter and hmmm hw about a strong suhani leaving him bt do whatever u like I love your writing.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Another great update!

I also think she should leave as Sandia does but not crying but with her head held high. I think Yuvraj should be the one to go after her (maybe not even right away). He should have to work hard to show her that he loves her. I'd love to see Suhani standing on her own 2 feet instead of crying for what could have been. I'd also love it if everyone in the family, right down to DaRagMen should also fell the loss of Suhani in the house so that when she eventually returns it will be to a home where everyone respects and appreciates her.


But anyway, I'm sure whatever you come up with will be amazing!👍🏼
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update I hope we get to see a strong Suhani
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Suhani superbly dealt with those 4 good for nothing people.lovd it.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I want her to fight back. Every ff here has suhani leave yuvraj, so u can take new route..
Moreover i want her to fight back those witches but she can make yuvraj to work hard to get her back even in same house by keeping her distance. she can go to some other room or pratima room for time being
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Posted: 10 years ago
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K friends by considering ur opinions, i m going 4 the next update.Hope u like this.
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Chapter 5


Suhani holds yuvraj s hand and say:Speak out yuvraj y r u silent..I want 2 hear from u kia ye sach he???Yuvraj cups her face and wipe her tears suhani looks yuvraj hopefully and he said suhani come with me i ll tell u everything & yuvraj turn to go suhani hold his hand say 'Bus i can understand..u silence make me everything clear yuvarj.No suhani babhi u r mistaken sharad spoke out.Ha beta pls listen to yuvraj once pratima support sharad..Ap ko bhi patha he na maa..suhani looks pratima and sharad..they cant answer her and look each other sadly..Suhani contiued with a smile:my mum used to say that I m a fool, now i think its true i am fool i trust my friend more than me she cheat me,i love my husband more than me he cheat me,i love my saaas more than my mummy she also cheat me aur tum sharad bhaiya i consider u as my brother he na u also cheat me..Now i understand yuvraj how pillows come between us and she remders their first night where snoopy comes and slept with yuvraj..and looks yuvraj tears falls down from her eyes...and ask If u love my friend then why dont u tell me yuvraj and y u marry me? Ma mere ghar me kyu ayi tumare rishtey lekar?Kya he yuvraj ye sab i dnt understand anything...


We ll tell u everything suhani Rags replied with a smile while sourabh looks her angrily so she stops and dadi continued : Wo sab pratima ke karan hua tha.Because of her memory fault..Yuvraj soumya kaha wo suhani suna aur because of her mistake u r here..Yuvraj gets stunned hearing this dadi knows everything.She continued looking yuvraj Aur ur dad threaten him...Dadi stop pls yuvraj shouts Papa ne kya kia dadi bolona dadi bolo suhani screams..Dadi continued ignoring yuvraj ur papa threaten yuvraj in the name of bank loan so he forcefully do this marraige..Yuvraj do this for his family.not 4 ur love..Suhani loss control and began to fall bt menka holds her..Suhani stands and walk 2wards room...Soumya stops her and say So pls give me my love back suhani..Because of me u got these all, this house,birla bahu ka place.,ab muche sab vapas chahiye.. u r wright u r a fool how do think suhani , yuvraj like a girl like u who looks perfection in all things will marry a girl like u..suhani cries and looks at yuvraj he is still silent he dont need me..suhani didnt answer soumya and walks to her room..and while closing the door she saw yuvraj lookig at her sadly bt it didnt stops her ,she closes the door and cries vigoursly..


All eyes turns to yuvraj he rushes out without looking anyone..Dadi,rags and soumya goes to their room galdly..menka holds pratima and take her to room.Anuj look at sharad and go outside..Ab kya hoga Suhani babhi ke saath..Sharad ask to himself..At sourabh s room he is sitting on the sofa thinking about suhani then rags enterd with a smiling face..Sourabh gets angry by seeing her smiling..Sourabh: How can u smile rags?Ithna kuch hua dont u feel anything? Muche kya sourabh she is not suitable for this house uska color uski batein i just hate her..agar wo suhani go from this house i ll arrange a party for that rags replied.Sourabh slaps rags and said agar suhani go from this house u too be ready for going to ur mother s house..Sourabh shouts..Raga gets stunned by seeing him like that u slap me for that girl..rags screams in pain..No rags agar i did this before then i dnt have to saw these all..mere ye baath kaan khulkar suno if u want to live here live as my wife otherwise u can go..I m fedup with u so pls...Sourabh turnoff the lights and rests 2 sleep..

Yuvraj is standing front of his room he cnt go inside,he cant face suhani,he dnt want to see suhani crying he turns to go bt stoped by suhnai words hey bhagvan How can u do this to me ?whom i trust the most those people betray me.Aur papa how can u think i happy with a yuvraj who doesnot love me..I lost everything everything suhani cry vigoursly..Yuvraj wants to pacifies her bt he cant..He closes his eyes a tear fall down from his eyes..Suddenly he felt a hand on his shoulder he turns and see its sharad yuvraj cnt control himself and hugs sharad suhani..Will she forgive me sharad?Sharad pacifies him she ll understand u guru..me hu na..

Next day morning yuvraj wakes up and realse he is sleeping in sofa and suddenly wake up suhani kaha he suhani yuvraj called out..Ramesh come and said bhabi is not in home bhaiya...Not in home means he runsout to room suhani is not there suhnai he shouts..he looks in to the cupboard and her dress also not here...Suhani he shouts...



Precap: Suhani to dadi:Muche ek naam he dadi u can call me as suhani or Mrs.birla..Everybody gets stunned seeing the change in suhani...
Edited by maluvijay. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome chapter cnt wait for the next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update can't wait to see what happens next
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved the update and truly can't wait for th enext one! Finally Suhani is standing up to Dadi and her "hey ladki" b.s.!

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