Rishtey...[ ff ] Chapter 11 page 11

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Hai friends, I m trying to write a ff here I know my english is not good.This is first atempt to write a ff.I continue only if you ppl like it.So pls comment geniunly..


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Chapter-1
Birla house is shattered by the shouting of krishna.He called out 'soumya where are you?'All members in the birla parivar come to drawing room and get shocked seeing krishna inside the house. yuvarj gets angry & pulled his collar 'How dare u 2 come my hous like this' .Suhani try to stop him but she fails.'Stop krishna..U want to talk to me na so leave yuvraj & talk 2 me 'soumya said.'Ha soumya I want 2 talk 2 you &u ll b with me when i went back from this house'.'stop this non sense krishna jab soumya tumare sath aana ny chahti to why r u forcing her' Dadi spokes out.krishna folded his hands and said' i respect u kioki aap hum se bade he but pls dont interfere in our life.I m talkng to my wife.yuvraj gets angry and moving 2wrds krishna pratima stops and noded No let them speak.

Krishna turns 2 soumya 'what is this soumya yeh divorce papers kya yeh soumya,kya ithna weak he hamara pyar?Pls answer me soumya answer me..'Krishna s eyes get tears and birlas gets shocked hearing all these.Somu kya yeh sach he ?To phir newyr party me jo hua vo kya thi?suhani asked. pls suhani mind ur bussines ye mere problem he i ll solve it.somuya replied.'Tamen se bath karo soumya yuvraj'bursts out.'Pls yuraj its ok let them speak 'suhani said by holdind yuraj s hand.Soumya turns to krishna 'Bolo tum, what u want 2 say bolo i dont have any time to waste 4 u.Ek aur baath jo bolna he sab ke samne bolna i dont want any personal talk with u'.Krishna gets shocked hearng this.'No soumya i dont want 2 waste ur time when i come here hame ye viswas tha ki u will tell me that divorce ki decision tumare nay thi or it was a wrong decision but now i understand soumya here pyar loss and paisa wins.Tum is 10 lakh ke rs dekhar kya sabith karna chahiti he soumya paisa wins over love?Bolo soumya,hum tum se pyar karti he soumya jo pyar pahale se karti ayi but u changed a lot soumya a lot ...'Krishna s sound gets shattered in pain&his pain can be seen in his eyes.Even yuvraj suhani,pratima ,sharad,anuj,sourabh feels bad seeing krishna s state and are shocked seeing soumya s never mind expression.

Krishna contiued,'I know hum se mistakes to hua but i lov u soumya ,i cant imagine any1 in ur place but my lov fails soumyawhy dont u understand me when we got married i had no money no job mere pas kuch nahi tha .Me tume sab khushi dena chahtha tha bt i had nothing 2 give u is fruststion and gussa me tum par nikala .I am accepting my all mistakes and i raise hands against u.All r my mistakes soumya i ready 2 appologize soumya.krishna folded his hands'Sory soumya i really sorry.I promise u i ll keep u happy pls give me a 2nd chance soumya pls come with me'.Soumya looks at dadi she nods no and point at yuvraj.soumya look at krishna and said'Ho gaya tumara ab mere bath suno I send this divorce paper by my wish.I dont want 2 spoil my life by living with u.Now i know how to live my life & what s love and eyed yuvaraj.

Rags and menka are enjoying the drama 'kya is krishna soumya ko brainwash karke hamare plan spoil kareka jiji ?' oh shutup menka jo b ho ab tum ye tamasa deko 'Rags replied.
U need divorce na soumya lo de rahi hu divorce .Mere ek baath yad rahna ki for whom u are doing this na vo kabhi tumare apana nay ho jaunga..He goes to sign the papers but suhani stops him and said 'Krishna dont take any decision in hurry.hum he na i ll talk to soumya'Krishna smiles at her in pain No suhani pyar dil se aatha he jo dil me pyar nay he to rishtey se kya leave it..'He turns to soumya and signed the papers Ye lo soumya u r free now nobody is there u to stop u can live as u like.But pls dont cheat suhani she blindly trust u ye request he soumya...'he took the cheque and torr it and give it soumya.'All the best soumya Good bye..me in paisa se nay tum se pyar kia.krishna turns to go bt soumya hold his hand 'ruko krishna '.Dadi gets worried and said 2 rags 'ye ladki kya karna ja raha he rags kuch karo muche soumya chahiye..'

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice one.Saumya will loose everything.Today krish is begging n tomorrow she will be the one begging.
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I dont have any hope for this sowmya. But i really hope suhani will wake up soon and yuvraj too..
I want sowmya to beg yuvraj to accept her and when he reject her. I want her to beg krishna to take her back.

If krishna take her back or not that it is upto u.If it is my choice i will get krishna a woman who will control his short temper and stand by his side, his new wife can be suhani's BF. She can be like strong girl with right sense who can guide suhani and suhani can help her to reach krishna heart.
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Ahaa...curious to know why Soumya stopped Krishna...does she have a change of heart?? Continue pls...
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Souyma really needs to think long and hard she will regret this one day
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Awesome start to the story I eagerly await for the next chapter and please make suhani slap souyma when she finds out what she is up to
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Awesome start! Love how sincere Krishna sounded. Too bad Somu couldn't see that and is being led like a dog on a leash by Dadi. Can't wait to read the next update!
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very nice..👏 plz update soon..
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Thank u friends 4 ur comments..


Chapter-2


Krishna look soumya hopefuly.'Take this also krishna,this is the last sign of our mariage.She handovr the broken mangalsutra to krishna making krishna and birla s utterly shocked.She turns and goes to her room the trio get happy and follows her.Krishna look at suhani,'i know u dont like me bt remember my words soumya wil cheat u, soumya to kya sab lok tume cheat kar rahi he suhani and looks at yuvaraj.If u need any help u can come to me,i ll b with u as ur good brother.Ek bath aur when u knw what is the truth then dont make soumya win.What are u saying krishna.I dnt undrstnd suhani asked in confusion.Krishna smiles at her and holds yuvraj s hand and hugs him.'i knw i hurt u a lot sory yuvarj.I dnt knw you love suhani or not bt she loves u a lot ye baath hum se syada kisi ko nay janthe.Then he rushes outside.Yuvarj,i knw u are...Yuvraj cuts suhani stop suhani tum ma ko lekar anthar jao.Suhani nods yes and leaves with pratima.Ye sab kya he sharad i dnt undr stnd anythng.If she If she dnt lov krishna kal rath jo hua vo kya tha..Kal rath kya hua guru?Yuvaraj shook his head no nothng i must talk 2 soumya.Bt guru..Sharad called bt yuvrj rushes 2 soumya s room.

krishna is in his room he rembers the moments spnd wth soumya,and took mangalsutra from his pocket.'no soumya u cnt leave me like this one day u ll realise my love and u beg for this mangalsutra.Jis suhani ne tume apna ghar le gaya us suhani ll kick out u frm that house.I m waitng 4 that soumya u ll b on the road.Now i m living to see that day soumya he said to himself.
Yuvraj knocks the door and see trio in her room.Kya hua beta sab tek to he na?Bt yuvrj dnt listn her.Soumya i want 2 talk to u.K yuvraj we ll go rags repld and leaves with menaka and dadi.Soumya smiles at him bolo yuvaraj kya bath he?What is this soumya?What is hapening here?Bathavo soumya...Yuvraj s voice get shattered in anger.Kya matlab,i told u na i love u yuvraj,i want 2 live with u. Kia!!! yuvraj shouts..he contiued Are u in senses?Do u know what u r saying..U r some1 s wife and me kisi ke husband b hu..

soumya:I know yuvarj.tum suhani ko chodo no i know u dont love her.u only love me..That was my mistake me tume reject kia,i was blind in krishna s love bt i dont want to reapeat my mistake again..She cries and hold yuvraj s hand tightly..he pushes her and soumya fell on the bed..

yuvraj:Enough soumya enough,do u know what r u saying?how can u cheat suhani she is ur best frriend he na ?She blindly trusts u soumya..Soumya wipe her tears and ask yuvarj why r u bothering about her?When i am accepting ur love is me suhani kyom...yuvraj cuts her by saying kyonki she is my WIFE ..YUVRAJ BIRLA KA WIFE...AND SHE IS MY PRESENT AND WILL B MY FUTURE ALSO..U R MY PAST JO PAST I DONT WANT 2 REMEMBER..AB U R ONLY MY WIFE S FRIEND IS KE ALAVA I DONT HAVE ANY RELATION WITH U SOUMYA..eK BAATH AUR U R ONLY GUEST HERE SO GUEST BANKAR HE RAHNA DONT INTERFERE IN MY LIFE AND DONT TRY 2 COME BETWEEN ME AND SUHANI..otherwise jo hoga vo ab me kah nay saktha...yuvraj rushes out angrily..

Soumy:No yuvraj,ise nay ho saktha she shooks her head..I left krishna 4 u yuvraj dont behave 2 me like this i did this all 4 our life yuvraj dont leave me yuvraj stop yuvraj...She shouts bt he doesnt stops..soumya sits in her knees and cries...Trio enters Why r u crying soumya?What did yuvraj say?rags asked in anxiety..Soumya looks at dadi menka holds her I m leaving this house dadi..But y soumya kya hua tha?dadi is shocked hearing this..bcoz yuvraj doesnt need me and said me 2 go back to krishna..No it wont happen u will be my bahu.I ll kick out suhani..but dadi..soumya cuts her agar isa nay hua where ll i go ?

u dont cry dadi pacifies her..Agar isa kuch hua then i ll tell yuvaraj everything.Kia somu?What will u tell..menaka asked.Ye sab planning dadi ka he..soumya said by wiping her tears..Soumya!!!!Rags shouts..Chilavo math babhi...So its ur responsibility to unite me and yuvaraj varna kya hoga vo aap sab ko patha he na...?Soumya smiles cunningly and walks out..Trio is stunned by hearing this from soumya..

Edited by maluvijay. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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So Sowmya started showing her colour. Hope these evil trio suffer in her hands.
Hope yuvani will stand together against her and kick her out..

Poor Krishna..

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