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Posted: 17 years ago
Reception….

Sheela Devi was standing and looking inside the interrogation room…. She was a tall elegant woman clad in a perfect white suit…. She had her hair tied up in a long pony… She had a lean face which reflected intelligence and power….. When Vishal neared her she turned smiling…..

Vishal too smiled back and extended his hand…. 😊

Vishal: Ms. Sheela Devi…. I am Vishal Malhotra…. Thank you for coming…. Sorry aap ko yahan aana pada…..

Taking his hand Sheela said….

Sheela: No problem Mr.Malhotra…. (Leaving his hand) Ye sab police officeron ka farz hai ki sab cases me sabki madad karein…. I would be glad if I could be of any help…. Sorry ki main kal hi nahi aa saki…. Apne case ke silsile me Pune gayi thi…. Aaj subah louti to office me message dekha…. I came straight here….

Vishal: (With a soft voice in respect was adorned) Thank you so much mam….. (Then remembering) Mam…. (Indicating Dipika standing beside him) Ye Dipika Gosh…. Special Squad ki Chief aur Forensics Head…..

Dipika shook hands with her…. Vishal went on to introduce the rest of the team who shook hands with Sheela…. They felt that she was more grand in real than what they had saw in the video…. She was spreading an awe of high that they had to stop that wonder…. 😛

After all the introductions…..

Vishal: Mam…. Please…. Aayiye….

Saying Vishal indicated her to come inside the office when Sheela Devi asked amused….

Sheela: Mr.Malhotra… Aap interrogations isi room (Indicating the room by which she was standing) me karte hain….. To?!?!?

Vishal: Mam please…. Aap koi suspect nahi hain…. Its just a formal questioning…. Kyunki aap crime scene me thi aur laash ko aapne hi pehle dekha….

Sheela: (Smiling) I know Mr.Malhotra…. Actually I should myself have come here to see you… Lekin mere bhi cases hain naa…. Anyways it is okay if I was questioned here…. I don't mind…. If that's your rule…. 😊

Dipika: (Interrupting) No Mam nothing like that…. Please aap aayiye… Andar cabin me hi baithke baat karte hain….

Sheela Devi just shrugged her shoulders and smiling went forward…. Vishal, Dipika led her to their cabin and the rest of the team followed them…… 😊
Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
i didnt knew that vineet is very ghaatiya and laanti sort of guy 😡
but i dont think that they should close the case 😕
.....but really whatever seela devi is, they should have taped the questioning part of the rules........
buhat acha likhaa 👏i always 😳
acp sheela younger sister died but there was no hype about the case.....strange na
can there be any links.......just hunches😉

oh no....i was all excited when vishal and dipika were about to fight but .....maybe next time 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Amna me too waiting for the day when Aru will propose to Deeps... Kaheen opposite ho jaye to bhi no problem, but I want him to take the first step forward.... Its looks good if a guy does that first😳

Amna are you sure Special Squad Dipika ki baat sun raha hai???? Hmm..... 😕 😉

total agreed yaar......girls.........specially shy girls like deeps dont propose😳

i know what ever dipika say she will always be the 'mummy' and special squad will always show aryan loyality by breaking rules😆no expectations up

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

i didnt knew that vineet is very ghaatiya and laanti sort of guy 😡
but i dont think that they should close the case 😕
.....but really whatever seela devi is, they should have taped the questioning part of the rules........
buhat acha likhaa 👏i always 😳
acp sheela younger sister died but there was no hype about the case.....strange na
can there be any links.......just hunches😉

oh no....i was all excited when vishal and dipika were about to fight but .....maybe next time 😆

Itni jaldi bhi kaise Amna.... Unke beech jhagade! Waise their stares are more than enough to equal a fight😉

Ha.... Wah.... Mere officers itne inteeligent hain ki bahut acchhe haunches bhi nikaalne lage.... Wah re wah😃

Edited by maha_prakrti - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Ah... There on the dot you have said right about Dipika Gosh, Aryan Khanna and our team.... But But But.... When status changes loyality automatically changes naa 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part 👏 👏 👏
vishal n deepika ki fight me vadda mazza aaya,
aise shubh avsar aage bhi padne ko mile to changa hai ji... 😉 😉 😉 .......!
u kno aryan deepika ke chakkar me main case ko bhool hi gai thi,dubaara se padhna pada......
totally agreed wid vishaal....!
vineet k saath jo hua theek hua.....but case must go on 😊 😊 😊


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Posted: 17 years ago
nic part! the tiff between vishal and dipika is awesom!
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Posted: 17 years ago
it was great.

love the part about vishal and dipika, it looks like they are in school and fighting about something.

it reminding me of aryan and dipika, when ever aryan did something he should not have done.


it was awesome part.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: diya(swtgrl)

nice part 👏 👏 👏
vishal n deepika ki fight me vadda mazza aaya,
aise shubh avsar aage bhi padne ko mile to changa hai ji... 😉 😉 😉 .......!
u kno aryan deepika ke chakkar me main case ko bhool hi gai thi,dubaara se padhna pada......
totally agreed wid vishaal....!
vineet k saath jo hua theek hua.....but case must go on 😊 😊 😊


Hey Diya... Thanks for the encouraging comments.... As for the tiff.... Hmm... Zaroor.... And many too, kyunki Vishal me kcuh changes aane waale hain... For good or for bad will get to see later😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rockswizard

nic part! the tiff between vishal and dipika is awesom!

Thank you Shruti😃

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