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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Pukke ka pukka Amna.... Humare officers secrets rakhne me hai to maahir.... Aur to aur mummy ki daant ke kaaran aur bhi chup baithenge😆 But more than that these two months have increased their love and respect and for Dipika.... Jaie vo Aryan ke kisi bhi baat ko nahi taalte, this is the same case now with them towards Dipika😳

you know i have been thinking about this very day so much😊 that dipika will get the respect and friendship she deserve from all the officers and they will realize she was saying the right thing and for their own good

and i am happy to see ka ab ss team aryan se zyada dipika ki baat sunaan gay thanks kritu😃🤗🤗

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Posted: 17 years ago
it was great.

i love the last line about dreams.

i feel everyone is falling in love so they will get married at the same day that will be great to look at.
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Posted: 17 years ago
lagta hai zubin ko daandiya kuch jyada hi jor se lag gai 😆 😆 😆 .........tabhi vo ladki ab tak yaad aa rahi hai.... 😆

gud to see vishal obeying deepika like a shareef student..... 😆

n ye kya krits,fir 1 suspence,yaar tumhe to story pata hai........or hmara kya??? 😕
we'll kept on thinking abt it 4 da whole day....

anyways........luv dat....!
cont. soon,waiting eagerly 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
dear
its going rocking 👏

i luv those sweeto meeto scenes b/w dipika and aryan 😉 😉 ............they know each other so well man....... 😳

Aryan almost make neha to speak the truth...... 😆 ............but mummye .............sweeto.......better luck next time 😆

Zubin 🤪 .............Neha ko choor k kissi or k peeche...........1st time dekha..... 😆 😛 ......but its nice to know 😳

Vishal behave sweetly...........but i m missing my bhai-bhabhi yaar......... 😭

Kabhi khushboo, kabhi jhoonka, kabhi hawa sa lagay
Juda ho k bhi tu mujh se jura jura sa lagay

bhai-bhabhi mere ko
😳

luving ir krithika

lolz
ana 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

what...?? you always do this make us wait!!! 😆 but cool yaar
both of the girls are missing but until we dont know how the vineet guy knew them or who is he ,its no possible to formulate any theory 🤔
vishal is goog yaar lagta hai na that he is the cheif investigator 😳
i think maybe the bua knows where meena and shaila are becoz she didnt lodge any complain!

apne zubin ko phele bar sandwich ke elawa kisi aur ki dreams main gum dekha acha laga 😆

Hmm.... I really sppreciate my officers thiniking about the case.... Dimaag doud raha hai... Wah ji wah ji wah ji👏

😆Are yaar..... Poory shaadi to karna chahata tha hi, lekin uski community hi hai aise.....

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: maisoon

you know i have been thinking about this very day so much😊 that dipika will get the respect and friendship she deserve from all the officers and they will realize she was saying the right thing and for their own good

and i am happy to see ka ab ss team aryan se zyada dipika ki baat sunaan gay thanks kritu😃🤗🤗

Amna me too waiting for the day when Aru will propose to Deeps... Kaheen opposite ho jaye to bhi no problem, but I want him to take the first step forward.... Its looks good if a guy does that first😳

Amna are you sure Special Squad Dipika ki baat sun raha hai???? Hmm..... 😕 😉

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sam78

it was great.

i love the last line about dreams.

i feel everyone is falling in love so they will get married at the same day that will be great to look at.

😆Sam kyun ek bada Special Squad wedding.... Wonderful😃

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: diya(swtgrl)

lagta hai zubin ko daandiya kuch jyada hi jor se lag gai 😆 😆 😆 .........tabhi vo ladki ab tak yaad aa rahi hai.... 😆

gud to see vishal obeying deepika like a shareef student..... 😆

n ye kya krits,fir 1 suspence,yaar tumhe to story pata hai........or hmara kya??? 😕
we'll kept on thinking abt it 4 da whole day....

anyways........luv dat....!
cont. soon,waiting eagerly 😊 😊 😊

Nice commenting Diya..... Zubin to us din se hi mar gaya hi samjho.... Pata nahi vo ladki koun hai... Kaise milegi use😉 Hmm.... Suspense ke bina special squad is not interesting naa.....😃

Diya are you sure Vishal Dipika ki baat maan raha hai😉 Aaj dekhna hoga kya hota hai

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: cool_SK

dear
its going rocking 👏

i luv those sweeto meeto scenes b/w dipika and aryan 😉 😉 ............they know each other so well man....... 😳

Aryan almost make neha to speak the truth...... 😆 ............but mummye .............sweeto.......better luck next time 😆

Zubin 🤪 .............Neha ko choor k kissi or k peeche...........1st time dekha..... 😆 😛 ......but its nice to know 😳

Vishal behave sweetly...........but i m missing my bhai-bhabhi yaar......... 😭

Kabhi khushboo, kabhi jhoonka, kabhi hawa sa lagay
Juda ho k bhi tu mujh se jura jura sa lagay

bhai-bhabhi mere ko
😳

luving ir krithika

lolz
ana 😛

Ana... Tum aur tumhari comments😆 Bhaiyya bhabhi ki itni missing.... Hai.... Fikar na kar aaj ya kal bhabhi ki mention hogi... Milne ki to wait karna padega😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
Seeing their faces Vishal and Dipika knew that they had some real bad news…..

Dipika: Kya hua Neha? Any news?

Neha and Ajay came inside and looking at Dipika and Vishal in turns said…..

Neha: Dipika vo victim Vineet Shah…. Asal me to uske kayi naam hain….. Lekin police records me use Rathe Mishra ke naam se jana jaata hai….

Both Vishal and Dipika spoke together shocked "Police records?!?!?" They looked at each other thinking the same…. Was he a criminal? ❓

Neha: Haan…. Actually maine to pehle income tax records, bank records check kiya…. Lekin us naam se koi information nahi nikla….. Ek hunch par maine newspapers pe search kiya to iska ek chota article chapa tha…. Which was dated two years ago…. Ye Vineet ya Rathe jo bhi hai vo (Irritated) actually ladkiyon ko phasatha tha…. Unse pyaar ka naatak karke ghar se bhaga le jaata tha… Unhe influence karta tha ki ghar pe jo kuch bhi gehene aur paise hain le aaye…. Aur ek raat uske saath raat guzaarta tha aur doosre din….

Neha couldn't continue…. She was angry beyond walls….. That kameena…. He was a chaeat and they had to investigate his murder! 🤢

But it was obvious what would have been next….. He would sell those girls…. These B*******! 😡

As for Vishal and Dipika it was a blow…. They hadn't thought in their lives that they, Special Squad, would ever have to investigate the murder of such a criminal…. Vishal was doing all he could to control his anger….

As Neha stopped Ajay continued…..

Ajay: Police records se pata chala ki usne India me kayi sheharon me aise ladkiyon ko phasa kar Mumbai le aata tha…. Kayi ladkiyon ki zindagi usne barbaad ki hai…. Ek ladki from Chandigarh, usne complaint darz karvaya tha….. Pehli baar.…. Use arrest karvaya gaya tha aur fifteen days remand me rakha gaya tha……

Neha: Lekin hearing ke din vo ladki nahi aayi…. Itni courage lekar complaint kiya hai to pata nahi court kyun nahi aayi?

Ajay: Neha records me bataya gaya tha naa ki us ladki ne apne mata pita ke khilaaf complaint ki thi…. Isliye shayad unke pressure me doosre hi din shehar chodke chali gaye…. No trace of her as of the police….

Neha: (Angrily 😡 ) Lekin thos sabot na hone ke karan court ne use rihaa kar diya naa…. And he was roaming about destroying more girls lives….

Vishal let out his frustration by banging on his table…. Everybody jumped at the sound and turned to look at him…. 😵 They were engrossed in the discussion that such a sound came as a real bang…. He was fuming…. He said very angrily and sternly….. 😡

Vishal: Acchha hua mar hi gaya….. (Turning back to Dipika he said) Dipika hum is case ko aage nahi badayenge… We are closing it….. 😔

Neha and Ajay jerked their heads upright stunned at what Vishal had said…. They looked at each other and shook their heads in disbelief…… Also a stunned Dipika looked up at him and asked slowly to confirm what she heard was right…..
😵
Dipika: Kya?

Vishal: As it is case is case me evidences itna nahi hai…. Aur investigation karni ki zaroorat bhi nahi hai…. Issi baat ko kehke just close this case….. He deserved to die….

Dipika even more shocked sat up straight in her chair….. Even Neha and Ajay never expected Vishal to react this way…. 😲

Dipika: Vishal… Tum jaante ho tum kya keh rahe ho?

Vishal walked back to her… Catching the table for support he bent down to look at Dipika straight in her eyes and said…… 😈

Vishal: Main poore hosho awaaz me hi hoon…. That guy deserved to die…. Whoever is the culprit or rather should I say a mahan sevak did a great deed to the society….

Dipika: (Angrily 😡 ) Come what may Vishal…. We are solving this case…. Mara hua aadmi jaisa bhi ho…. We are not the ones to decide who deserves the end….. Its our duty to find the culprit and that we do….

Vishal straightened and folding his arms across his chest said…..

Vishal: (With a don't care attitude) Who cares?

Dipika angry got up and looking at him in an ordering stare said….. 😡

Dipika: I care….. So we are going ahead with the case…….

Vishal and Dipika had a cold eye-locking stare…. Neha and Ajay were confused as to what to do…. Should they interfere and part them?

Just as they decided to do it the cabin door opened again and Boxer entered… But seeing the situation he stopped mid-way and raised his eyebrows at Ajay… Ajay just shrugged off his shoulders shaking his head…… 😕

Neha cleared her throat to make their presence felt…. Vishal and Dipika looked away… Dipika hand in her hip pulled back her hair in frustration and Vishal was about to stomp off to his place when Boxer stopped him…..

Boxer: Vishal… Sheela Devi aayein hain….

Vishal looked at him frowning…..

Vishal: Koun?

Boxer: Sheela Devi…. ACP, Mumbai Police….

Vishal: (Surprised) Oh… She's here…..

Vishal looked at Dipika once sternly and went out of the cabin…. Ajay and Boxer looked at both of them and followed him…

Neha stood there looking at Dipika….

Neha: (Slowly) Dipika….Its okay… Relax…. 😕

Dipika just looked at Neha and smiled feebly….

Dipika: Let's go…..

And the whole team went to the reception to meet Sheela Devi…… 😊

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