THE REVIVAL II updated 90-99 fin - Page 7

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Posted: 15 years ago
#61
Actioonnnnnnnnnnnssssssss all around ,Junhui ki kick bhaa gayi reeeeee😃
So fever is heating up,and Milind who is this dear?
and how do Rajshree know him
waiting for The Revival Dear😃
Greatly written and greatly described ,Great work indeed⭐️ 👏 ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
wow gr8 work pooja.......
SS in action 😃 gr8888 👍🏼
but aryan ko chut kese aye.....
raid is so good na....u described everything so well 👏.... u did an appreciative work dear

and this milind....rajshree knows him na.......how???
ooooo its a suspense...but plz revealed soon na....

wow junhui kick.............. thts awesome yar 👍🏼....... liked her way alot....
they found something intresting....hmmm jaldi btaoo kya....
but in childrens room.....how clever he is whats his name....hmmm wait let me see.........oh yes shivi pal..😡

really nice update...and surely waiting for moreeeeeeeeee😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Ah haaaaaaaaaaa............ Hmmmmmmmm......... Big shots are always sooooo............. High.... But act very very low!!!!!!! 😡

So Milind aur Rajo ek doosre ko jaante hain.... I know.... Kaise? Ye to you know Pooja.... Isliye jaldi jaldi batana hunh 😃
Tck.... 👏 Liked the way Aryan asked Junhui's kick help 😆 All her training is coming useful in kicking someone or something or the other... Hope Parth doesn't get the dose of such kick when he speaks of it... But on the other hand if he gets kicked it will be fun 😉
They got something.... Wonderful to hear... But from where did Aru dear get hurt from!?!?
Great raids Pooja.... Liked the way you described the way they went to the house.... Really the picture ran in front of my eyes.... Waiting to hear the result of other raid which would happen only if you give us a super duper update soon enough! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️



thanx !

I really really like writing action scenes, you know!

will update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Aaditee

I love the way Janhavi kicks that wardrobe. It's so cool!!
The house stank of wealth? Where did you get that one from?
Nice one though!



hey..... will refrain from calling you my favourite name....or you will fly back and push me into a swimming pool or somethin😆😉
nice 2 c your comments! and that i got from, my head you know....ideas generally appear from there!
will update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ruha

Actioonnnnnnnnnnnssssssss all around ,Junhui ki kick bhaa gayi reeeeee😃
So fever is heating up,and Milind who is this dear?
and how do Rajshree know him
waiting for The Revival Dear😃
Greatly written and greatly described ,Great work indeed⭐️ 👏 ⭐️



thanks...yeah fever is really up....and bullets will soon fly!
will update soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: Veena..

wow gr8 work pooja.......
SS in action 😃 gr8888 👍🏼
but aryan ko chut kese aye.....
raid is so good na....u described everything so well 👏.... u did an appreciative work dear

and this milind....rajshree knows him na.......how???
ooooo its a suspense...but plz revealed soon na....

wow junhui kick.............. thts awesome yar 👍🏼....... liked her way alot....
they found something intresting....hmmm jaldi btaoo kya....
but in childrens room.....how clever he is whats his name....hmmm wait let me see.........oh yes shivi pal..😡

really nice update...and surely waiting for moreeeeeeeeee😃



thanx! as for Raj's and Milind's connection, will reveal soon!😉
action scenes are my favourite, i write them painstakingly, as much as i write alll lovey dovey scenes!
will update soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

16. A STRAY BULLET

Half an hour later

Aaryan, Milind, Junhui, Ajay, Neha, Rajashree and Shreyas looked at the proceedings. Thirteen AK 47 s and three kg cocaine, which was worth crores had been confiscated from the house.


The surly actor was being led to the police van, when he suddenly turned.


He grabbed the constable who was leading him and snatched his revolver.


Aiming it in the direction of the officers, he managed to fire one shot before he was subdued by the police.


The bullet hit Aaryan's hand and he doubled up, surprised by the attack.


The bullet had found its mark.


Neha rushed to help him. Junhui turned to look at the man, with a scorching look in her eyes.


He held the bleeding hand and walked towards the man. "Tere jaise ***** ko jeene ka koi adhikaar nahi hain. Jo cheezen aapne apne beti ke kamre mein chipayi thi ussise tumhari beti jaise kayi hazar masoomon ki jaan chali jaa sakti hain."


Aaryan looked towards the house.


In the large doorway, stood the unfortunate wife, looking stricken. The two children were peeping from behind her. She led them inside.


Aaryan once more looked at Shivi Pal.


His face was now contorted with guilt and full realization of his actions.


The bullet had found its mark.


"Isse le jao" Aaryan said.


Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68

17. COMING CLOSER

Present

Special Squad Pantry

Then Parth narrated their raid. They had raided a warehouse on the coast, in which, they has suspected the presence of illegal firearms.


The raid had been conducted along with the Coastal Police, and it had been hugely successful. The illegal weapons had introduced a new direction to the whole investigation and Parth had reported the matter immediately.


Deepika sighed, "Aaryan agli baar aise nahi chalege. I am coming next time."


Junhui was leaning against the counter. She said, "Sure. Waise bhi doosri team ke saath ek officer kam tha."


Taara was looking at Parth with wide eyed admiration. Junhui turned away.


Deepika said, "Good work."


Her eyes traveled between Parth and Junhui and back again. Suddenly she caught Aaryan looking at both of them too. They exchanged a furtive, secret smile.


Junhui sat beside Aaryan and stretched like a cat. Her short brown hair were ruffled.


She reached out for the newspaper exactly at the moment Parth reached out for it.


He looked at her hand hovering over it . Black and silver thin metallic bangles today, he noted, and withdrew his hand.


She took the newspaper calmly from the table, stretched and made for the exit.


Parth looked at his watch. It was nearly one pm.


"Aaj ke liye bahut hua naa? I think I will ask the others to go home." He said.


"Parth, maine sab ko bol diya hain....." Deepika said.


"Okay'.Mujhe Ajay-Boxer se....."


Muttering, he too, followed Junhui out.


Taara too jumped up with an air of determination. She walked towards the door purposefully.


Aaryan sat looking into his coffee.


Deepika stirred her juice awkwardly.


Aaryan's injured hand was on the table.


She inched her hand across over to his........


Aaryan felt the small warm hand on his and for a heart stopping moment, he was wildly happy........


The euphoria evaporated away, as Deepika pulled his hand and examined his wound. "Dard to nahi ho raha hain naa?" she asked.....


"Nahi" he muttered distractedly.....the catch in her voice had inspired dreams in him.....


Never ever had he thought Deepika Ghosh's touch would send such jolts through his body...but the reason behind this.....was proving to be irritatingly elusive.........

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
oooooo coming closer to eachother 😳 😳 😳

tht stupid person tht ediot actor ki shootd bullet hamare aru ko lag gaye na 😔 thts very bad.....howq much it pain him na....and more to dipika😉
and parth's raid was successful too...thts superb👏 welldone dear👍🏼

well chalo acha hoa k sab kam tmam hoa........ stupid person illegal kaam karta hai...poor family of his suffr alot bcz of him😡

and pantry scenes are cool.....ab parth kya junhui se baat karne gaya hai🤔........ and sach me deepika next time se sath jaye gi 😃 thts gr8 yara👍🏼

Mr.aryan app ko agree karna pare ga tht u r developing some feelings for her😳....and plz accept it soon na😕

its a really nice update yar....enjoy reading it.......
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thnx alot and the same line plz update soon...its getting really very intresing....abhi milind k bare mai bhi thu pata chalna hai na😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Cough Cough annnnnnnnndddddddd cough! 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃 😃
Loved the pantry convosssssssss........ Haiiiiiiii....... Dipi's outward reaction has made Aru yearn for more naa.... Cho chwweettttttttttttttt.......... But why elude Aryan Khanna, paas hai keh dete to aur paas aa jayeeeeeeeee 😳
Ab JP ka main ab ke liye kuch nahi keh sakti..... They love each other so much, but their egos are getting lot in their way..... Sudhare jaldi to theek... Ab is Taraa ko abhi kuch determination soojni thi kya!?!? Zaroor hai hai ki jo kuch bhi use sooja humare dearest Junhui ko pasand nahi aane waali.... Let's see!
Case and raids were awesome.... One person does the mistake but there are so many who suffer beacuse of that.... Especially for his mistake more than him been punished it is the family who get punished.... So saddddddddddddd 😡
Wonderful start and wonderful coming closer dear.... And needless to say that tiny awesome brain of your has worked a lot on the updates and we know they are ready.... So posty post sooonnnnnnnnnn ⭐️ 👏 ⭐️ ⭐️

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