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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: ruha

Aryan ko kya hua,haath ko kaise lagi
someone cheated in the mission,Really understand how angry Aryan was True naa Kaise kaise log hote hai
But happy Deepika is there to control him😛
He looked at her, amused. "Tum kabse rules ko overrule karna seekhi?
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ka kare Aryan aapki worry Deepika se kya kya karati hai,Dekhna hai
Fantastic Dear👏 ⭐️ 👏
waiting for mories😃




glad that u enjoied it!

Will b posting!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Veena..

hey wow an update😃

oh deepika bhi thu jana jati thi raid pe use bhi jane dete😕.... poor girl kitna maan tha na us ka😒................ aryan ik sath rehne ka 😛

hey aryan u must take her with u for the next time.....got it❓ 😛

or deepika was so worried for him na😳......ermm foe every one😉 😃
jab tak awaz nahi suni....tab tak sukoon nahi mila............itni tadap😛 😆
aur aryan ko bhi acha laga us ki awaz sun kar..........ooooooooo cool haan 😳

😲 but whats this aru got injured....oh god zada thu nahi lagi na....or dehko zara hamari dipi kitni worried thi ao yeh hain k use bata bhi nahi rahe k kya hoa😕....aisa nahi karte aryan jiii

nice and intresting update yar................thnx alot
and waiting for moreeeeee😃


😆😆😆
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posting soon!



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Posted: 15 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Oielaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!

Cheatings in such missions always happen.... it's like if nothing such happens it is a wierd case.... But hopefully they find the culprit soon!
Haiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!! Itniiiiiii phikfar unko, unka!!!!!!!
Ye choti moti fikar bade aur bade aur bade ki.... Dono ko ye samajh aa jaaye!!!!!!!
Hmm.... That last part where Dipi ordered our dear Aru like a school teacher... Oh so sweeet....... Lekin something tells me that Aru ne teacher ki baat nahi maani.... Aur problem ho gayi hai ab.... Chot to lagi hai lekin usse zyada madam gussa naa ko ho!!!!!!!!! :(
Lovely triple decker.... Waiting impatiently for more and more and more and more deary!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D



thanx...
will b updating soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: aashmi

poooooooooooooooja!!!!!!!!!!!!!

updates ready hone ke bawajood you are not posting them!!!

saraasar nainsaafi hai boss!

we can sue you for this!!




😆😆😆

I know, i know, par main kya karu!!!!!!!

please dont sue me!!!!!!!!!!!

Promise promise will b posting soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Wishing all friends and family, a very happy, joyful and prosperous deepawali!

May the diyas and the glorious firecrackers light up your life!


Thanks to all for wonderful support and encouragement!

I truly cherish and value your words, the make me go on!


Happy Deepawali!


Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
happy dewali to u too dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57

14. THE RAID (1)


Outside Special Squad Office

7:30 am


Two black Scorpios stood outside the door.


Ajay, Neha, Shreyas, Junhui, Rajashree and Aaryan went towards one.


Parth, Rohit, Boxer, Mala, Shotgun sat in the other.


Aaryan's Raid



The black Scorpio took off in full speed towards the west. One by one, tall, graceful structures rose towards the sky. They were heading towards the poshest section of the city.


The black Scorpio joined an entourage of other black Scorpios, but these had no signs on them. They were preceded by two police vans.


The whole entourage screeched to a halt outside a large two storied bungalow.


The police had stepped down from their vans and surrounded the whole mansion.


Several plainclothesmen got down and after confirmation from a tall, handsome guy, rushed into the mansion.


Neha asked incredulously, "Hum Shivi Pal ke ghar par raid daal rahe hain?"


Ajay put on his sunglasses and ruffled his hair, "I like it."


Rajashree smiled. "Famous actor, so what?"


The man who seemed to be giving orders walked towards them.


Aaryan and he shook hands.


"Team this is Milind Kulkarni.He works in the narcotics department and we are conducting the raid with their team."


Rajashree hugged him briefly and let go.


Neha looked at her in surprise.


Milind was a tall, extremely handsome guy, who looked at each of them briefly.


Then he smiled at Aaryan again. "Shall we start?"


The team rushed into the mansion.

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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15. THE RAID (2)


Aaryan took out his revolver and rushed behind the narcotics officers, Milind at his side.


In the drawing room, the actor sat angry, in an armchair and his family- his wife and a small boy of around six and a girl of around eight sat opposite him, petrified. All the servants too stood in the living room.


All the cell phones had been confiscated and the landlines had been cut.


Neha wrinkled her nose in distaste'the house was extravagantly decorated bordering on the obscene. The air was stinking with unscrupulous wealth.


The narcotics officers had already embarked on the search of the drawing room and the ground floor. Large thuds of feet indicated that the first floor was already under investigation.


With a nod at Milind, Aaryan and the rest of the team thundered up the stairs


On the second floor was the children's bedroom.


Rajashree, Shreyas and Neha and Ajay took up the large drawing hall while Aaryan and Junhui took up the children's bedroom.


Aaryan went through the cartooned bed and wardrobe thoroughly. Junhui took to looking in the different cupboards, gaily decorated which lined the whole room.


After a while,


Junhui: Kuch mila?


Aaryan nodded. "Aise nahi ho sakta. The information was secure."


She paced the room irritated. She went towards the door and back again to the bed.


She opened a wardrobe and rifled through it'.It was full of clothes, which hung from hangers.


She opened the wardrobe next to it. It too was of the same design'..but something was odd. She opened the first wardrobe again. A small, slow smirk formed on her features.


"Aaryan!"


He was talking on the cell, "Nahi......abhi tak nahi.........."


"Ye dekho.......ye wardrobe.......don't you feel something is strange."


He spoke into the phone "Milind main do minute baad tumhe call karta hoon."


The first wardrobe had less space than the second even though they were built by the same dimensions......


Aaryan pushed the back of the wardrobe. It did not budge.


He looked at her, "Please!"


She gave a small smile. Flinging all the clothes out of the wardrobe, she delivered an expert kick on the wood. It splintered. Another kick resulted in total destruction.


Aaryan looked inside the cavity and a slow, sad smile formed on his face.


His cell rang. "Milind....We found what we were looking for.....Good.........Theek hain, we down there in a few minutes."

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
Ah haaaaaaaaaaa............ Hmmmmmmmm......... Big shots are always sooooo............. High.... But act very very low!!!!!!! 😡
So Milind aur Rajo ek doosre ko jaante hain.... I know.... Kaise? Ye to you know Pooja.... Isliye jaldi jaldi batana hunh 😃
Tck.... 👏 Liked the way Aryan asked Junhui's kick help 😆 All her training is coming useful in kicking someone or something or the other... Hope Parth doesn't get the dose of such kick when he speaks of it... But on the other hand if he gets kicked it will be fun 😉
They got something.... Wonderful to hear... But from where did Aru dear get hurt from!?!?
Great raids Pooja.... Liked the way you described the way they went to the house.... Really the picture ran in front of my eyes.... Waiting to hear the result of other raid which would happen only if you give us a super duper update soon enough! ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
I love the way Janhavi kicks that wardrobe. It's so cool!!
The house stank of wealth? Where did you get that one from?
Nice one though!

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