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Posted: 15 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Veena..

thoughts of jhanvi mehra....hmmmm 🤔 intresting yar
nice girl haan 😃...thu pir parth ko kya problem hai...kuch bolta kyun nahi......itni sweet thu hai jhanvi....... sb ke bare me sochti hai even she also think about tarra infact how could she miss her 😉

Sending each other flowers'I mean one ought to take the hint naa?

But really!

rite dear.... i agree with jhanvi......koi hint bhi kam nahi ati😕...... inn ke liye thu koi different way hi dhondna pare ga😉

its a nice update 👏...thnx for updating 😃

and surely waiting for moreeeeeeeeee😃

hahhaha!

Thank you for ur wonderful comments

i really treasure them!

will b posting more soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Junhui's treasure chest has given a treasure feelings of SS altogether 👏 Lekin is Vishwas ka mujhe pasand nahi... Anybody's consistent persisting changes strong minds too.... But again if there might be Parth's intervention 😉 I am loving it 😛
The boss's! 😆 Boss hain naa isliye sabko advice denge, lekin khud kuch nahi karenge.... Come one understand people 😃
Humare boss's such me kab bolenge Pooja 😳
Waitieeeeeeee waiting!!!!!!!!! ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Junhui's treasure chest has given a treasure feelings of SS altogether 👏Lekin is Vishwas ka mujhe pasand nahi... Anybody's consistent persisting changes strong minds too.... But again if there might be Parth's intervention 😉I am loving it 😛

The boss's! 😆Boss hain naa isliye sabko advice denge, lekin khud kuch nahi karenge.... Come one understand people 😃
Humare boss's such me kab bolenge Pooja 😳
Waitieeeeeeee waiting!!!!!!!!! ⭐️

hahha! sure sure!

will b posting soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#44

11. THE FRUITLESS LABOURS


Special Squad Office

Discussion Table

7:00 am


The team had assembled half an hour earlier due to Parth's insistence.


Aaryan: Mujhe lagta hain ki aapne sab data padhne ki takleef li hogi.

Deepika threw him a warning glance. For some reason he was really irritated and angry this morning.

He ignored it.


Parth too was doing his best to control his irritation. Outward he was calm but Deepika was sure he was seething within.


Parth took out another, smaller sealed box. He opened the seal.


From it, he and Aaryan took out long, white envelopes. They kept them in front of the persons according to the names that had been written.


Aaryan started.


"Aap apne envelopes khol sakte hain. Usme aapke team members ke naam aur aapke vehicle ka number hain."


He let a moment pass. Then he resumed, "Abhi baje hain 7:10. You are supposed to be near the vehicle by 7:30."


Nobody asked a single question. Aaryan and Parth's demeanor and previous experiences about such raids held them in check.


"You all may go now." Parth ended, curtly.


Aaryan walked back to the cabin, Deepika following him hastily. Once they were inside, she asked him, worried, "Aaryan, tumhe ho kya gaya hain? Aur Parth bhi-"


He looked at her stonily.


He threw down the book he was holding angrily. "Deepika, aaj subah hume pata chalac..Kal jo Bengluru main raids hue-they failedcit was one huge fiasco. Kisi ko to pata tha ki raids hone waale hain wo bhi kis department ke saath."


Parth's surly voice came from behind her, "Mujhe pooch to bahut upar se bhrashtachar ho raha hain.........It is.......such a waste.........." he looked disgusted.


Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45

12. STAYING BACK

"Okay,chalo its getting late.......we have to go." Deepika took out her gun.


"Kahaan jaa rahi ho?" Aaryan asked her in surprise.


Parth took this moment to escape.


"Raid par aur kahaan?" she replied.


"Deepika, tumne apne instructions nahi padhe kya?"


"Main to yahaan aakar padhne waali thi."


She took out her envelope from the pocket of her suit. Then she gasped in indignation.


"Nahi Aaryan.....Main yaahan akeli nahi baithne waali jab tum.....I mean tum log khatre me ho."


"Taara tumhare saath hogi."


"Excuse me..........I have said it."


"Par Deepika!"


"Aaryan! Please!"


He looked at her, amused. "Tum kabse rules ko overrule karna seekhi? It's a big no. Tum agli raid pe a sakti ho. Par aaj tumhe Commissioner office ke alternative team ko supervise karna hain."


She grunted. "Okay."


He smiled.


"Acchi tarah behave karna. Doosre bacchon se acchi tarah baat karna. No fighting. And follow the rules, okay." She grinned.


"Yes ma'm. See you."


"Good boy!"


He patted her on the arm.


She looked at him go, and smiled, blushing. He always roused something in her. It was an alien feeling but a very pleasant one which sent spasms of delight down her body............

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46

13. WORRIES


Special Squad Office


12:30 pm


Deepika had returned from the Commissioner office an two hours before. She had then looked over her paperwork once again, read the whole booklet.


By now she had started pacing the inner cabin.


Now and then, she looked at her cell phone, waiting for a call.


The cell phone rang suddenly, disturbing the folds of silence that had settled in the room. Deepika lunged for it, without even glancing at the number.


"Hello?"


"Hello Deepika. Aaryan."


"Aaryan........bolo." Relief flooded from her voice.


Aaryan looked at his phone surprised. Why was she worried?


"Sab theek hain. We will be there within a hour."


"Okay."


She cut the call with relief. He was safe........


He kept the phone in his pocket. He liked hearing her voice..........it was so full of warmth.........


He smiled at his phone...........


Special Squad Office

An Hour Later


Deepika intercepted the team near the door.


Aaryan came in with a bandaged hand.


"Kya hua?" Deepika asked.


"Raid hui, aur kya........." He shrugged and started walking towards the cabin.


"Aaryan, main raid ki nahi........tumhare haath ki baat kar rahi hoon."


"Ye..........kuch nahi Deepika, It's just a scratch.."


He went in, putting a stop to further discussion.

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#47
Aryan ko kya hua,haath ko kaise lagi
someone cheated in the mission,Really understand how angry Aryan was True naa Kaise kaise log hote hai
But happy Deepika is there to control him😛
He looked at her, amused. "Tum kabse rules ko overrule karna seekhi?
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣
Ka kare Aryan aapki worry Deepika se kya kya karati hai,Dekhna hai
Fantastic Dear👏 ⭐️ 👏
waiting for mories😃


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Posted: 15 years ago
#48
hey wow an update😃

oh deepika bhi thu jana jati thi raid pe use bhi jane dete😕.... poor girl kitna maan tha na us ka😒................ aryan ik sath rehne ka 😛

hey aryan u must take her with u for the next time.....got it❓ 😛

or deepika was so worried for him na😳......ermm foe every one😉 😃
jab tak awaz nahi suni....tab tak sukoon nahi mila............itni tadap😛 😆
aur aryan ko bhi acha laga us ki awaz sun kar..........ooooooooo cool haan 😳

😲 but whats this aru got injured....oh god zada thu nahi lagi na....or dehko zara hamari dipi kitni worried thi ao yeh hain k use bata bhi nahi rahe k kya hoa😕....aisa nahi karte aryan jiii

nice and intresting update yar................thnx alot
and waiting for moreeeeee😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#49
Oielaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!
Cheatings in such missions always happen.... it's like if nothing such happens it is a wierd case.... But hopefully they find the culprit soon!
Haiiiiiiiiiiiii!!!!!!!!! Itniiiiiii phikfar unko, unka!!!!!!!
Ye choti moti fikar bade aur bade aur bade ki.... Dono ko ye samajh aa jaaye!!!!!!!
Hmm.... That last part where Dipi ordered our dear Aru like a school teacher... Oh so sweeet....... Lekin something tells me that Aru ne teacher ki baat nahi maani.... Aur problem ho gayi hai ab.... Chot to lagi hai lekin usse zyada madam gussa naa ko ho!!!!!!!!! :(
Lovely triple decker.... Waiting impatiently for more and more and more and more deary!!!!!!!!!!!!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
poooooooooooooooja!!!!!!!!!!!!!

updates ready hone ke bawajood you are not posting them!!!

saraasar nainsaafi hai boss!

we can sue you for this!!


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