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Posted: 15 years ago
#71

Originally posted by: Veena..

oooooo coming closer to eachother 😳 😳 😳

tht stupid person tht ediot actor ki shootd bullet hamare aru ko lag gaye na 😔 thts very bad.....howq much it pain him na....and more to dipika😉
and parth's raid was successful too...thts superb👏 welldone dear👍🏼

well chalo acha hoa k sab kam tmam hoa........ stupid person illegal kaam karta hai...poor family of his suffr alot bcz of him😡

and pantry scenes are cool.....ab parth kya junhui se baat karne gaya hai🤔........ and sach me deepika next time se sath jaye gi 😃 thts gr8 yara👍🏼

Mr.aryan app ko agree karna pare ga tht u r developing some feelings for her😳....and plz accept it soon na😕

its a really nice update yar....enjoy reading it.......
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thnx alot and the same line plz update soon...its getting really very intresing....abhi milind k bare mai bhi thu pata chalna hai na😃


Thanx Veena!

I really appreciate ur comments!

Milind aur Rajashree.... will reveal soon!😆

Will be updating soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#72

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti

Cough Cough annnnnnnnndddddddd cough! 😃

Loved the pantry convosssssssss........ Haiiiiiiii....... Dipi's outward reaction has made Aru yearn for more naa.... Cho chwweettttttttttttttt.......... But why elude Aryan Khanna, paas hai keh dete to aur paas aa jayeeeeeeeee 😳
Ab JP ka main ab ke liye kuch nahi keh sakti..... They love each other so much, but their egos are getting lot in their way..... Sudhare jaldi to theek... Ab is Taraa ko abhi kuch determination soojni thi kya!?!? Zaroor hai hai ki jo kuch bhi use sooja humare dearest Junhui ko pasand nahi aane waali.... Let's see!
Case and raids were awesome.... One person does the mistake but there are so many who suffer beacuse of that.... Especially for his mistake more than him been punished it is the family who get punished.... So saddddddddddddd 😡
Wonderful start and wonderful coming closer dear.... And needless to say that tiny awesome brain of your has worked a lot on the updates and we know they are ready.... So posty post sooonnnnnnnnnn ⭐️

glad that u liked the action-y scenes!

:D yeah my tiny brain is far ahead in writing, but in posting :(...i m lazy!

will b updating soon!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#73
Haii Allah😲
That Actor ,stupid ,He shooted Aryan,but it's Ok He is fine now😛 nahi toh😡
AD Pantry scene was cho cho cute,haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳 yeh phikar,bhaut pass laa deti hai right😉
Waiting for more and more deary😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
#74

Originally posted by: ruha

Haii Allah😲
That Actor ,stupid ,He shooted Aryan,but it's Ok He is fine now😛 nahi toh😡
AD Pantry scene was cho cho cute,haiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳 yeh phikar,bhaut pass laa deti hai right😉
Waiting for more and more deary😃

thanx

glad tht u liked it!

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Posted: 15 years ago
#75

18. THE THIN ICE

Neha's cubicle

Junhui sat on her chair and began clearing the desk'.. She stuffed the CDs and the floppies into her drawer and was cramming the Financial Times into her drawer. She paused for a moment and opened the page.


"The Mehra Empress" the words glared at her. She shut it noisily and pushed it into the overfilled drawer.


"Hhmm" Somebody cleared their throat behind her.


She turned around, "Kya-hain?" she managed to say.


Parth Mathur was standing behind her, entirely too close for her comfort.


He was looking at her, an amused gleam in his eyes.


She wondered, 'Had he seen the article?'


No, he merely asked, and quite curtly, "Neha kahan hain?"


"Wo toh chali gayi'.." she replied.


"Oh'." He hesitated. "Mujhe thodi information chahiye thi'.kya tum'.?"


"Taara ?" she uttered the word in a flat, level voice.


Parth winced. The coldness and ignorance hurt much more than outright dislike..........and indifference.......


"I do not want it by the......ah.........usual channels........"


Junhui raised an eyebrow in surprise'.. "Kis par?"


The names he uttered caused her to frown. The information he wanted made her second eyebrow rise.


"You sure?" she asked.


He nodded.


Eager to do something which meant breaking rules, "Mummy ko pata nahi chalna chahiye, okay?" she said gleefully'..


He sat down beside her........


"Mummy?" he asked.......


Taara looked at her boss and Janhavi madam talking.....


.It hurt her heart....She knew'.she was certain of it..........Parth was besotted by the tall, handsome woman......what a pity she was unacquainted with that.......


And the real twist of the whole affair was, thought Deepika as she saw them talking that Parth was oblivious to Taara's intentions'..


Aaryan looked at the couple talking and thought'the main matter was that Parth Mathur was also unaware of Janhavi Mehra's feelings''..



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Posted: 15 years ago
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19. DISCREET INVESTIGATION


Junhui laughed......... "Oh....sorry.......mera matlab tha Deepika..........."


"Mummy? Aap log use Mummy bulate ho?"


"Tabhi jab wo paperwork karvati hain'."


He too smiled warmly'"College main bhi aisi hi thi'..Hamesha sabhi assignments waqt par!"


Junhui too chuckled''. "Par' Aar-"


She drew in a breath'..


"Par kya?"


"Kuch nahi'.."


He stared at her'..Feeling his gaze on her, she felt unnaturally hot.......


"Okay theek hain'..Tumhe kya lagta hain'.Kya woh'..Aaryan ko'.pasand karti.........?"


"Shayad haan."


There was a triumphant smile on her face.


Interested, he asked, "Kyun?"


She just shrugged as her fingers flew over the keys with alarming speed.


Parth was staring at her wrist'..the glint of the silver in the light'.the clinking''


"Parth? Parth!"


"Kya?"


"Ye dekho'.."


He turned towards the screen in anticipation.........


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Posted: 15 years ago
#77

20. NEAR TRUCE


For the next hour, Parth and Junhui sat side by side'..talking, laughing and mostly, in Junhui's case hacking for information, and in Parth's case, printing it and occasionally staring at the bangles'..

She leaned back for a moment and closed her eyes........

He kept his hand on hers...........


Her eyes flew open in surprise........... Her pulse grew erratic and her cheeks, scarlet'.


He hastily withdrew it........... "Thank you'."


"Oh..........." She said......... "No problem..............Now you owe me a treat'." She added, her eyes twinkling''


"Hmmm'." He said, pretending to be thinking'.. "How about an ice cream? Chocolate or butterscotch?"


"Make it two'.one chocolate one butterscotch'."


He bowed.


Her cell began ringing'..


She looked at the number and cut it'. "Chale?"


"Hmm'.."


The cell rang again.


"Ek minute'.sorry'" she apologized'.. "Kya hain Vishwas? Nahi, aaj nahi '.dekhenge'nahi phone mat karo'.."


She switched off her phone'.


He asked her in an oddly light tone, "Am I keeping you from something?"


She looked at him, confused......


"Please mere saath aane ke liye apni date mat cancel karna'.."


Her eyes blazed. "Oh'.thank you for excusing me'..Taara!"


She shouted out the last word.


Taara came to her side, utterly surprised, "Yes madam?"


She looked at her and then at Parth suggestively'.. Grabbing her red sack she walked away angrily, running her hand through her hair........

Edited by Pooj@ - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#78
Wooooooowwwwwwwww,wooooooooooow,wooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Junhui and Parth finally talking,greaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttt greaaaaaaaaattttttttt,greeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaattyy
👏 ⭐️ 👏

For the next hour, Parth and Junhui sat side by side'..talking, laughing and mostly, in Junhui's case hacking for information, and in Parth's case, printing it and occasionally staring at the bangles'..


chalo case hacking aur mummy ke rules ne in dono ko thoda aur pass toh laya

wonderful update as always,haiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii,Junhui asking parth about AD ,kaa baat hai😉 👏

lekin yeh tara aur Vishwas kyun aa jate hai dono ke beech main ,naa jane

greaty update dear waiting for more as always😃

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Posted: 15 years ago
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wowwwwwww pooja its a nice update👏 👏 👏 👏 👏


finally junhui and parth talk to each other thts good, chalo case ne hi unhe paas laya but aye thu saye na yehi kafi hai😃
oh junhui ne mummy kaha depi ko😆 nd wait a minute....she is asking him about aryan dipika🤔 hmmm intresting 😛 koi thu un k bare me bhi soche na...un ko bhi milla de koi 😒

yeh vishwas ka bacha 😡 hamesha wrong time pe call karta hai......kitne ache mood me the dono or treat pe bhi ja rahe the and this vishwas pir beech me agaya.......stupid guy 😡 or tara bhi kisi se kam nahi 😕

well its an intresting update....
thnx for the update and waiting for morereeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#80

Originally posted by: ruha

Wooooooowwwwwwwww,wooooooooooow,wooooooooooooooooooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
Junhui and Parth finally talking,greaaaaaaaaaaaattttttttttttttt greaaaaaaaaattttttttt,greeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaattyy
👏 ⭐️ 👏

For the next hour, Parth and Junhui sat side by side'..talking, laughing and mostly, in Junhui's case hacking for information, and in Parth's case, printing it and occasionally staring at the bangles'..


chalo case hacking aur mummy ke rules ne in dono ko thoda aur pass toh laya

wonderful update as always,haiiiiiii haiiiiiiiiiiii,Junhui asking parth about AD ,kaa baat hai😉 👏

lekin yeh tara aur Vishwas kyun aa jate hai dono ke beech main ,naa jane

greaty update dear waiting for more as always😃


thanx pooja! glad that u liked it!

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