THE REVIVAL I (fanfic) - Page 7

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Posted: 16 years ago
#61
@ Ruha....
jald hi update karoongi......
Rituparna surprise nahi hoga toh kya? Itne dinon me kabhi Deepika ko temper khote hue kabhi dekha hai?
suspense hai.....

@ Kritika
college feud maybe, but it runs deep...

will update soon...

thanks for all those lovely comments

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Posted: 16 years ago
#62
yahoooooo ab aye ga maza!!!
really really love the truns in the plot 👏 👏 👏
aur dipika aur parth were.....i mean are best friends😳
itna pyara relation😳..........hm someone wouldnt like that😉
but wow dipika really got angry on parth.............
lagta hai he must have done something really

wanting to read more
jaldi se update plzzz

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Posted: 16 years ago
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12. THE TULMULTOUS TIMES

The next day saw the team assembled near the discussion table.

Parth was heading the table with Rituparna.
Deepika was sitting opposite them; Boxer was, as usual standing.
The CBI members had merged with the SS members and were sitting around the table.
Parth kept his notes on the table. He looked at everyone, including Deepika, in turn.

She flinched away.

Parth: So' Hopefully aap ne apne folders padhe hoge. Hume intelligence mila hai ki Sahil Pawar ka consignment aane waala hai. We need to be swift. We need to cut all the illegal arms of Sahil Pawar before we do him in so that he is utterly powerless'

Shotgun: Ye consignment kab aa raha hai?

Parth: Aaj raat. We will join the Mumbai Customs and Coast Guard. So these are your instructions'

He put a single A4 typewritten sheet in front of each member according to their specialization.

Ajay took his in his hand and studied it carefully. He was supposed to be at the dock at 9 and would be joining team A, and Chaitanya, a CBI guy and Parth, Junhui, with the customs.


Boxer was supposed to do the same.

Neha was going to be the technical supporter from the office, with Bhushan, the CBI compter expert.

Shotgun would be accompanying the Coast Guard. Deepika looked into her sheet. She was going to be in with Rituparna on Customs team B with Mukesh and Wahid, from the CBI.

The atmosphere around the table tensed when Parth reminded them of all the risks and dangers involved.
The meeting concluded on Rituparna reminding them of the place and the time.

Neha, Ajay, Boxer and Shotgun got up, accompanied by Junhui and went over to their respective places, contemplating on the latest developments.

CBI team too got up after obtaining permission from the Head.

Parth picked up his notes and without sparing a glance at Deepika or Rituparna, he left the places in long strides.

Deepika and Rituparna sat at the table, their minds clamouring with various memories but both unable to communicate them with each other.

Ajay stared at the paper in his hands for a full minute before going over to Neha's cubicle. He sat beside her.

Neha: Kya hua Ajay?

Ajay: Kaash' Aaj yahan Aaryan hota'

Junhui apperared at Neha's other side.

Junhui: Shut up Ajay. Woh humare saath hi hai.

Ajay straightened.

Ajay:Nahi... woh nahi... main Aaryan ki baat kar raha hoon.

Shrugging in the most mysterious manner, Junhui left.

Neha: Ise kya ho jata hai kya pata.

Just then Ajay seized her hand.
Ajay said, "Thank god tum nahi aa rahi'."

For the first time, Neha was struck by the pure sincerity and the love behind those simple words'

Ajay really did love her'

She felt as though she had the heaven at her feet.

Neha: Suno Ajay' Is force me aane se pehle jo kasam tumne li hai wahi maine' I know the risks involved.

She stopped, her voice breaking, she said, "Promise me' Tum apna khayal rakhoge Ajay' "

A single tear fell on his hand. The both sat there, the full seriousness of the mission settling in; they both had been at the verge of losing each other more than once.

Deepika and Rituparna sat at that the discussion table.

Deepika was so motionless that it appeared as though she had been carved out of stone. Her mind was filled with memories'
She remembered the time when she had been kidnapped by Bomber'
Aaryan had rescued her'.
He made sure no harm befell on her'
She remembered the time when she had seen him playing with children who had been held in the special squad office by Bomber'
Seeing his happy face, it had awakened something new in her'
a feeling which was totally alien for her'
And he had been stoic'

He was thinking about the time she had refused to budge when he had asked her to run, when he was attempting to defuse the last bomb hidden in the office by Bomber.
He had admired her for that'
She had never let her personal feelings get into the way of her work' unlike him' but she had made some slips, by his insistence'
He chuckled and immediately regretted it'

Deepika was looking at him.

For the first time after all these months she wished to God that she could see him again'



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Posted: 16 years ago
#64
Ab bolo.... Hope hope.. Ki Dipika ko mind reading aata.... Rituparna aka Aryan ko vo pehchaan hi leti! Hai.... Aamne saamne hai, lekin phir bhi milne ki wish ho rahi hai....; Mila de rabba!!!!!!!!!! 😍
Ajay-Neha are so sweet.... How much ever strong we are, something in us awakens when we see our near and dear going far, where all over is only danger! 🥺
Hmm.... Seems Parth has become hostile with Dipika's behaviour! 😳
Junhui is as mysterious as she had come here! Why this secrecy Parth, Rituparna and Junhuii?!!? 🤔
Waise ek baat bolo? When Aryan decided to be conscipicious, why choose a bengali name?!!?? Oye hoye 😉 ❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
#65
Poooooooja Poooooooooja!!! Karun mai teri Pooooooooja!!!!

👏

Kya fanfic hai yaaar...........

Tum toh genius nikli.....why dont you try script writing after 10th????

Bahut dhamaal karogi tum.....

Ab mai ye ff 2 baar phirse padhne waali hun...😊😊😊

👏
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Posted: 16 years ago
#66
Thamks for all those lovely words....

New Update coming up.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#67
13. THE TEMPEST

THAT NIGHT
OFF MUMBAI COASTLINE
2:00 AM



Rituparna was standing at the deck of the small inconspicuous boat. He was talking on the cell, with Parth, finalizing the last details. He cut the call and stared into the darkness which was enveloping them. They were abroad a small craft. Parth and Team A were in a large fising boat with the customs. Shotgun was with the coast guard and was supposed to step in at the last moment. He exhaled out loudly, feeling the adrenaline rushing through his body. This was his chance to get even with Anna Kadtus…

There was a buzz on his walky talky.
'Target one coming in… over'

It was Parth's voice.

He responded.

'Co-ordinates please… over'
Parth dictated the necessary co-ordinates.

Rituparna stiffened. He motioned to his team. They all gathered around him as he silently indicated the place of the smuggling boat in the map. The special divers were ready in their diving gear. They quietly slipped into the water.

'Point one covered…over'

There came a response.

'Target two in sight…target two point one covered…over.'

He nodded in grim satisfaction.

They had known that two boats were coming in. His team had located the first onr and Parth's team, the second. Their divers too had departed to do the preliminary check.

His instrument beeped.
It was the divers… They had given him the okay signal.

He turned and faced his team.
There was silence except for the crashing of the waves on the rocks and the soft slapping on their boat…
He inhaled the salty air deeply and looked at the direction where the boat was supposed to be…
He surveyed his team.
First the customs members.

He nodded to them.
They nodded back.
Then his gaze turned to Wahid and Mukesh.
They nodded to him.
And lastly he turned to Deepika. He looked into her eyes… and stopped.
Her eyes displayed the full knowledge of the dangers and risks… and worry was lurking there.

Anxiety about him?

He was taken aback.

He ignored those thoughts pushing them away and concentrated.

"Guys… it's time…."

The sound of their boat seemed like a clap of thunderstorm….

In a single motion the team took out their revolvers and readied themselves…






aashmi thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
#68
Ek aur chapter bhi aa raha hai na abhi?????😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#69
great great yaar,👏I am speechless,😃
Do continue soon😃
waiting egaerly😛
Edited by ruha - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#70
Hmm... Seems I am watching a movie which is at its height of suspence.... Pooja!!! is tarah beech me chod diya... Jaldi karo naa, dekhna hai ki action dhaamaal kaise hone waala hai!!!
Great writing! :) ⭐️

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