THE REVIVAL I (fanfic)

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Pooja

@ruha

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: Pooj@
Ally or more a friend.... competition? nah not really unless someone thinks that way😉
will update probably tomorrow.... m a little ill......😔
thanks for giving me wonderful response.... it keeps one going.....😳

Take care pooj@,
Apni health par dhyan do
Jaldi se theek ho jao
Aur ek long update Dose do😃

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Krithika

@maha_prakrti

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#52

Are Pooja... take care... Become full well and then come back with a bang!

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amna

@maisoon

Voyager

Posted: 16 years ago

#53

hmmm if someone think that way!!😉 😆
oh good wanting to read more
but get well first😃take care doll

Edited by maisoon - 16 years ago

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AJ_ss

@AJ_ss

Inactive

Posted: 16 years ago

#54

ya, take care, get well soon! don't worry about updating if you're not feeling well.

that said, can't wait for your next update😛

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Pooja

@Pooj@

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#55

Originally posted by: ruha
hai pooj@;😛

All three great updates.😃

Kal hi express kiya tha,but that damid internet provider,usnne kal becch main hi band kar diya,😡

let it be,

You know u have done extremly well.👏
⭐️
Parth: Knowledge about some things (smiling at Rituparna), experience of fighting the gang and we have the element of surprise.

Ek hi statement main sub kah diya😉

Parth: Chill' Aaryan is a hero' Hum is bare me baad me baat karenge. Excuse me.

Deepika darling ab toh samjo na!!!!!!!!!!😉 😆 😆

loved each and every word waiting for more😛

Thanks yaar..... Sach me bahut keh diya Parth ne... par Deepika bhi na.... par use jald hi samajh me aayega......

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Pooja

@Pooj@

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#56

Originally posted by: maha_prakrti
Are Pooja... take care... Become full well and then come back with a bang!

Are yaar... beemar toh padna hi tha... Ek hi in me intiiii ice cream jo khayi thi...... Kya kare ice cream mujhe itni pasand hai... cant resist it!!!!!!!!!

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Pooja

@Pooj@

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#57

11. A PAST TALK

THE NEXT DAY

When Deepika had arrived she had seen a new table in the officee but she had not uttered a remark about it. But what had really boiled her blood was the smug face of Parth Mathur sporting that constant smirk.

"Why is it his face that I saw in the moring today?" She enquired to herself, grumpily.

Then she thought about the days in the past.
Her mornings used to start with telling off Aaryan or asking him to go home as he had been sleeping in the office.

But after his demise her mornings began with Rituparna's face.

She sat at her desk and looked to the desk opposite her.

Rituparna had not arrived yet. She wondered why. He was punctual. Actually he used to arrive before all and leave the last.

Didn't he have anyone waiting for him at home? Then it struck her that she did not know anything about the family of a colleague she had been working with for the past month.

"Kin khayalon me doobi ho Deepika?" asked Parth.

Deepika looked at him flatly. Without answering, she zipped open her laptop and started working.

Parth sighed. He dragged himself over to her desk and plopped on the chair facing her.

"Deepika, maine tumse kuch poocha."

Deepika looked at him, right in the eyes. "It does not concern you."

Parth looked at her, returning her stare.

Then he said politely, "Mujhse civilly toh baat kar sakti ho na tum?"

"Nahi. Not after what you did."

"What did I do?"

Deepika looked into his black eyes and saw genuinity there.

"Don't you know what did you do?"

"I really don't know what you are talking about, Deepika. Dekho us hadse ke-"

"Sushmita. Do you even remember her face?"

Shock registered itself in his eyes.

"Su... woh maine...kuch... nahi kiya tha..."

"YOU JERK!!!!"
Deepika shouted and raised her hand.

Then she saw Rituparna standing outside the glass door staring at her unbelievingly...

She put her hand down. Rituparna entered silently, and looked at the pair opposite him.

Deepika's face clearly reflected her anger while Parth's face was convulsed with chagrin. His eyes were bright.

He turned slowly and faced Deepika.

"You are miles away from the truth Deepika. You are far far away. Jo tumne samjha woh sach nahi hai.... "

He left the room without another word.

Deepika had kicked him right in his Achilees's heel.

Parth sat alone in the pantry, turning a cup of coffee in his hands...

He quoted lines from Shakespear

'Mark how the blood of Caesar follow'd it
As rushing out of doors to be resolved
If Brutus so unkindly knock'd or no'

Deepika had stabbed him right in his heart when she had uttered those words....

It hurt now, after all these years...

His best friend thought he was responsible for a thing he had not done...

That was why she had distanced herself from him...

After all these years, it hurt and it hurt badly...

Funnily, Deepika too thought the same way........

She sat; contemplating over what had just passed, ignoring Rituparna...

The look in his eyes...

Was she wrong?

What if he was not responsible?

The only thought seized her mind was...

what if....

what if she had mistaken him all these years?

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Pooja

@ruha

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

#58

Oye hoye super duper update blast⭐️

👏Deepika relating Rituparna with Aryan,I think she will get him now😉

Sushmita kaun hai,parth Deepika aur uska kya connection

parth ne aisa kya kiya ya Specifically Deepika k iParth ko leke aise kya misunderstanding hai ki she raised hand on him???????suspence,suspence,suspence!!!!

waiting for more😃

Edited by ruha - 16 years ago

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Krithika

@maha_prakrti

Sparkler

Posted: 16 years ago

#59

Hmm... So old college feud is it between Dipika and Parth!!?!? Expected some thing like this.... Its good to see that Dipika also can get angry... Especially when she is very agitated at the moment, she definitely will get hyper .... 🤔

Rituparna aka someone is the one who is the most shocked I see... Why not!?!? But secrets and suspences keeps the writing going! 😉

Great work.... Waiting to read more! 👏

How is your health Pooja? Ice cream achchi baat hai, expecially in this summer! Lekin itnaaaaaaaa?!?!?? Thoda khayal raho yaar! :)