Vishnu Bhargavi OS part 3,4 final part updt pg 6

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Hello everyone
I am Aditi. Though writing is not my forte but one episode of Lakshmi Narayan as Bhargavi and Vishnu inspired me to write something on them .. It's purely fictitious, it describes how Bhargavi unconsciously got drew towards Vishnu. I am keeping it short as it's my first ever work.


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"Om vishnave namah Om vishnave namah "

This chant by Bhargavi in the Vishnu temple used to mark the beginning of the day for all in the village. Her voice had a unique melody and reverence for Lord Vishnu.

She used to spend almost the whole day in the temple, cleaning the Pooja samgri , decorating the temple with flowers and lighting the diyas nd incense sticks... she had fully dedicated herself to Lord Vishnu ... After Puja used to cook the prasad and bhog and give it to everyone .

One night after the Puja , the pujari asked her if she wanted could go home, but she refused to go as she liked to be in the Vishnu temple. "I don't know what's this uncanny connection I have with Narayan. I get a strange peace just by looking at the idol of Narayan" Said Bhargavi, looking at the idol of Lord Vishnu... Her eyes glittering with reverence for Him.

In Vaikunth Narad muni tells Narayan, " Narayan Narayan, Devi Lakshmi in her human form doesn't know about her true identity , when will u descend on earth to meet her, and tell her about who she is?"

"She doesn't remember her identity, yet she remembers, though we are far away from each other but still we are near, she resides in my heart and I always remain before her eyes , I will soon be descending on earth in human form and marry her " said Narayan with a smile ...


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Posted: 9 years ago
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This for ur first attempt
A beautiful start Aditi
Do continue
How we all loved that track in SKR
I am glad that u chose this one to write
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Thank u :)
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Do continue. Good beginning. That strange connection.
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Originally posted by: -Mano-

This for ur first attempt

A beautiful start Aditi
Do continue
How we all loved that track in SKR
I am glad that u chose this one to write


Thank u Mano , I luv d gif 😛
Yes how much we wanted them to stretch this track but they didn't 😭
That's why thought of writing 😉


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Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Do continue. Good beginning. That strange connection.


Glad that u liked it 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Adituuu U already knw my luv for VishGavi ❤️ and hw I wanted them to dragg the track ... 😆 So a big thanks to for writting on them 🤗


Luved the start ... now waiting for their meet and hw Vish make his Gavi realize who she is 😆

Just luk at them 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
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beautiful start
Aditi
pls do continue
the divine connection between them u give beautiful touch

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Originally posted by: Thushi

Adituuu U already knw my luv for VishGavi ❤️ and hw I wanted them to dragg the track ... 😆 So a big thanks to for writting on them 🤗



Luved the start ... now waiting for their meet and hw Vish make his Gavi realize who she is 😆

Just luk at them 😳
cr TT


I wrote for u only 😳😆

And the edit
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Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

beautiful start

Aditi
pls do continue
the divine connection between them u give beautiful touch


Thank u Rakhi 😛

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