Vishnu Bhargavi OS part 3,4 final part updt pg 6

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shruthiravi

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Posted: 9 years ago

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@aditi nicely written. I loved the way you portrayed Bhargavi's feeling. How she revels in Vishnu's presence, Vishnu's touch.

Many people don't write about a woman feeling happy, pleasant when her soul mate touches her. Mostly they are shown shy, blushing etc.. you have portrayed it beautifully with penchant.

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 9 years ago

#42

beautiful yet so divine...it can tough the soul the love Bhargavi exp for her Lord Vishnu n how Vishnu helped her...

yes Lakshmi reside in Vishnu's heart as his better half ..

beautiful

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CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: shruthiravi
@aditi nicely written. I loved the way you portrayed Bhargavi's feeling. How she revels in Vishnu's presence, Vishnu's touch.
Many people don't write about a woman feeling happy, pleasant when her soul mate touches her. Mostly they are shown shy, blushing etc.. you have portrayed it beautifully with penchant.

Thank u Di 😊

Yes mostly people avoid writing about how a woman feels, they only show man admiring a woman. But shows like DKDM and SKR have beautifully portrayed the divine love of Shiv - Sati and Siya - Ram that too from female 's pov. Thus got inspired to write 😳

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CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav
beautiful yet so divine...it can tough the soul the love Bhargavi exp for her Lord Vishnu n how Vishnu helped her...
yes Lakshmi reside in Vishnu's heart as his better half ..
beautiful

Thank u so much rakhi 😳

That part which u mentioned was even my favorite part 😳

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rajshrip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#45

aditi, loved the story🤗🤗,🤗it was beautiful, divine and so touching. Yes part 4 was my favourite, their hug and when he said that her place is in his heart (part 5).

i love how bhargavi sensed vishhnuji's presence when she was about to rehearse for bhajans. Their souls can sense each other. So cute when he reassured bhargavi with her eyes that she is not doing anything wrong by looking at him.

This line you used was beautiful He saw the world with her eyes. Everything he has was hers." ❤️❤️❤️

I loved the dream she had about vishnuji. It was so romantic and divine. ❤️❤️

Vishnuji support bhargavi and feeling proud at the praises bhargavi was receiving was very cute.

Loved the scene when vishnuji turned back as he knew bhargavi was waiting for him to turn. Their eyes meeting was .

I really loved the scene when narayan appears in his real form and shows bhargavi his swaroop. I loved their hug and went in dreamland when he said that her place is in his heart❤️

Thank you for writing the story. 😃👏

Edited by rajshrip - 9 years ago

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CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: rajshrip
aditi, loved the story🤗🤗,🤗it was beautiful, divine and so touching. Yes part 4 was my favourite, their hug and when he said that her place is in his heart (part 5).

i love how bhargavi sensed vishhnuji's presence when she was about to rehearse for bhajans. Their souls can sense each other. So cute when he reassured bhargavi with her eyes that she is not doing anything wrong by looking at him.

This line you used was beautiful He saw the world with her eyes. Everything he has was hers." ❤️❤️❤️

I loved the dream she had about vishnuji. It was so romantic and divine. ❤️❤️

Vishnuji support bhargavi and feeling proud at the praises bhargavi was receiving was very cute.

Loved the scene when vishnuji turned back as he knew bhargavi was waiting for him to turn. Their eyes meeting was .

I really loved the scene when narayan appears in his real form and shows bhargavi his swaroop. I loved their hug and went in dreamland when he said that her place is in his heart❤️
Thank you for writing the story. 😃👏

Thank u Raji 😳

That hug was for u only 😆😆

Jokes apart, I love those couples where there are less conversations and more of eye locks, that's why I loved VishGavi so much, their eye locks were divine 😳😳

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rajshrip

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Posted: 9 years ago

#47

Aditi🤗🤗thank you for the hug scene for me.

Agree with your their eye locks were divine and said more than a conversation.

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--Naina-

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Posted: 9 years ago

#48

Aditi.. You are writing FF too..Thats really great.. Read the first part only .. It's so romantic and divine..:) will read the rest later.. :)

Keep writing and PM me your latest update .. Lol

Edited by --Naina- - 9 years ago

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Srutha

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Posted: 9 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa
Res 😆

Unres partially 😆

Aditi, chapter 3 was fantastic 😳

Lord Narayana showed his natkhat here also 😉

And Bhargavi is wondering what the young man with twinkling eyes is thinking about her

Very well done 👏👏

Chapter 4:

Amazing 👏👏

Bhargavi sang with love as well ❤️

Their eyes meet They say that in love, eyes are enough. You have brought that out perfectly 😳

And Lord Vishnu wants to marry Bhargavi. So beautiful

I will unres the rest soon 😛

Edited by KrishnaPriyaa - 9 years ago

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CutiepieAD

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Posted: 9 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: --Naina-
Aditi.. You are writing FF too..Thats really great.. Read the first part only .. It's so romantic and divine..:) will read the rest later.. :)

Keep writing and PM me your latest update .. Lol

Aww naina nice to see u 😃

Not FF just an OS and I have completed the story and 5th part is the final part 😊

Glad that u liked the first part 😳