Vishnu Bhargavi OS part 3,4 final part updt pg 6 - Page 4

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Awww finally they met Adituu ❤️

While reading ur update all i could imagine was AshMa as VishGavi 😳 and yes you brought the SiRa memories back with ur update .. 😆
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thushi

Awww finally they met Adituu ❤️


While reading ur update all i could imagine was AshMa as VishGavi 😳 and yes you brought the SiRa memories back with ur update .. 😆


Thank u 😳😳

Haan me too wrote keeping AshMa in mind 😳
They are the cutest Vishnu Lakshmi and their image has got imprinted in my mind as VishLa
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi97


Thank u 😳😳

Haan me too wrote keeping AshMa in mind 😳
They are the cutest Vishnu Lakshmi and their image has got imprinted in my mind as VishLa


that few glimps of them as VishGavi was enough to make us crazy .. 😆 I hope we get some VishLa moments too
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: aditi97



Thank u😊
I might be slow in updating now as my clg is about to start😆



That's fine,, I can understand ur problem coz my clg has already started
Edited by Anokhisharma - 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: Thushi


that few glimps of them as VishGavi was enough to make us crazy .. 😆 I hope we get some VishLa moments too


Yes VishGavi was enough to go insane 😳
I really hope we get to see VishLa, because in SKR they have many times said that SiRa will reunite, so then reuniting in Vaikunth is most probably in pipeline, though not sure about it ...
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Originally posted by: Anokhisharma



That's fine,, I can understand ur problem coz my clg has already started


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Part 3
"The annual Mela is being set up near the temple. Many arrangements had to be made. Hence few young men from the neighbouring village had come to help out with the preparations. " pujari ji informed Bhargavi.

"So that man whom I saw in the temple today is from neighbouring village" Bhargavi thought to herself.

"Bhargavi, please prepare few Bhajans for the Sandhya aarti." Asked the pujari.

Bhargavi started rehearsing few Bhajans.
Just then she started getting the same anubhuti which she gets in the Vishnu Mandir. She looked around and saw the same young man. He was cutting logs for putting up the pandal for the temple. He was busy in his work and Bhargavi busy in admiring his hardworking nature.

Just then he looked up. Bhargavi didn't know what to do, she got nervous. " What will he think ? Why am I standing here? " she thought to herself.

And he smiled. His smile reaching his eyes and touching her heart, soothing her and telling her that what she was doing, was not wrong. He is her soul mate. His smile had the whole world contained in it. And his affectionate smile made her smile as well.

He broke the eye contact and collected the logs and proceeded towards the temple. Bhargavi kept on watching him, moving away. He didn't look back.

"Why am I feeling disappointed? Why would he even turn back. He doesn't even know me. "
She shook her head and went back to rehearse for her song.


Little did she know that her Narayan didn't turn to look at her once again but, her eyes were always embedded in his eyes. He saw the world with her eyes. Everything he has was hers.


" I didn't look back as I want you to realise your love on your own" he said with twinkling eyes ...



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Edited by aditi97 - 9 years ago
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Part 4
The evening arti had a huge number of people today, because of the annual Mela.

Bhargavi didn't know what to wear. She was panicking, looking at the saris she had. "Wear the red one" she heard a voice. Was this the same young man whom she met in the temple? She had never heard his voice, then how come she was so sure? As with this voice the same uncanny, strange yet divine feeling had accompanied.

She wore the red sari, red bangles and bindi accompanied with gold jewellery. She looked into the mirror. " something was missing. " She thought


A pair of hands came grasping her. Bhargavi closed her eyes, she started breathing heavily. It was something she had never felt before, yet felt before. Strange, uncanny yet pleasant!! Those hand took her Sari's pallu and kept it on her head.

"Now nothing is missing" said the voice. She opened her eyes and looked into the mirror. She was looking just like a beautiful bride. And the young man was standing beside her, holding her pallu. They completed each other. Bhargavi 's shy smile and his twinkling eyes...

Bhargavi looked back. He was gone. He was nowhere to be seen. Was she hallucinating? Maybe yes. But her anubhuti was enough to make her happy.

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Bhargavi entered the temple. Looked as if Sakshaat Mahalakshmi is entering the Vishnu temple. " Bhargavi start the Bhajan" said pujari ji.
But Bhargavi 's eyes were searching the young man. He was no where around.

"I know he will come" she said to herself.

And he came. He stood at the farthest corner of the temple, looking at her with an assuring look , that he will always stay with her.Bhargavi saw him and started her Bhajan. Today her voice was much more enchanting than ever. As today her voice along with reverence and respect, had love filled in it.

Everyone praised Bhargavi for her beautiful voice. But the young man didn't come. He stood at the farthest corner. Looking at her with eyes filled with pride. Every praise of Bhargavi made him proud.
Bhargavi didn't hear it from him, but his eyes said it all. She was glad that he liked her voice.

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At the evening when the Mela got over , everyone was going back. Bhargavi 's eyes searched for the young man.

She saw him leaving. He was walking away.

"He won't turn back. Did he turn back earlier?" She thought. " But then why I feel that this time he will turn?" She said with a sigh.

And he looked back. The two pairs of eyes met again. Not a single word they said to each other, yet they spoke millions of words.

His eyes had an assuring look. " I am leaving for now, but I will come back to take u with me. This separation is just for a while. We are soulmates and will surely meet" he didn't say anything but his words reached her ...

He broke the eye contact and walked away. Bhargavi looked at him with waiting eyes.


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Bhargavi came back home.Everything was like a dream for her.

"Is this the feeling which poets describe as Love? " Again she didn't have an answer. The young man's last smile flashed before her eyes.

"Bhargavi! Bhargavi! " Her mother exclaimed.

"What happened ma?" Bhargavi asked .

"You always talked about your uncanny connection with Lord Vishnu na? Today I know why u felt like that. " She answered. " Lord Vishnu had come today and gave his Darshan to me. He wanted to marry u Bhargavi ! Now u will be Lord Vishnu 's wife. I am so happy for u , my daughter "...

Bhargavi didn't know how to react. Yes she always loved to stay near Lord Vishnu, but his wife? And what about her feelings for the young man she met in the Vishnu temple... A drop of tear fell from her eyes...



Edited by aditi97 - 9 years ago
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Part 5

Bhargavi went to the Vishnu temple. This time she had tears in her eyes.

" I have always thought you to be my everything Narayan. I have always spoken my heart out to you. And your presence has given me assurance that everything will be fine. " She spoke will shaky voice.

" In last few days my life had taken a major turn. It's the first time I started thinking something about someone else apart from you. I don't know how this happened, why this happened.

I met him here in the temple. I thought you wanted us to meet that why we met. I felt something different and pleasant with him. Which I had never felt before.

I don't know who is he, I don't know his name, how he is, I have never even talked to him. I just know my Narayan. And I know what you have thought for me has to be right for me. I will forget him. And i am ready to submit myself before you. " Bhargavi said with respect and reverence for Lord Vishnu.


"But I don't want you to submit yourself to me, but I want that you should always stay beside, be my better half, my ardhangini " she heard the young man's voice.

She looked around he was standing behind her.

A strange light covered the whole temple. Bells started ringing. And she saw her Narayan's Divya roop. She realised that Narayan had come in human form to take her with him. Tears rolled down her cheeks. And this time it was of happiness. All her questions got answered seeing Vishnu.

He came back in his human form. The bells stopped ringing and the light disappeared.

Bhargavi went to touch his feet. But he stopped her and gave her an affectionate hug " Your place is not at my feet but in my heart " he said .




------ hope u liked it -------
Edited by aditi97 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Completed the whole story 😛
As I would get busy with college after this 😆

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