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MaxMayfield

@MaxMayfield

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 9 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: ---Anu---

Hailaa!! Look who's here!! 😲 This is such a shocker!😲 Waitingg...😆

Im taken by this pair😳

and ohhh you have written so well, I love how it foreshadows the future - the editing of this piece Anu - just perfect - crisp, concise, very beautifully worded and everything else!

LOVED IT!🤗

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#32

Originally posted by: -FreeLancer-

Im taken by this pair😳

and ohhh you have written so well, I love how it foreshadows the future - the editing of this piece Anu - just perfect - crisp, concise, very beautifully worded and everything else!

LOVED IT!🤗

@bold - I m taking the credit for this. And I love you for your beautiful comment! Thank you gal! 🤗

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attubaby

@attubaby

Dazzler

Posted: 9 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: ---Anu---
Hey, thanks a lot @attubaby! 😳 I actually had some trouble dwelling into the scenario and jotting it down. But I guess all of it paid off to some level.

The buyer-seller thingy was a silly imagination added for humor. 😆 Please don't assume it to be true. 😆

Oh..u surely nailed it in ur very first OS itself.

@bold: of course not😆..but it was fun to imagine the scene😆

Do write more😊

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Brahmaputra

@Brahmaputra

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#34

Anu, I was not being graceful. Why should I lie? If you referred to the Karna-Vrishali OS I wrote in MB forum, I would still say that your this OS is far better than that one. What you read in SPK forum was not my first one.😆 My first OS is much older than both. It was a lot melodramatic & overdescriptive. Trust me, as a first time writer, you did AWESOME!⭐️ Keep writing, only for your satisfaction & our satisfaction!!!

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Ramya

@Ramya_98

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 9 years ago

#35

Anu! 🤗 Don't ask me anything, just give me a tight hug! 😳 This is beyond beautiful! I'm just speechless! Especially the last lines and the lavishly described emotions of love!
And this ain't your first attempt because if i'm not wrong you wrote previously on praja as well! And i want you to keep writing more and more and more! 😛 😉
PS-Sorry for being the last one to reply! 😆 😛

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Shivani Priyam Kumar

@Meself

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 9 years ago

#36

This is a long overdue! But here I am.

Meghnad and Sulochana have found a way to my heart through the folk renditions that are on them and you sweetie made it more beautiful by adding in your two cents. So Sulochana is taken by the man who stole her heart and even though she is disturbed by nightmares she chooses to live in a dreamy present.

Man I am sold to this one. It was beautiful Anu!

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Manikt

@Manikt

Beginner

Posted: 9 years ago

#37

I loved your OS thank you so much! I really like this couple on screen and it was great to read a story about them!

Pls comment on their fan pages too to raise profile Ankur Nayyar and Vividha Kirti

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aanvi

@aanvi98

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 9 years ago

#38

Woah! This was one amazing thing!!

Well, I am a Meghnad person from beginning, I must say it is too beautiful! I am totally smitten my these two...☺️ they are too cute! And your writing gave me more weird ideas... now i can't stop myself writing over thm! Nd seriously it's unbelievable tht its your first writing! You rocked dear!

Anu(well this is the name everyone loves to call me😆)

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: ramya06
Anu! 🤗 Don't ask me anything, just give me a tight hug! 😳 This is beyond beautiful! I'm just speechless! Especially the last lines and the lavishly described emotions of love!
And this ain't your first attempt because if i'm not wrong you wrote previously on praja as well! And i want you to keep writing more and more and more! 😛 😉
PS-Sorry for being the last one to reply! 😆 😛

So here it is..🤗 Thanks a lot for the beautiful comments Ramya! I m humbled. And it really feels good when fantastic writers like you appreciate my writings.😳

Ahh... u remember that one? 😲 U have a sharp memory gal! 😆 That was more of a trial and error and partly out of my own frustration at the way in which the plot and the characters were shaped. 🥱

But this is my first in mytho genre. 😆 And no worries about the delay! I m in the same boat as you are. 🤗 Thank you dear!

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

Dazzler

+ 6

Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Meself
This is a long overdue! But here I am.

Meghnad and Sulochana have found a way to my heart through the folk renditions that are on them and you sweetie made it more beautiful by adding in your two cents. So Sulochana is taken by the man who stole her heart and even though she is disturbed by nightmares she chooses to live in a dreamy present.

Man I am sold to this one. It was beautiful Anu!

Shivii...Thanks a lot yaar..🤗 They are among my favorites as well. @bold - bingo! you picked it! I just wanted to portray her as someone who prefers living it up in the present and not get perturbed by the future.

Its time, you write something on them! 😛

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