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Wow Anu, such a nice work. I was imagining our ever strict Meghnad being romantic and naughty with his wife Sulochana and poor Sulochana who always have complaints on her lips with shy and dreamy eyes. It gives sucha nice feel to see such love between these two. They need some space apart from just obeying orders and meeting only for other's sake.

Originally posted by: deejagi

Wow Anu, such a nice work. I was imagining our ever strict Meghnad being romantic and naughty with his wife Sulochana and poor Sulochana who always have complaints on her lips with shy and dreamy eyes. It gives sucha nice feel to see such love between these two. They need some space apart from just obeying orders and meeting only for other's sake.

Please write more such stories.

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Res res res res 😆😆

Unres Unres Unres Unres 😆😆
Anu 🤗
Amazing update 👏👏
MeghNa were so cute 😳😳
And Sulochana sees my favourite Adisesha ❤️
You portrayed her pativrata status with the last line :)

If I had known you write so well, I would have pestered you before itself 😆😆 Now I am going to 😈

Awww..❤️❤️

OMG😳

😡 Liar!!! If this is not good writing, then what else is? Your first attmept is definitely far better than my first attempt.👍🏼 It is the right mixture of emotions - not less, not more. Very well written, beautiful OS.!!!😊 Write more!

Originally posted by: SenRazia

Hello! I am Anu 2, also called Sen.

Your OS was superb and you are a fantastic writer!!

Every emotion was perfect!! Thank you so much for writing this!

Originally posted by: amritat

Wow Anu...very well-written

And u say u r not a writer? Not fair...😆

Loved the emotions...the brevity...and most of all, I have to say this...

The glimpse of the future through her vision was awesome...Adi Shesha in the form of Lakshman, killing Meghnad...very well-written...👏

Originally posted by: Artist_Forever

Anu!! My dear🤗

This was so fantastic! Finally a Piece from you... I always wanted you to write, and today its my dream come true

Absolutely superb! The subtleness of emotions is mindblowing! Loved her fear, anxiety and worry. And of course, the last line just nailed it⭐️

Keep writing dear,

Love,

Mahi❤️