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Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: attubaby
hi Anu...dis z a super duper HIT...very well-written...awesome to say the least...
ur descrptn of surroundings and the nature with the fab selection of words made it a pleasant ride for me to peep into the heart of Sulochana and deeply connect to wat she was thinking...her nightmares, her thought process, love for her husband, everything was so superbly written..

Plus that difference in buyer-seller thing u added was amusing😆

LOVED IT😳

Hey, thanks a lot @attubaby! 😳 I actually had some trouble dwelling into the scenario and jotting it down. But I guess all of it paid off to some level.

The buyer-seller thingy was a silly imagination added for humor. 😆 Please don't assume it to be true. 😆

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: shabari14
Anu di, thank you for writing this! Many people view Meghnad as a villain, so this is a new perspective of things, and I loved it. The smirks and puppy faces are going to be a Meghnad and Sulochana trademark because of you! 😆 Please write more, di!

Gowri

Gowri...how did you assume I m elder to you?😲😆 Meghnad, IMO, is a right man in the wrong side. There is no harm in portraying him as a little naughty in front of his wifey, ehh?😉

Thanks a ton for your lovely comment dear!! :)

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: Shivam...
Wonderful One Shot
This Just made me realize how beautiful and Blissful both their lives must have been going on before the calamity hit them , Raavan abucted sita and the whole family had to bear the consequences

So many poor souls' lives destroyed due to the ill deeds of a few

Rishivar, thanks a lot... I m so so glad you liked it.😳

Yeah, its really breaks me to think just what kind of a happy life they led, and the subsequent events that resulted in their end. Events that they had no connection with. :(

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: deejagi
Wow Anu, such a nice work. I was imagining our ever strict Meghnad being romantic and naughty with his wife Sulochana and poor Sulochana who always have complaints on her lips with shy and dreamy eyes. It gives sucha nice feel to see such love between these two. They need some space apart from just obeying orders and meeting only for other's sake.

Please write more such stories.

Haha... Yeah, I kinda imagined these two only while writing it down. 😆 They both give a 'passionate' feel as well, you know. 😉 They really do need some good scenes in the show. At least, that will keep us glued for some time. ;)

Thanks a lot for the appreciation Jaya...(that's ur name, right?)😳

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: KrishnaPriyaa

Unres Unres Unres Unres 😆😆
Anu 🤗
Amazing update 👏👏
MeghNa were so cute 😳😳
And Sulochana sees my favourite Adisesha ❤️
You portrayed her pativrata status with the last line :)

If I had known you write so well, I would have pestered you before itself 😆😆 Now I am going to 😈

Tha...🤗 Thanks a ton dear!! 🤗 I was actually unsure of the title/last line. Thank heavens many liked it. 😆 How can I give up on Adi Sesha?😉

@bold - *runs away and hides* 😆😆 Jokes apart, if you could give me a coherent story line, explain to me how you want it done, I would definitely give it a try. No guarantees on timing though. I can only hope you will like it. 😆

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: -GrilledCheese-
wonderful os... loved it!

Thank you so much! 😳

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: Ankita.11
Awww..❤️❤️
This was so so nice!!!
I'm a fan of Meghnad and Sulochana as well..
Please write more on them 😊

Thanks a lot Ankita. 😳 I m glad you liked the story! :)

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#28

Originally posted by: Meself
Anu! I love you for this!

I will come back with more!😳

And I love you too Shivi! 😳😆 Waiting...

Holy!😲 I haven't yet unressed my comments in your OS yet.. *running*...

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Mirage09

@Mirage09

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Posted: 9 years ago

#29

Originally posted by: Brahmaputra
😡 Liar!!! If this is not good writing, then what else is? Your first attmept is definitely far better than my first attempt.👍🏼 It is the right mixture of emotions - not less, not more. Very well written, beautiful OS.!!!😊 Write more!

Jamy!😲 No mahn, I m not lying.😆 BTW, your first was on Karna-Vrushali, right? I remember it. And you are saying this one is better than yours?😲 Now, you are just being graceful to me. 😆

But your comments are so much encouraging for a budding writer like me! I m humbled. Thanks a lot, yaar! ⭐️