Lakshmila OS:For You Anything( eng translation updated in page 3) - Page 2

great one dear!!

Hey kayal dis is for u

lakshman asks her teasingly if she is again waiting for a snake... but seeing her tears he gets concerned...

she asks why is he here ...he says haldi is over and everyone from groom side will be coming... he asks her again if she is k...

when she doesn't reply he tells her dat his bro says one shouldn't keep any pain inside but should let it out she is surprised... and says her sister says the same...and asks him if he loves his bro and can't live without him

he repls yes and says u too love ur sister... then he understands why she is crying... he teases her saying her sis isnt leaving the country so why to cry dat much...she teases him saying you urself can't stay away from ur bro...I heard dat as a baby u cried when ur away from RAM even for few minutes... he gets embarrassed and tells her not to change d topic... she again gets said and turns to leave...

he stops her and tells her ayodhya isn't dat far and she can visit anytime... but she says she can't come alone and she can't ask soldiers to come every time...dats when he blurts out dat he will take her...further he tells her not to worry and addresess her as mila...she is overjoyed and asks him to call her mila only...

then his brothers come except ram none understand d reason BTW lakshman's smile... ram teases him saying if he talked to the priest as he(lakshman) came early to talk to the priest...lakshman absentmindedly says yes. ...when RAM says but priest isn't here at all...lakshman shocked RAM ji rocks...

hey guys I've edited my typos too...omg itna pyaar...lakshmila ki jayy...new ideas bhi aarahe he in...

Originally posted by: DilMereSuntaNhi

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Awww Messi , this is beautiful ...
I can imagine Mila blushing and then Lakshman realising his words ...
Wowww yaar , write more...we wanna read more.
this is just amazingly beautiful ...
I am so happy reading this , cnt put my feelings in wrds.😳

Love,
Sruthi</font>

aww now am at loss of words credit goes to lakshmila they made me crazy...

jessi

Glad to know that you are also a Telugu girl

Originally posted by: kayal1998

Thabk you thank you thank you soo much @Messi2

The fic was sooo sweet and beautiful. Good job👏

And keep writing more LakshMila

Loved the way Ram came on time to see Lakshman and Urmila smiling😊

hey kayal thanks ...and am Jessi by d way...