SKR ff : The Season of Oleander Blossoms ch4 pg13 - Page 3

This is an amazing start. The character sketches u have given the sisters make them come alive. Cannot wait for ur next update.

Superbly written shreya.

Originally posted by: sugunmanas

aisa kuch bhi nahi hai
sunday haina sab dher se utae hai
its really nice just read it😊

thank god for that, Manas ! I almost thought nobody liked my story.
thank u for your nice response and do continue with ur modern take as well.😃

Shreya very beautiful, especially the use of language. And I am happy to know about 64 shastras more than half of which the current generation don't know properly

Originally posted by: milinda.shreyz

thank god for that, Manas ! I almost thought nobody liked my story.
thank u for your nice response and do continue with ur modern take as well.😃

thanks shreya😊

Originally posted by: radianteyes.

They are no words to define how beautifully u have written it , with each word and emotion at the right place I felt like mingling with them .
Loved it to core please continue

oh thank u so much ! i am flattered, really. please continue to follow it...i intend to make it 7 shots maintaining the tradition of 7 kaand Ramayana. so it will end very soon.

Originally posted by: shruthiravi

Shreya very beautiful, especially the use of language. And I am happy to know about 64 shastras more than half of which the current generation don't know properly

exactly shruthi ! and we consider ourselves educated, modern, liberated and what not...and imagine it was compulsory education for noble bred women once upon a time...how progressive our ancestors had been. I studied the list and found out I know only 4/5 kalas out of 64 ! how shameful !

Originally posted by: my_angel...

nice idea...would love to read ur interpretation of ramayana

Originally posted by: Krishna_Sourav

congratulation for first SKR FF

nice start

loved the prologue

So Sita all along knew about her birth secret

but loved the bonding between 4 sisters

continue soon

Originally posted by: NEIRAlover

Welcome to the forum.

WOW!!!!

What a great start!!!!

It's beautifully written. Loved it.

Loved your style of writing.

Please do continue.