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Posted: 7 years ago

#31

Beautiful!! Heartbreaking and raw emotions...but wonderfully written!

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Pixiepixel11

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+ 31

Posted: 7 years ago

#32

Awesome loved the second part so much.
Please continue soon.
I want to see mauli's journey.

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amortentia15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: abhilasha143
wow i like the story so much
you described moulis emotions aptly.
Today her own had betrayed her in the worst way possible and a stranger had helped her to get back on her feet literally...
Her life had come crashing down but at the same time her faith in humanity had been reinstated...
i loved these words.
i hope you continue the story

Thank you dear 😳

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amortentia15

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Posted: 7 years ago

#34

Originally posted by: Famishah
Amazing 👏

Thank you...😊

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Jiggy7

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Posted: 7 years ago

#35

Raahil..❤️

Love the man.. His sense of humour and talkativeness can fill the silence in Mauli's life..

Loved ur writing

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amortentia15

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#36

Originally posted by: neeraja91
Beautiful!! Heartbreaking and raw emotions...but wonderfully written!

Thank you 😳

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prettywomaniya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#37

Originally posted by: Anahi
res-ing for now so that i can track it and dont miss out making a comment on it tomorrow..
😊

unres

had reserved for tracking and forgot to keep track 😆

well this is such a nice chapter.. i am loving this story..

rahil is a witty guy. and his sense of humour is amazing..

"You know I kind of look stupid here standing, holding this out to you when you are clearly looking down at my car tyre trying to deflate it with your mutant opthalmic powers..."

i just cracked up here so badly 😆😆

i am really fond of this quality in people. able to make others laugh and happy...

i am so so excited to read this story.

pls update soon.

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amortentia15

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#38

Originally posted by: sirimiri
Awesome loved the second part so much.
Please continue soon.
I want to see mauli's journey.

Thank you dearie😳

I think this will turn into an SS and yes the focus will be entirely on Mauli though kunan will make appearances...

I want them in the story for very specific purposes😆

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#39

Originally posted by: Jiggy7
Raahil.. ❤️
Love the man.. His sense of humour and talkativeness can fill the silence in Mauli's life..
Loved ur writing

Jiggy!! Hii...Raahil...yes his real identity will be revealed in the next part😊

Thank you so much dearie😳

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amortentia15

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Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#40

Originally posted by: Anahi

unres
had reserved for tracking and forgot to keep track 😆

well this is such a nice chapter.. i am loving this story..
rahil is a witty guy. and his sense of humour is amazing..
"You know I kind of look stupid here standing, holding this out to you when you are clearly looking down at my car tyre trying to deflate it with your mutant opthalmic powers..."
i just cracked up here so badly 😆😆

i am really fond of this quality in people. able to make others laugh and happy...
i am so so excited to read this story.
pls update soon.