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Originally posted by: madlal

Very very well written way of exposing.I loved it.Thank you for this OS.I am waiting for this to happen.

Originally posted by: Ashi3

It's beautiful! The raw pain & agony is so heart-wrenching. My heart cries for the beautiful soul who has been shredded into pieces by the ones whom she loved the most. She trusted them with her heart. She believed them to keep it safe. But they played with it & mocked her in return. How is a person supposed to stay sane & calm after such a betrayal? How do one overcome the brutal slaughter of their trust? Heartbreaks not only break one's heart, it also make people experience physical pain. And the excruciating physical & emotional pain makes one drain out completely.

I love reading & writing about human emotions in depth. You have done a wonderful job in portraying it. You're a brilliant author. I loved how you described the stranger at the end. It sounded very symbolic. The streetlights forming a halo like appearance made him look like an angel ( a guardian angel for Mauli). And the hand offering help, ready to pull her out of her sorrows...

Are you planning to continue this? Please do continue. I really want to read rest of her journey & also the fate of the betrayers. I want to see how Kunal's Mom react to the betrayal. And I would love to read more about Mauli & 'the man'. 😳

Originally posted by: harshiidiv

Very beautifully written dear

Really amazing 😊

Please post link of this os with title on OS/FF/THREAD so I can add it in.

Originally posted by: sirimiri

Wow this was so heart wrenching.
Loved it so much.
Continue soon.