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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: madlal
Very very well written way of exposing.I loved it.Thank you for this OS.I am waiting for this to happen.

Thank you so much..😳 it means so much when i get to read such lovely things about the writeup...😊

Thank you for all the love❤️

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Ashi3
It's beautiful! The raw pain & agony is so heart-wrenching. My heart cries for the beautiful soul who has been shredded into pieces by the ones whom she loved the most. She trusted them with her heart. She believed them to keep it safe. But they played with it & mocked her in return. How is a person supposed to stay sane & calm after such a betrayal? How do one overcome the brutal slaughter of their trust? Heartbreaks not only break one's heart, it also make people experience physical pain. And the excruciating physical & emotional pain makes one drain out completely.

I love reading & writing about human emotions in depth. You have done a wonderful job in portraying it. You're a brilliant author. I loved how you described the stranger at the end. It sounded very symbolic. The streetlights forming a halo like appearance made him look like an angel ( a guardian angel for Mauli). And the hand offering help, ready to pull her out of her sorrows...

Are you planning to continue this? Please do continue. I really want to read rest of her journey & also the fate of the betrayers. I want to see how Kunal's Mom react to the betrayal. And I would love to read more about Mauli & 'the man'. 😳

Hii dear... Thank you for such effusive praise of my work...i i rely dont know what to say when you say such wonderful things... its heartening and i am very glad you liked it so much...

Yes i love to read and write about human emotions as well...the subtle nuances in a character is intriguing to observe and read about...😊

I do plan to continue and turn this into a short story...and yes i am definitely going to include all the points youve mentioned above...the role of k's mom is very important i feel...😊 she is a breath if fresh air in the world of mothers in law😆

Once again thank you for such generous words...

Edited by amortentia15 - 7 years ago

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Harshita Srivastava

@harshiidiv

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 7 years ago

#23

Very beautifully written dear

Really amazing 😊

Please post link of this os with title on OS/FF/THREAD so I can add it in.

Edited by harshiidiv - 7 years ago

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Pixiepixel11

@Pixiepixel11

Stunner

+ 31

Posted: 7 years ago

#24

Wow this was so heart wrenching.
Loved it so much.
Continue soon.

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naamsunita

@naamsunita

Inactive

Posted: 7 years ago

#25

Loved it. It was beautiful. Waiting for the next update

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amortentia15

@amortentia15

Dazzler

Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: harshiidiv
Very beautifully written dear
Really amazing 😊

Please post link of this os with title on OS/FF/THREAD so I can add it in.

Thank you dear😳

Oh okay I will do that...thank you for informing😊