HaYa OS - My Next Door Barbie Doll - Part 2 on Page 4

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P.S. - This story is from child's POV so words have been twisted in their language , but to make you all comfortable the original words have been written in brackets 😳😳




*Singh Mansion*


A group of 5 boys of 8 years of age were sitting in a circle in Singh Mansion's garden to play carom . Singh Mansion belongs to Harak Singh , his wife Preeto and their one and only naughty Junior Harak Singh who is a fair 8 year old boy with chubby cheeks . Though he is a mischievous kid yet he is loved and pampered by everyone bcz of his mature nature and his chubby cheeks which everyone wants to kiss and pull and that instantly turns his cheeks into dark red .


"Harman ! Do you know that you have got new neighbor's ??" , Harsh his friend asked him


"Yeah I know that . They have shifted here yesterday night only" , Harman said while focusing on striking the pink coin


"Hi ! Can I join you all here ??" , a voice said from behind the boys , breaking their concentration on the carom game


Harman looks up from the carom board to see the source of voice and he found a boy of his age smiling at them


"Who are you ?? We have never seen you here" , Kartik asked him


"I'm Varun . I have shifted here last night only"


"Ohh so you are the new neighbor I've got" , Harman said while glancing at him and again resumed his carom game


"Ummm can I join you all ??" , Varun again asked them with a hopeful look


"Yes ! You can join us but you have to follow certain rules to be here , to play with us" , Rohan said while looking at Harman


"What rules ??" , Varun asked confused


"Harman is our leader , so like us even you have to follow his orders . If he says he wants to play cricket then we will play cricket . If he says he wants to go for skating then we will go for skating . Secondly you have to be punctual and come here on time by 5.30 pm sharp and thirdly if you face any kind of problem then tell Harman and he will sort it out for you" , one of the boys said


"OK . I will follow all the rules . Now can I join you guys ??" , Varun said with a smile


"Fine ! Join us . We will play carom again" , and saying so Harman started to set the carom board



*After Sometimes*

"Varu bhaiyya Varu bhaiyya" , a sweet kiddish voice came from behind Varun and everyone turned their face to see the face of the voice



*Harman's POV*


We all were playing game when suddenly we heard a cute baby voice . There stood a girl who was wearing a top and a hot pant with a high ponytail having a Barbie doll in her one hand . Damn she looked so cute and her cheeks - they were so plum red that I wanted to touch it . She was just looking like her Barbie doll . She will be my Barbie doll . But she looked sad and it seemed she was on the verge of crying since her cute button nose were turning red



"Who is she Varun ??" Harman asked looking at the cute girl


"She is my sister Saumya . She is just 6 years old" , saying so Varun stood from the chair and went towards his sister who was looking at him innocently . He knelt down to her to know why she came here


"What happened Somu ??" , Varun asked Saumya while caressing her ponytail


"Bhaiyya my Baabie (Barbie) pincess (princess) is not dancing" , Saumya said in her cute baby tone voice with a hint of tears which meant that she could cry any moment if her Barbie dint started dancing


"Maybe the battery is over . Give me the doll and I will put a new battery in the doll" , and saying so Varun took the doll and Saumya from there



*Harman's POV*


All this while my whole concentration was on my Barbie doll who has come here few minutes ago . I must say that MY Barbie doll looked more beautiful than the Barbie doll she was holding in her hands . When I saw Varun holding her hands and going somewhere I felt shocked bcz I dint wanted my Barbie doll to go anywhere so soon .



"Hey ! Where do you think you're going Varun ???" , Harman asked him on seeing him going somewhere with his Barbie doll


"Ummm Harman ! Actually Saumya's Barbie doll needs new battery so that she can play , so I was taking her to home to put new batteries in the doll"


Harman came running towards Saumya , took her Barbie and knelt down to her level and looked at her


"Saumya ! Will you play carom with me . It's also a nice game and you will like it" , Harman said with a smile while his friends instantly stopped playing carom and gaped at him that since when did Harman started inviting ppl for games . They looked at him to which he just gave them a cool look


"Come Saumya" , Harman held out his hand for Saumya . She looked at him cutely and then at the carom board and gave her hand in Harman's hand and happily started hopping like a rabbit towards the carom board . Harman made her sit on one of the chair and told her about the game . She looked at him cutely nodding her head in a yes .



*Harman's POV*


Her hands are so soft like a feather that I felt it needs to be handled with care . Which cream and powder does she uses for such soft skin ?? Or her skin is like this only - baby soft ?? Well whatever it is I want this softness forever to remain with my Barbie Doll , till our old age. And she looks so cute while hopping like a rabbit with her ponytail moving up and down that I felt like kissing her cheeks .


When Harman gave her the carom board striker to strike , she striked so softly that the coin remained at the same position which made Harman give a soft chuckle .


"Saumya its played like this" , and saying so Harman took her soft hands in his hands and explained her how to strike so that the coin moves and hit with other coins .Seeing the way Harman striked the striker which made it hit with other coins , she was amazed to see how a coin can hit other coins and started giggling , which made Harman happy and he was lost in her smile


After sometime he saw that Saumya is getting bored with this game and she was looking at everybody with a puppy look to which Harman just chuckled at her cute antics


"Do you want some chocolates ??" , Harman asked her with a smile


Hearing the word chocolates she looked at Harman happily

"Cholates cholates (chocolates) ... I wan (want) cholates" , Saumya said with an instant smile


"Don't give her chocolates Harman .. There are so many chocolates kept in home . After sometimes we will go home , then I will give her the chocolates" , Varun said


"I'm giving HER the chocolate so what is your problem ???" , Harman snapped at Varun and then turned to Saumya


"You wait here , I will come with the chocolates" , Harman said with a sweet smile and went inside his house


"Yay !!! Arman will give me cholates . Even my baabie will have cholates . We both will eat cholates and will take some choclates home for momma and daddy" , Saumya said happily to her Barbie doll


He came running to the kitchen and took handful of chocolates and started to run out of the house when he saw his Barbie Doll i.e Saumya from the drawing room window who was happily telling her Barbie doll that how Harman is bringing chocolates for her . He came back in the garden with chocolates and gave it to Saumya . She looked so delighted to see so many colorful chocolate wrappers that she stood on her toes and ran to Harman .


"You are so coot (cute)" , and saying so she kissed his chubby cheeks to which Harman became startled and realizing that his Barbie doll has kissed him turning his cheeks red , he became shy


"Thanks Saumya"


"Arman (Harman) ! Your cheeks have tuned (turned) red . Can I pinch your chubby cheeks" , Saumya asked innocently


"No Saumya" , Varun said


"Pleech (please) bhaiyya ! Arman's cheeks are so chubby that I wan to pinch it" , Saumya said to Varun with innocence


"No . It's a bad habit to pinch cheeks" , Varun chided his sister to which Saumya became sad and she looked at Harman with a puppy look . Harman felt sad with Saumya being sad and he never wanted his doll to be sad , so Harman tilted his cheeks towards her and she pinched his cheeks happily



*Harman's POV*


Damn her soft soft hands are like cotton candy and when they touched my cheeks , it felt as if I'm in some other world . The way she was giggling and pinching my cheeks again and again was so soothing to watch that I was just lost in my Barbie dolls cuteness . Today only I'll go to her house and tell her parents to never let Saumya do any work bcz when I'll become big and marry her then I want my Barbie doll's hand to be like this only - soft like cotton candy .



*After few minutes*

"Harman now we will go " , Varun said to Harman and disturbed Harman Saumya's cheek pinching session by holding Saumya's hand


"Wait for some more time Varun . You have just came today at my place" , Harman said to Varun in an attempt to make him stay for some more time so that he can be with his doll


"Mom must be waiting for us at home" , Varun said and held Saumya's hand which instantly made Harman sad that now his Barbie will go back


"Ohk"


"Arman ! Can I come here torrow (tomorrow) also to take cholates and pinch your chubby cheeks ?? , Saumya asked with an innocent look


Harman looked up at her with a 800 volt smile and instantly said , "Yes Saumya ! You can come here every day for chocolates and you can also play with me and my friends , just like Varun and you can pinch my cheeks" , which shocked his friends but Harman dint pay attention to their shocked faces


"Co'mmon Saumya say bye to Harman " , Varun said


"Bye Arman" , and saying so she started to go with Varun when she stopped for a moment and ran back to Harman , surprising Harman


"Arman "


"What happened Saumya ??" , and saying so Harman knelt down to her level


She kissed his cheeks and pulling them she ran away from there with Varun


"Such a naughty girl she is . But whatever it is she is my Barbie doll - my cute , naughty Barbie Doll and my next door neighbor" , Harman said to himself and saying so even he went inside his house with a smile








I know this story is not that great but you can encourage me to write much better stories . So Do hit the like button and comment on it 😳😳




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RIMO9013 thumbnail
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Really nice really dreamy keep writing more like this
Edited by RIMO9013 - 8 years ago
anitarani thumbnail
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So the writer in you just could not curtail yourself...Great...
Good job so far...cute chubby cheeks guy with dainty
barbie doll...liking the story so far...Please continue..😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Awesome Ishu the way u portrayes the bond between #HaYa since childhood give their relation deep roots showed that they are distined to be together . the love from the first sight ā­ļøā¤ļø is z perfect example of how they will be attached and stick to each other esp when Harman and soumya were eager to meet again . i enjoyed sooo much wish u complete this a superb start .
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Beautiful Story.
It Was So Sweet.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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omg ishu so the writer in u got got wake up call

it was awsome dear each line while reading iam blusihingā˜ŗļø

chubby cheek harman soft candy barbie doll soumya aww they r so cute😳

pls write more

i loved it ā¤ļønd u made varun bro of soumya nicešŸ˜†
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Congrats 😳 Ab unres kar bhi do 🤣🤣
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Awww what a great and different way of ur writing it's so beautiful to read HaYa bonding from their childhood indeed it's a very unique and original content on HaYa story am in love with ur writing style
Awww my chubby cheek dimple chin 😳 harman and barbie beauty Saumya wanna pull their cheeks šŸ‘
By the way tu kab se anita ki team join karli wo always keep teasing me ki ur golu molu hotti 😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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ishu ...u established the fact that harman to bachpan se hi gulabo ka h
cute os
write something romantic na
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Aww such a cute OS .. this OS made me wish HaYa were childhood buddies ...Soumya in her childhood rarely had any friends .. Harman would hv been a perfect friend for her 😳 .. loved that little kiss moment in the end .. very cute .. 😳 .. Soumya as child is quite bold in your OS šŸ˜‰šŸ˜† ..

Do write more .. u did a wonderful job with this one šŸ‘

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