HaYa OS - My Next Door Barbie Doll - Part 2 on Page 4 - Page 2

Originally posted by: RIMO9013

Really nice really dreamy keep writing more like this

Originally posted by: anitarani

So the writer in you just could not curtail yourself...Great... Yeah ... Seeing that sexy pose of Haya , I thought to to write something 😆😆

Good job so far...cute chubby cheeks guy with dainty

barbie doll...liking the story so far...Please continue..😳 Thanks .. This story is this much only .. Just a One shot ... I wanted them to stay sweet cute kids so dint want to make it a long story .. Yes I wanted Harman to have chubby cheeks and Saumya to always act cute 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: nohasaleh

Awesome Ishu the way u portrayes the bond between #HaYa since childhood give their relation deep roots showed that they are distined to be together . Yes Noha .. They are destined to be together always and no one can come in b/w them 😳😳 Not even Varun bhaiyya 😆😆

the love from the first sight ⭐️❤️ is z perfect example of how they will be attached and stick to each other esp when Harman and soumya were eager to meet again . i enjoyed sooo much wish u complete this a superb start . This is just a one shot since I only wanted to show their toddler scenes 😳😳

Originally posted by: SilverBell

Beautiful Story.
It Was So Sweet.

Originally posted by: ushasri

omg ishu so the writer in u got got wake up call Yes Usha .. Seeing Haya's sexy pose made me so excited that I wanted to write something on them 😳😳😳

it was awsome dear each line while reading iam blusihing☺️ Awww ... I'm so happy to read this ... Dont blush infront of your parents else they will think that what has happened to you all of a sudden 🤣

chubby cheek harman soft candy barbie doll soumya aww they r so cute😳 Haina ... Even I loved them while writing about them ..

pls write more

i loved it ❤️nd u made varun bro of soumya nice😆 Yeah .. I dint wanted Surbhi here so thought of doing this sibling swap 😆😆😆

Originally posted by: RIMO9013

Thanks for your sweet comments 😳😳

Originally posted by: sparklingeyes

ishu ...u established the fact that harman to bachpan se hi gulabo ka h So to hai .. Haya will always be together 😳😳😳

cute os Thanks 😳

write something romantic na I'm bad in that genre 😭😭 Probably you can write na bcz your writing style is good 😳😳😳

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Aww such a cute OS .. Thanks Jyoti 😳😳

this OS made me wish HaYa were childhood buddies ... Its OK ... What dint happen in the story has happened here 😆😆

Soumya in her childhood rarely had any friends .. Harman would hv been a perfect friend for her 😳 .. loved that little kiss moment in the end .. very cute .. 😳 .. Soumya as child is quite bold in your OS 😉😆 .. Haan yaar .. Show waley toh humey itni jaldi bold Saumya dikhane se rahe so thought to make her bold and naughty in the OS 😆😆 That's true .. Harman would have been a perfect friend fr her .. He will be possessive for her , will always make her happy 😳😳

Do write more .. u did a wonderful job with this one 👏 Thanks for your kind words 😳😳😳 Even you write great and maybe you can pen down a story on Haya 😳😳