HaYa OS - My Next Door Barbie Doll - Part 2 on Page 4 - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

29

Views

2.9k

Users

13

Likes

48

Frequent Posters

Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: CroppedHorizon.

The title itself is so cute Ishu <3 Am I dreaming 😲😲😲 You're here 😲😲😲 Thanks Butterfly 😳😳

Then the story...so sweet & cute! Like a cotton candy itself lol. Btw how old our harmu is?? His thoughts are rather mature. ;) 😆😆😆 Harmu is still a kid but yes he is mature ... You know an today's kids are so smart than us 😆😆

Samu seems mesmerized by him too. Hope this love at first sight will go on! Keep writing more dear. Your English was always good just add more imagination & voila! xD Dont worry ... Haya's love will always remain like this ... I'm very bad in imagining things ... Maybe next time I can use this suggestion of yours 😳😳


Thanks for coming and commenting here .. Its good to see you here 😳😳
Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: zubeada

such a cute naughty OS 😆😳 Aww Nish ... Thanks 😳😳😳

well done Ishu its amazing
plz do write more Hope to write soon when I get good pic or maybe a good scene 😳😳


Thanks Nish for your sweet comment 😳😳
Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#23


Thanks for everyone's comment 😳😳😳
Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#24


PART 2 - My Next Door Barbie Doll





Image result for cute small boy and girl love




*One Year Later*

Time flies by quickly and now Harman , Saumya and Varun have turned one year older . Harman is still that chubby cheek , naughty , bossy boy while his Barbie is still innocent and cute , but very naughty . Yeah ! Harman's Barbie has now become very naughty , but still is loved and pampered by everyone , especially Harman , and Harman is quite possessive for his Barbie



*Springdales School Annual Function*



Today was the annual function of the school and there was lots of hustle bustle in the school . There was excitement and happiness in the environment since everyone from students to teacher's to principle were busy with the preparations for the evening function to kick start



Meanwhile in the playground away from all the crowd and chaos Saumya was beautifully dressed up in a baby pink gown with flicks bun , wearing a beautiful artificial diamond studded tiara . She was sitting on the cool grass basking in the sunset view of the beautiful summer evening with a cute baby smile playing on her lips



"I am a Little Fairy,

I shine so bright

I am a Little Fairy,

Let me show you my light.

I am a Little Fairy,

I am the Child of God.

I am a Little Fairy,

I am the friend of all.

I am a Little Fairy,

I fly so high, from flowers to the sky.

I am a Little Fairy,

I like kids who don't lie" , she was singing the poem in her cute baby voice being in her own world reciting the poem which she was supposed to say in the drama for the annual function , when Varun came and saw her sitting alone and smiling to herself . He sneaked near Saumya and twisted her ears making her ears go strawberry red



"This is your punishment Somu for doing naughty things , Varun said while glaring at her sis



Saumya started crying with pain



"Momma ... Momma" , Saumya said in her cute baby tone and began rubbing her ears to ease the pain



"Hey Varun !! Stop making her cry else I will complain to our class teacher" , Saumya's fair cute chubby savior Harman said



"Why did you make her cry ??" , Harman asked Varun in a high pitch voice



Varun looked at Harman and dint say anything and glared at Saumya who has now stopped crying and was looking at her chubby savior , Harman



"Tell me Varun that why you made her cry and why did you twisted her ears , otherwise I will tell to our class teacher that you have hurted your sister"



"Harman don't try to defend my sis "



"I asked why did you twisted her ears & made her cry ? , harman asked angrily



"Bcz of her naughtiness , Varun said to Harman while glaring at his sis



"Naughtiness ??? , Harman asked smiling to Varun



"Yeah ... And don't smile bcz this time her naughtiness was really very bad , and saying so Varun started to narrate the incident that happened



*Flashback*



Saumya always liked playing with colors and whenever and wherever she gets the time and place , she would show her artistic skills . Be it walls , furniture , carpets , utensils , clothes etc , Saumya has shown her drawing skills on everything . Yesterday also same thing happened



Nimmi was busy in her work while Varun had gone to his friend's house for practise for annual function , so Saumya was getting bored and therefore she deiced to be M.F.Hussain . After successfully drawing on the main door , dining table and her bedroom walls , she went to kitchen and saw cherry tomatoes kept on the floor to be dried . She picked 2 cherry tomatoes and ran to the room . She took those two tomatoes and painted them with light brown color giving it a caramel look .



*********************************************



"Mom ! I'm back home , Varun shouted while closing the main door



"Ohhh ... Bhaiyya has come back . If he will see me and the room all dirty with colors then he will scold me . I should clean myself , Saumya said this to herself while keeping the colors in her mini drawer and saw her caramel painted tomato



"I should hide it else bhaiyya will scold me for wasting tomatoes



She started looking for something where she can hide her painted tomatoes and saw her bhaiyya's bag . She ran towards her bhaiyya's school bag and hid those tomatoes in his bag to prevent herself from getting scolding's from Varun and thought to take back these tomatoes later on in night when Varun will be sleeping



"Somu !!! Look I brought pastries for us . Come and lets have it , Varun said while coming towards the room



He opened the door of the room and saw the floor all colored with brown and pink colors



"Somu ! I have told you so many times to keep a cloth with you and after doing all these drawings on furniture's and other things just clean that place . Leave it . I'll do it later on . For now come and have pastries



"Sorry bhaiyya ... Next time I'll keep a cloth with me



The day later on went peaceful , but Saumya totally forgot about the tomatoes she was supposed to take out from her Varun bhaiiya's bag



Next day both brother sister duo were in a hurry to go to school for annual function and so Varun dint pay any attention to his bag and just kept the lunch box and took hold of Saumya's hand and went with her



*In school *



After dropping Saumya to her class he was going to staff room to meet his teacher when Varun saw a red ant on his shirt and so he threw it away . Seconds later he again saw a red ant moving on his hands and so , he again swatted it away from his hands . This continued till he reached the staff room . This time he felt a tinge on his cheeks and so he moved his hands towards the cheek to see a red ant . After meeting his class teacher he came to hall and kept his bag when he saw so many red ants on it . He was shocked , and so he suddenly opened his bag to see that why so many red ants are there . He found to 2 caramel color thing and he understood that its bcz of this that the ants are coming . He was trying to figure out that what are these 2 caramel thing since he has never seen such an eatable . He was inspecting it when by mistake he held the thing so hard that it got squeezed and red color thing from that object came on his shirt



"Oh no ... My shirt got spoilt . Now what will I do , Varun said to himself in a tensed voice


He smelled the thing and realized that it was tomato



"How come tomato is in caramel color ?? That means Somu ...



"I'll not leave this girl .. Just few hours before the function she spoilt my shirt with her painting " , and murmuring to himself he went to his class teacher to call his parent so that his parent can come to school with a fresh shirt and he can change his shirt



*Flashback End*



Varun saw Harman laughing like crazy



"There is nothing to laugh in it Harman . She spoiled my dress , Varun glared at Saumya who was now having hiccups bcz of the crying session



Harman after controlling his laugh looked at his innocent hiccuping Barbie and asked her , "why did you do that Saumya??



"I dint get anything else to paint so I saw tomatoes in the kitchen and thought to paint it , and then when I heard Varu Bhaiyya's voice from downstairs so I instantly thought to hide the tomatoes so that he doesn't scold me for wasting tomatoes by coloring it . I dint do anything wrong na Harman Bhaiyya" , Saumya asked with an innocence



Harman got shocked hearing bhaiyya from his Barbie's mouth



" Saumya don't call me bhaiyya" , Harman said in a panicking voice



"But you are my Varu bhaiyya's friend and classmate"



"But I am not your bhaiyya . You can just call me Harman"



"But..." , Saumya was trying to say something when Varun interrupted her



"Leave her Harman . Day by day she is getting so naughty . Now I should control her naughtiness , Varun said in a pissed of voice



Saumya again started crying . Harman felt sad seeing her crying like that



"Go from here Varun" , Harman said to Varun in an authoritative voice



"Hey Saumya don't cry na pleech" , Harman said but still Saumya was sobbing violently



"OK !! If you will stop crying then I will give you chocolate"



Saumya hearing the name of her obsession - chocolate , immediately stopped crying . And she looked with her puppy eyes towards Harman



"Really !! You will give me chocolate ??



"Yes" , and with this he took out the chocolate from his pocket and unwrapped the chocolate wrapper and gave her the chocolate . Saumya happily took the chocolate from Harman's hand and started eating it . While Harman was looking at Saumya with a content . Saumya saw Harman looking at her and she thought that even Harman wanted the chocolate , so She forwarded the chocolate towards Harman's mouth and smiled . Harman also ate from the same chocolate .After finishing the chocolate Harman took out his handkerchief and wiped Saumya's hands and after that even he wiped his hand and kept back his handkerchief



"Thank you Harman . You are so sweet" , Saumya said happily by kissing Harman's cheeks



Since the time Saumya has arrived in Harman's neighborhood , it has become everyday habit of Harman to give chocolates to Saumya to see her smiling and giggling and Saumya other than the chocolates given by Harman won't take chocolates from anybody else . And this would always make Harman proud




*Flashback , One Day*



*Harman's Home*




"Harman ! I want chocolates to eat , Saumya came running to Harman's room from her house

"Ok Saumya ! You sit I will bring chocolates and something to eat" , and saying so Harman happily went out

Saumya on the other hand was trying to climb up Harman's bed and sit on it but his bed was so high that she couldn't sit on bed and so she was trying to climb up on his bed when Harman came to the room with food tray and saw his Barbie struggling to climb up his mountain like high bed . He just gave a soft chuckle and smiled looking at his Barbie's cuteness



*Harman's POV*



I came back to my room with chips and cold drinks and of course my Barbie's favorite chocolates , when I saw her struggling to climb my bed so that she can sit on it . Gosh !!! this girl is so cute . She looked so cute while trying to climb my bed with her tiny fingers and legs . I kept the food tray at the table and went near my Barbie . I held her from the back and helped her to sit on my bed . She started giggling on reaching my soft bed and started jumping up and down on it , and I was all smiling on touching my cotton candy Barbie

"Harman ! I like eating chocolate every day from your house. You are so sweet , Saumya said after eating the 3rd chocolate , and after saying so she pinched his chubby cheeks



*Flashback End*



She has now stopped eating chocolates from her own home and would always go to Harman's house to eat chocolates and Harman would be more than happy to have his Barbie in his house



" Harman !! What have you become for the annual function ?" , Saumya asked in her innocent voice after wiping her hands from Harman's handkerchief



"I have become the prince who has come to take his princess with him to his palace"



"Oh so you are that boy who has become my prince in the play" , Saumya said with a shock which was later replaced with a happiness



"That means you have become my princess" , Harman asked ecstatic



"Yes Harman"



Harman's happiness knew no bound . He wanted to jump out of happiness but refrained from doing so since he dint wanted Saumya to think of him as a fool



"Harman I want to say something . Promise me that you will not scold me" , Saumya said while holding Harman's hands with her tiny fingers



"Say it Saumya , I will never scold you"



"Harman I love your chubby cheeks very much" , and saying so she

pinched his cheeks and smiled happily to which even Harman smiled



"Come Saumya lets go to hall . Everyone must be waiting for us" , and saying so Harman makes Saumya stand and holding her hands they went to the hall




Edited by Pani.Puri - 8 years ago
Pani.Puri thumbnail
10th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#25


I know that I dont write good stories but atleast a criticism would have also worked ... But no one came to read the story since last 2 days 😭.


My cute little Haya were left alone here in this brutal IF without any comment 😭.



I'm sad 😭.




Edited by Pani.Puri - 8 years ago
Beautiful... thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#26
U r Harman and somya r so cute kids.
Little Prince and little princess.
anitarani thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 8 years ago
#27
Image result for cute small boy and girl love
\

Your kiddos are real cute...and so is their story...
but now fast forward it to at least them being
around 12 years...and chubby cheeks ko lean
mean bana dena... 😳


Sagigirl thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail
Posted: 8 years ago
#28
Great writing Ishu
But honestly i wnt to stroy about a grown harman / Soumya.😉

Keep writing n gve us some romantic scene like kolej type love story between them.😊
Edited by Sagigirl - 8 years ago
Hend_Refai thumbnail
9th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 7 years ago
#29
Cute funny lovely story
please continue
It is the first HaYa story I read
SilverBell thumbnail
Posted: 7 years ago
#30
This Is A Very Cute Story.
But Please Make Haya In To Grown Ups.

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".