::FF-Resisting the Billionaire:: MATURE CHP 4 UPDATED PG 8 - Page 5

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Posted: 8 years ago
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This is different yet so amazing
serious ashu man you killed it here I want a haya like this this is so so sos so good
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Posted: 8 years ago
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I liked your focus on building up the story. Though Harman is flirting guy, still his thinking isn't backwards. He supported her when he even doesn't know her properly...In the second meet itself, he shows this courtesy. And this will convert Somu's lust/infatuation to pure love, I hope. It's very tough to imagine Nimmi as materialistic woman but you described it perfectly. and Maninder here is also an insane creature. I like Surbhi in this FF. Looking forward to see the first private meet of HaYa when Saumya has emotionally broken down.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Edited by RagingBlaze - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harman So sweet and cute you are 😳😳😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Tum he ho ab tum he ho
meri zindagi ab tum he ho
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harman se milne k 3 tareeke 😆😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Harman - Banda bilkul hero hoon 😆😆
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Baba re baba 😲 What an update ... When the title said "The truth" I thought that Harman is gonna say that he just lusts Saumya as of now 🤣🤣🤣 But you took me off guard with the truth ... That truth was disgusting yet shocking 😲 and Harman did good by throwing that dumb-wit out of his house ... 😆😆😆 Maninder and Nimmi deserve some punishment for the way they think and behave 🤔🤔🤔 I felt so bad for Saumya that all her life she has been just deceived and hurt by her parents and they always failed to see that how much they have hurt their both daughters ...


Just a question - Was Saumya carrying toothbrush with her to brush her teeth at Harman's place OR she brushed her teeth with her future husband's brush 😈😈🤣🤣 Awww Harman came to Saumya's penthouse to make her feel light 😳 How sweet he is 😳😳😳 So Harman has feelings for Saumya which is strong and is not lust 😳😳😳


Such kinds of parents do exist where everything that matters is their pride , name in society and not their daughters bcz they prefer son 😡😡😡 Hope Saumya proves her mettle that she is the best as a daughter and her parents realise their mistakes and regressive thinking and ask for her forgiveness 😡😡😡 Make them redeem babes ...


A nice update with some bitter revelations ... Good going babes 👏 Although I was expecting a long update but its OK ... If possible for you can you update 2 chappy's at a time so that before your internship you finish off this FF since I DON'T WANT TO WAIT for this FF a long 😭 Do however you feel but update soon 😳😳😳

Edited by RagingBlaze - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: RagingBlaze






Baba re baba😲What an update ... When the title said "The truth" I thought that Harman is gonna say that he just lusts Saumya as of now🤣🤣🤣But you took me off guard with the truth ...That truth was disgusting yet shocking😲and Harman did good by throwing that dumb-wit out of his house ...😆😆😆Maninder and Nimmi deserve some punishment for the way they think and behave🤔🤔🤔I felt so bad for Saumya that all her life she has been just deceived and hurt by her parents and they always failed to see that how much they have hurt their both daughters ...


Just a question - Was Saumya carrying toothbrush with her to brush her teethat Harman's place OR she brushed her teethwith her future husband's brush🤣Awww Harman came to Saumya's penthouse to make her feel light 😳How sweet he is😳😳😳So Harman has feelings for Saumya which is strong and is not lust😳😳😳


Such kinds of parents do exist where everything that matters is their pride , name in society and not their daughters bcz they prefer son😡😡😡Hope Saumya proves her mettle that she is the best as a daughter and her parents realise their mistakes and regressive thinking and ask for her forgiveness😡😡😡Make them redeem babes ...


A nice update with some bitter revelations ... Good going babes👏AlthoughI was expecting a long update but its OK ... Ifpossible for you can you update 2 chappy's at a time so that before your internship you finish off this FF since I DON'T WANT TO WAIT for this FF a long😭 Do however you feel but update soon😳😳😳



Lol Soumya already knows through Harman's actions and expressions that the feeling is mutual
She was carrying the toothbrush xD lol
I have seen such parents in real life, I live in Mumbai and I am from an upper class family tho I don't believe in thic class shit, I talk to everyone and everyone is equal in my eyes...
But I have seen such parents and its really disgusting
I can't give long updates since I am trying to enjoy my vacations and update regularly on I-FN"!
This fic will take quite some time, HaYa aren't even in love yet so don't rush me lol xD Whenever I get an off I'll be updating both my Fanfics! And also i will be writing late at night after my shift gets over, so u guys better not abandon me!
Whether Harman has feelings or no we'll find out in the next chap ;)
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Posted: 8 years ago
#50
I like this story 😳 I like this soumya and harman😳

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