'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 47

Too beautiful...

Thanks for Update,Dear.😊

Now that was sad

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

It's been so long.pls update

Same way I expect reviews also for every chapter! 😭

Ahh! The girl was in the room the whole time!! Harshit thank God you directed Sayali oh Lord! My heart had stopped beating in the last one and ahh finally I had a sigh of relief. She is okay!!

Originally posted by: Kairalove55

OMG!!!! Cliffhanger😲...

Thank you so much for the Pm dear...

It feels really good finally the song got approval... Their hardwork paid off👏...

Loved the phone conversation btw madhu and siddhu😆...

Great to see merlyn kind of friend who is very understanding and equally concerned about madhu and sid's relationship eventhough she is in love with him... The way you handled merlyn char is soo good👏...

So our siddhu decided to propose... Waiting to know the exact reasons why he was hesitating... Before that where does madhu gone😕... And the concern of siddhu for madhu and the way sayya handled siddhu not to get tensed and hid the fact., have to say all the characters are very minute and well in emotions and role they play... Again hats off to you...

Please make the next part soon and not long as this time it took...

Waitinggg eagerly to know Wat happend to madhu and wat was siddhu's reaction and poor sayali...

Thank you so much dear! Your comments are so very motivating.

For the Merlyns part I've to thank Kaushi. It was one of her comments in the past that made me consider this angle. But now I'm glad that I did! So happy that it was accepted! :)

Waiting for your take on chapter 22! :)

Originally posted by: .LovelyDreamer.

Oh ho.. Bestest Update..

Totally love it Subha..

But Where is Madhu...

Im in the state of Siddhu now

Thankooo! 😳 Hope you soon get out of Siddhu's state!

Originally posted by: ratna.nanda

Ayyo mahuvinu entha pattiye? Athum finally avan propose cheyyan ready aayappol. .don't make him go 10 steps back now...and since you ended in a cliffhanger. .njan oru faster longer updatenaayi kaathirikkunnu.

Ellathinum ulla utharam chapter 22il und Makale! 😆

Originally posted by: Bindu.

Chapter 21:

Oh,a cliffhanger! Where's Madhu? Hope she's safe wherever she is!

This update was beautiful for so many reasons,Subha⭐️. The conversation between Merlyn and Siddhu was wonderful. Merlyn is such a matured girl and an awesome friend!⭐️ So,it's a past relationship with someone that's stopping him from proposing to Madhu.Finally,Sir has decided to do the honors..all thanks to Merlyn. His question of when did all girls turn shameless and her reply were hilarious!🤣

I was disappointed when the song was rejected. And I'm glad both Jai and Sid chose quality over quantity.The convo b/w the Mehta brothers was sensible.Super happy for Jai and Siddhu!😃

The banter and leg-pulling session b/w friends was funny and cute!😆😆

Talking of the best part,it was our love birds' phone convo and how they hate being separated!❤️Madhu's sudden love for ethnic wear and Sid's insecurity and concern are just too adorable!

Update soon,dear..want to know where's Madhu gone!

Bindamma!!

I'm also becoming very shameless I think. I feel like making every girls mind twisted! 😆

And yes, IT IS a past relation that's stopping Sid! I think you already got to know which! :D
Waiting for you next! 😆

Originally posted by: Penfolk

Can you please be a little less good with your words Subhaa? I can't handle being blown away so much.

Okay. Now. One of the best updates.

And the best part was Merlyn and Siddhu, at least for me. Hehe! So real. I loved each word of Merlyn. Every girl in your story is beautiful in their own way .

I somehow am not concerned about Madhu. Because you are not into tragedies. I believe.

How beautifully you play with emotions. Like who could have thought setting up a complete emotional turmoil of two brothers Vishwas and Vaibhav in only a few paragraphs?

Brilliant.

Muah!

Merlyn-Sid convo happened because of you! Thank you for letting me make Merlyn relevant too!
😆

My liking for tragedies depend on the story actually. I like writing tragedies a lot actually. Very intense it is. But I try avoiding tragic ends. I too tend to include deaths in the story, but mostly to show how people moved on after that!

Vishwas and Vaibhav I'm not sure why I wrote that even. It struck me just like that so included! 😆