'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 45

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Posted: 7 years ago
You managed to get me here finally with your wonderful writing. Hehe. Sorry for not commenting for so long. For your kind information I had been reading and liking the chapters all along like a stalker, but I owe you a comment for this one, since I truly had a good time reading it.

The ending is chilling. With our madhu missing, siddhu is turning edgy and riled up. From his gentlemanly behavior to not minding his words was pure delight read ! 😆 Madhu has done good damage to chui mui. Nonetheless with even sayali not aware and clueless about madhu is alarming.
This incident is an indication for him to get married. So next time this happens he can at least call at her home fearlessly. 😉

I loved merlyn- siddhu conversation. Both are very clear to each other. No space for misunderstandings, which is what ensures their wonderful friendship.

" Asking me? Fine,get her some fruit flavored lip balm.. So that your kisses would taste better! "

" When did all the women in the world become so shameless? "

" When all the men in the world decided to become Chui- Mui! "

🤣🤣

Jai finally got his due success from the person gone through similar grief. But probably he can save Jai from treading on same path.

Finally what is keeping me on the edge of my seat is the missing madhumita ! The secret of siddhu's control and their first lip balm kiss ! ☺️

Keep it up my madhumati, can't wait to read the next chapter
🤗

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Posted: 7 years ago
Subha,

Plsss no tragedies... 😭 😭 😭

Finally he decided to confess his love but she is missing.. 😭
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 17 A)

Madhu's such a cutie! She knows deep down what Siddhant feels though - that is what drives her actions now. She'll wait for him to come around to spilling the words but in the meantime who can resist those fleeting moments of le romance 😉

Siddhant's reactions are equally endearing - the heart wants what the heart wants, hehe!

Kumbalgargh trip?! Subha, you have us travelling everywhere, and we love you for it! 😃

I'm so glad Jaidev's finally living now; his dreams, his hopes - love, love, love! #brotherhoodforthewin

You know the character graphs you've etched here for everyone's got just the right pacing! A multi-cast story usually lends itself to chaos but you've everything tied just right!

Their banter in the car, and Madhu being all kinds of naughty - hey I think love's playful like that, a little bit of roothna, chidhana, manana, is all part of the game! hehe

The group's clever though - much like Sayali, deliberate exits or otherwise ;) And ah, we've the two alone, sigh. ☺️

I just LOVED that adjusting of the covers, the derailed but smexy thoughts! This heartwarming stuff is what romance is made of! Siddhant-Madhu are love!
Edited by natashu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
Chapter 17 B)

Many thanks for the pictures for this update - really pulled in the visuals for this chapter!

Loved the set-up here - the way you eased us in as we strapped ourselves in for the fort - a sight indeed! I've been to Rajasthan before as a young child, but we didn't visit this place! All that matters now is that I got to see it through your writing, which's such a pleasure!

Man, Jaidev's chosen the perfect place for the visualization of his song and with Siddhant the filmmaker in tow, what could go wrong? 😃

Alrighty - everyone's ready to go for the day *flips out my own set of binoculars and shades* 😎

Oh my, the Badal Mahal! Such beauty! Gave me similar feels from when I visited Whistler in Vacouver, BC - such panoramic views!

Ella-Michael sound cute! Reminded me of how we start talking to people waiting in line for a ride (which can be quite long at certain amusement/theme parks), and you hit it off!

That bit with the false alarm though 😆 Yep, we've all done it to someone ;)

Ooo the bright and clear sky - the weather be conspiring too! Glad Madhu was able to show Jaidev that which mattered. Siddhant cutely observing it all was the icing on the cake!

Laddoo - may I hug her tight? She's such a warm fuzzy ball! 😳

They be snugglin', I be singin' jiya dhadak dhadak jaye ☺️
Edited by natashu - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
HIII!!! I know I am late!! Sorry
So, hmmm the first part of the chapter just made me go numb, but then as I went through the conversation of these two brothers I melted down in ease. I love the way Vaibhav thinks about the company, and at the same time feel bad for what he feels. Jai now come on I love this personality of yours. Love for music is important and not the trendy disco types. I am actually the same way!!! 😃 Even though I do not write songs that is the thing I go by!!
Coming to our Mr. Siddhu and Madhu talks
Their phone call though ahh pure bliss. Their little tiny nok jhoks are just too cute to resist. I WANT MORE
I am so glad Merlyn is trying to make Siddhant understand to propose. Cause she said he has to, and cause I said he can. So, what was that she is talking about his past? I want to know more about it. WHy is he so scared to take the first step??
Poor Sayali I have pity on her. SIDDHANT JUST STOP CALLING HER FOR NOW!!
CLIFFHANGER!!
God?? Where is this girl at??
Subha,
This is so intriguing loving this.
How amazing of an writer you are.
your words a pure beauty.
Keep Writing
Update very very soon
Love You
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: poetic

Ch 20A

I like the way the relationship of Sid and Madhu is panning out. In fact, I love it. There is so much of openness and honesty from Madhu's side that it affects me at some level. How much love the girl has for Sid!
He loves her with his heart, there are not two doubts about it, but what is it that is holding him back? Especially when he is no stranger to how Madhu feels about him, and how she dreams of their future ahead.

Ha ha ha - that comment about her molesting him in his sleep was funny. Poor Sid! Seems he has really not planned to the T. But what is life with all the perfect plannings, if they don't create happy memories? The Nest sounds amazing, would be nice to visit some place like that.

And then his surprise. Details and photos about his visit to Sariska. Madhu is right. Love doesn't need words at all. You come to know who loves you and who does not.

And then that moment ... heavenly!

So glad that Madhu tells Sid exactly how she is involved in everything that's happening, and that he doesn't need to feel bad about anything.

Those woollen wings are indeed blessed

...

Ch 20 B

The banter over breakfast is so cute and heartwarming. Sid is the practical guy, while Madhu is filled with oodles of positivity. They are au naturel.

Sid is right, he already has the best of everything.

Am glad that Sid is now thinking of their beautiful forever ... together. That saree seems ethereal.

These visits are such nice ways of knowing each other better. Am enjoying them so much.

The proposed meeting with his future In-Laws and Sid's comments cracked me up. Madhu sure is one crazy girl.

Glad that Sid could meet Santa. he is right. A grandmother's hug ... nothing compares to it.

The cousins sleepover is the best thing happening right now. And LoverBoy is at his Friends place, dreaming.

Lovely updates Subha. And so much love.

Thank you.😊



Love you too Rachna! A lot.
Your comments mean a lot. I'm not in good health these days, unable to be frequent on IF. I'm sleeping mostly and whenever I wake up I'm caught up with personal things. There's too much to read. But I promise to make up. For my own sake!

Siddhant is the practical guy and Madhu is the positive one! That's how they complement each other. Love you for projecting this. I'm glad I did not have to explicitly write that!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: PriyaSweety-Anu

Thanks for PM,Dear.😊

Thanks for two Parts.😊
It was Amazing Update.😊
Siddharth and Madhu Moments were so Beautifully explained.😳
Sidharth and Madhu Close moments were so Interesting.😊
Madhu felt embarrassed for her actions but Siddharth reply was so Nice.😊
But Why Siddharth said may be they will marry?😕
The way Madhu prepared Breakfast for Siddharth bu heating it was so Interesting.😆
Madhu Parents Part was so Nice.😊
The way Madhu family members teasing her and their bonding with her was so Nice.😊
The Story is getting so Interesting.😊
Please continue soon.😊
PriyaSweety-Anu



Thank you so much dear!
You have a heart of gold. Reading every bit of the story and mentioning it, making every writer here happy! It's not easy.

Love you!
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: aaradhaya1688

<font color="#990066">Awesome update subha ji</font>

<font color="#990066">Loveddd it</font>
<font color="#990066">That was an awesome surprise from sid to maddhu</font>
<font color="#990066">I really want to know whats holding him back</font>
<font color="#990066">The family lunch and meet was cool too</font>
<font color="#990066">thanks a tonn for d pm</font>
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Thanks Aaradhya!
Thanks for patiently traveling along. Next chapter will answer all questions. Almost done writing. :)
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyj7

UNRESERVED:)

Part 20 A
These both are just so cute!!!
When she asked are we going to sleep on the street. He should have totally answered with of course where else would we sleep🤣
Yes, one lazy couch like me #lazycouchsquad😆
Coffee, and that too hot coffee *turns and calls out to her mom "give me coffee plz right now"*
Madhu I am with ya. I have always wanted to see these views in real life. I really don't know when I am going to go🤔
But anyways, I am so glad Sid went just for HER.
Oh, and the moment!😳❤️It was to intense to resist ahhh!
Aww, thinking about the first night. When are y'all having the first night??
Yasss need to make the breakfasts!!!

Part 20 B
Really?? Nah why would I make breakfast told ya #lazycouchsquad😆. Poor Sid dreaming about her making breakfast.
I wanna play with the dogs tooo!!😎
I am so excited for Jai's song too. I know it is going to touch heights.
The temple.I volunteer to see the intricate design and sculptures of the temple
He is one of my old colleagues, and then he is expected to know Harshit.
Oh God! Grandmother hugs yayyy🤗
When Medha caught that Sid was her girlfriend I was like👏👏NICE JOB!!
Where is Harshit??😡You told me he is going to be in full swing.
Subha,
Amazing writing
Your updates make me go
Keep Writing.
Can't wait for the next one



Tu US chodke waapas aa!
We'll see all the states! :D

Don't get inspired by Madhu and decide not to cook. Hunger is a grave issue. Everyone needs to know to cook! :D Siddhant might make her cook in future :P

Chui Mui is thinking of first night, but we all know very well that the fellow can ONLY THINK of all that!l now. He can't even get himself to kiss her!:P

Every single moment you've highlighted. How can I not love you? 😳

Thank you darling 😳
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Posted: 7 years ago

Originally posted by: elle..

Ok..i scratch my head everytime i see siddhu's resistance
To thode dimaag k ghode dodaye..wat could be the reason..some of my wild guesses below

1.he is impotent 🤪
2.he has some life threatening condition 😕
3.he is a widower/divorcee
4.he wants to settle aborad 🤡
5.he is secretly gay..i hope not lol
6.his connections with underworld 🤣

Or he is just being an a**



Sorry for being so late!

You had me laughing like crazy for 5 mins straight. What a comment! 😆
I am a very unromantic, crazy and sarcastic person in real life. I might even get inspired by your comment or write on of these as Siddhants reasons. Hehehe!!

Underworld. ROFL! 😆

You're too good! I've saved a screenshot of this comment!! 😆
Thanks for reading!

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