'Cause You Said I Can!' : PrAnushka SS: Update- Part 24 |Pg 72 |Nov 03 - Page 48

Originally posted by: Tejamanaswini

Hello di. I know it's been real long that I ever commented on ur story but trust me it is precious and I don't want it to get over. So I wait till u update couple of chapters so that I can read everything in a go.😆just read everything and I can't get over the fact that they are alone in house and just ended up sleeping😕. Hahaha but all I can say is this is turning out to be beautiful and everlasting. I like the way he is called 'touch me not' it gives different essence to the story, a beautiful one though! And yup at the end all the love goes for fearless character Madhu, she is one woman I want to meet -if ever existed- and have fun talking about siddu. I'm glad that she doesn't want to bottle up her feelings for him, she is on point and I love that. Today I want to take a moment to appreciate how beautifully u write, I love ur one liners, those who have deep meanings and they so fascinating to hear. And how beautifully u weave a story. Please keep writing more. Please get going with next chapter because I can't wait. What happened to my fearless Madhu? I'm waiting. I still can't explain how much I love ur story. Happy writing and stay healthy and also keep smiling.😃

I'm so sorry for late reply Teju!
This comment came as a surprise and read it twice! Made me feel soo happy!
So encouraging and promising. Hope I'll get to see you more often here!

Story is kinda nearing its end, I'm trying to give it a convincing and satisfying conclusion.
Thank you so so so much! I'll be reading the comment again! 😊

Originally posted by: cosmosandme

You managed to get me here finally with your wonderful writing. Hehe. Sorry for not commenting for so long. For your kind information I had been reading and liking the chapters all along like a stalker, but I owe you a comment for this one, since I truly had a good time reading it.

The ending is chilling. With our madhu missing, siddhu is turning edgy and riled up. From his gentlemanly behavior to not minding his words was pure delight read ! 😆 Madhu has done good damage to chui mui. Nonetheless with even sayali not aware and clueless about madhu is alarming.
This incident is an indication for him to get married. So next time this happens he can at least call at her home fearlessly. 😉

I loved merlyn- siddhu conversation. Both are very clear to each other. No space for misunderstandings, which is what ensures their wonderful friendship.

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#660099">" Asking me? Fine,get her some fruit flavored lip balm.. So that your kisses would taste better! "</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#000066">" When did all the women in the world become so shameless? "</font></font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#660099">" When all the men in the world decided to become Chui- Mui! "

🤣🤣

<font color="#000000">Jai finally got his due success from the person gone through similar grief. But probably he can save Jai from treading on same path.

Finally what is keeping me on the edge of my seat is the missing madhumita ! The secret of siddhu's control and their first lip balm kiss ! ☺️

Keep it up my madhumati, can't wait to read the next chapter </font>🤗

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Tu Mar Jaaa! 😡 But I can't live without you also!

I don't like being nice to you, but this comment is really really special to me!
Lip Balm Kiss! I like that one!

I hate you Mehtab! A lot! But I'm not letting you go! 🤢

Originally posted by: natashu

Chapter 17 B)

Many thanks for the pictures for this update - really pulled in the visuals for this chapter!

Loved the set-up here - the way you eased us in as we strapped ourselves in for the fort - a sight indeed! I've been to Rajasthan before as a young child, but we didn't visit this place! All that matters now is that I got to see it through your writing, which's such a pleasure!

Man, Jaidev's chosen the perfect place for the visualization of his song and with Siddhant the filmmaker in tow, what could go wrong?😃

Alrighty - everyone's ready to go for the day *flips out my own set of binoculars and shades*😎

Oh my, the Badal Mahal! Such beauty! Gave me similar feels from when I visited Whistler in Vacouver, BC - such panoramic views!

Ella-Michael sound cute! Reminded me of how we start talking to people waiting in line for a ride (which can be quite long at certain amusement/theme parks), and you hit it off!

That bit with the false alarm though😆Yep, we've all done it to someone ;)

Ooo the bright and clear sky - the weather be conspiring too! Glad Madhu was able to show Jaidev that which mattered. Siddhant cutely observing it all was the icing on the cake!

Laddoo - may I hug her tight? She's such a warm fuzzy ball!😳

They be snugglin', I be singin' jiya dhadak dhadak jaye☺️

Tashu! <3

This is one of my fav chapters! The reason being Kumbalgarh. Wonderful place, try visiting someday if possible!
The place you mentioned makes me curious now. Hope I'll get to visit Canada someday!

Yes.. Travelling makes you break out of all linguistic or racial barriers. I myslef have met many lovely people on trips!

Thank you for making me relive this chapter again, by reviewing each and every part of it!
Love you!

Originally posted by: shreyj7

HIII!!! I know I am late!! Sorry

So, hmmm the first part of the chapter just made me go numb, but then as I went through the conversation of these two brothers I melted down in ease. I love the way Vaibhav thinks about the company, and at the same time feel bad for what he feels. Jai now come on I love this personality of yours. Love for music is important and not the trendy disco types. I am actually the same way!!!😃Even though I do not write songs that is the thing I go by!!

Coming to our Mr. Siddhu and Madhu talks

Their phone call though ahh pure bliss. Their little tiny nok jhoks are just too cute to resist. I WANT MORE
I am so glad Merlyn is trying to make Siddhant understand to propose. Cause she said he has to, and cause I said he can. So, what was that she is talking about his past? I want to know more about it. WHy is he so scared to take the first step??

Poor Sayali I have pity on her. SIDDHANT JUST STOP CALLING HER FOR NOW!!

CLIFFHANGER!!

God?? Where is this girl at??

Subha,

This is so intriguing loving this.

How amazing of an writer you are.

your words a pure beauty.

Keep Writing

Update very very soon

Love You

This is one characteristic of new love. People keep calling desperately! 😆
Love you! 😳

Aww... Such a fresh update. You took us to the era I love. The era of subtle romance. The highlight of the chapter was undoubtedly johnson and shailaja's love story. I forgot sid and fell for johnson. I wish to read more about him, like how he pulled himself together and how his life changed after the heart wrenching incident. No wonder sid maintained distance from madhu. Such history leaves deep impact. But fate is repeating the history now. Eagerly waiting to know johnson's stand on sid and madhu's relation. I know having gone through this hell he wouldn't encourage such things again. It's sad indeed in India love comes with a price for many. I myself have known many such cases. You beautifully reminded the same thing. But love is boring without challenges, so all obstacles are welcome. 😉

Sid's lady love had sedatives and was in the room !!! I think every person should have a sane and calm friend like harshit. He is a gem in all respects.

It's going to be really interesting from here onwards to see how things move forward. I am gonna sit back and enjoy the wonders you write, Lots of love marhaba 🤗

Update soon 😳

Fantastic updates Subha👏

Originally posted by: sonalisharma1

This update makes me cryyy . . .

But it's a harsh reality of the society .

Update the next part soon. . .

😭 Yasss!

Originally posted by: poetic

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">🤗Subha for updating. I can very well understand how things are at your end. Health is a serious issue and you need to take care of yourself. Everything else could literally wait.
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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Inspite of everything, you have updated and we can't thank you enough.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Coming back to the update, I am so happy that Madhu is inside the room. She really had got everybody worried, and rightfully so. As I had thought, Harshit is the coolest of them all. Madhu is actually very lucky to have friends like Harshit, Sayali and everybody else. And of course Sid the Moddhu.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Oh Madhu! Sedative overdose. I so want to know what happened b/w your Appa and you. But I should mention that I loved how Sid understood her. This is what love is all about. Understanding and trust.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I seriously love these Moddhus now!</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I was expecting this from Sr Ramanathan alright, but I didn't expect him to bring the guy alongwith. Am glad that Madhu told them the truth. Telling lies never helps.</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">So Madhu is ready for the plunge with Sid, but maybe, just maybe we will come to know what's holding Siddhu back.</font>

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<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">EkambareswararTemple!</font>

<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">How it has tied the parents and the son together. This romance between Physics and Economics is really enticing. But yes, may not have been easy at all.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And as expected, the two of them did not get the love and support of Shailaja's family, except for her Mother's. What a beautiful bonding that must have been, b/w Shailaja and her Mom! Priceless.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And Siddhu waiting eagerly for his sibling and Grandmom!</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">And then the accident! Life is so damn unpredictable! And its unfair mostly.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I can only think of the devastation since both Shailaja's Mother and the unborn child were lost forever.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I think I can't even tell you how I feel about Shailaja right now. And of course, Johnson. A moment, and their entire life had turned topsy turvy. Too much of loss to process at one time.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Now I understand why Sid told Madhu about his Father not accepting their relationship.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">Note: My comments are mainly based on the story updates. But there is some realisationhappening parallely which I am not being able to put down, in a proper way. Maybe sometime soon, that would happen.</font>

<font color="#333333" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="2">I am glad you wrote this chapter Subha. This is how life happens and it makes Sid and Madhu's journey all the more relatable.</font>

You've no idea how rewarding to me your comments are! A comment with your feelings and interpretations on each of the sub parts. What more can I ask for? I'm very indebted to you!

I totally under the parallel realisation part. Happens to me when I am a reader too! Somethings are better unexpeessed! :)

Love you Rachna!

This one beautiful chapter of the story explains every hold Siddhant had on his confession. Because not all love marriages are fairy tales. And when love turns to be blamed for death, it's even worse.

Wow what an update subha...

You did an awesome job dear... 👏

Now we all know the reason behind siddhu's hesitation.. after all he had all reasons to fear about his prospective relationship with Madhu..

Loved the way sayali and harshit handled the whole situation.

Go with the flow dear... there should be ups and downs... this is not a tragedy dear. Life does bring something hard on all of us.. but family does to stick together to overcome those pitfalls like Johnson and shailaja's true love.

Great going... keep updating love to read them...

Thank u so much for the pm and the update dear. 🤗