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Sana

@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

Part 8...

Rajbeer sings Happy Birthday on the phone. Preeto says thanx.
Preeto- Hmmm, mera present kaha hai.
Rajbeer- kud a ke lilo.
Preeto- kise phone pe?
Rajbeer- Phone pe nahi, tumhare ghar ke bahar se.
Preeto was happy to know that Rajbeer was just outside the house. She ran outside to find Rajbeer and he was right in front of her.
Rajbeer- tumhe sab se pehle wish karna chahata tha.
Preeto blushed at that. Preeto toke Rajbeer to the side of the house so that no one could see them and asked mera gift? Then Rajbeer knelt down to his knees and pulled out a simple ring. Rajbeer- i know ke b-day tumhara hai lekin main tumse kuch mangne aya hoon. Kya tum apne puri zindagi is fauji ke sath betana chahaate ho? I promise, doop mein tumhara saya banoga, sirdi mein tumhare ra blanket banoga aur barish mein tumhara chata. Will u marry me?
Preeto had tears in her eyes, she knelt down in front of him, nodded and hugged him.

Preeto's Birthday...
Preeto was in her and she was about to put sindor in her mang but Riddhima stopped her.
Ridz- agse tumhe iski sazorat nahi padagi. Come on lets go.
Preeto was now in the living room. Rajbeer, All her sisters, her parents were there. They all said Happy Birthday. Nobody noticed her sindor was missing. Riddhima pulled out a huge teddy bear that she was gonna gift Preeto in front of her face. In a cute voice ridz said Happy Birthday Preeto.
Preeto- thanx Riddhima.
Bani- Di chal na mujhe aur Sonu bahar se kuch chise line hai.
Bani and Sonu take Preeto away from the house. Meanwhile at the Dhillion house, Rajbeer and Ridz r done decorations. Ishu got the cake, Jassi n Jogi arrive at the Dhillon place, Pankeeta r making food. Dhruv manages to get NA. Sunny had been outside for some important work. Then Rajbeer miss calls Bani. Bani, Sonu n Preeto come back to the house.

As soon as Preeto enter's the house, everyone yells surprise.
Ridz- Guys mere pas ek video hai jo mere dost key liye bouth important hai. Simran n Dhruv watch carefully.

Sunny had to get the video on a disc so thats y he was gone. Sunny gets a rented projector facing a plain white wall. He puts the disc in the projector.

PS there will be a contination for the eighth part. I have to go right now. Bye

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Part 8 cont...
The disc in the projector was going to change everything. Only 2 more secs till Preeto could get rid of the fake wedding forever. The disc started playing, everyone was shocked by seeing the disc. NA was shocked too. After watching the disc Preeto felt like she was a free bird in the sky.
NA- Preeto y did u do this to me?
Bani- get out of my house Nelem Ahluwalia!
Everyone was shocked by Bani behaviour.
Sonu- haan, agar Preeto di ne mujhe kasam nahi di hoti apna mo band rakhne ke liye to phir maine yeh bohauth pehle kardiya hota.
Bani- Ishu di, agar ap chahate hain ke humare bhitch koi bhi rishta rahey to phir is orat koi bholo yaha se chalejai.
Dhruv- mom ur disgusting. Ap ko Ishu itni napasand hai.
Simmi- ap ko kya laja mom ap kisi aur ki beti ki khushiyan use chorakey mujhe dine se mujhe kushi milengi. Rajbeer pe sirf aur sirf Preeto ka hak hai. I'm ashamed to call u my mom.
Dhruv- u know what, mujhe nahi rehna us ghar mein. Ishu, mein jald se jald ek naya ghar dhond longa. Rent pe he sahi lekin hum us ghar mein nahi raheingay.
NA is crying about to leave, but Ishu stopps her.
Ishu- apne meri bhahin ko ko hurt kiya. Bas isi liye kyunki woh Rajbeer se pyar karti hain. Ap ko ek maa kehte hoi mujhe shram ati hai.
NA leaves the house.
Dhruv- Rajbeer, Preeto mujhe maf kardo. Mere waya se tumhare zindagi barbad ho ne ja rahi thi. I'm sorry.
Rajbeer- Dhruv it wasnt your fault.
Preeto nodds to that.
And then the party continues. Preeto cuts the chocolate cake then feeds everyone.
When Dhrishu, Jogi jassi, simmi n ridz left. Bj n papaji called Sunny and Rajbeer.

Promo: no promo

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#53

Part 9... Flashback: NA truth is out.

Current:

Bj n papaji call sunny n rajbeer.

Bj- rab tumhare bhalla kare.

Papaji- Sunny, rajbeer puttar. Tum duno ne jo humare liye kiye hai na woh toh kyu apna bhi nahi kiya. Rajbeer tune humesa mere madat ki bina kuch mange.

Rajbeer- Nahi papaji. Maine apki nahi kud ki madat ki hai.

Pankaj- Sunny veerji. Ap ab mere ghar mein rahen gaye.

Sunny nodds.

Rajbeer- Bj, papaji aj mein ap se kuch mangna chahata hoon.

Bj- Kya puttar,

Rajbeer- woh actually mein apki beti se shadi karna chahata hoon. Main Preeto se bahut pyar karta hun.

Papaji- mujhe toh koi itras nahi hain.

Bj- mujhe bhi. Bus Preeto ki rasamandi chaiye.

Papaji- Preeto. Kya tu rajbeer se shadi karna chaiyegi?

Preeto looks at her parents and then shly nodds.

Everyone is happy with that decision.

Sonu- Ab mein apko jiju bola shakti hoon.

Bj- mein Ishu ko phone karke bhatati hun.

Dhruv, ishu n simmi are driving. Then ishu's phone rings and she picks it up.

Ishu- hello

Bj- hello, sello baad mein karna. Abhi wapas ghar ao.

Ishu- Dhruv, Bj wapas ghar bola rahe hain.

Dhruv- kyu?

Ishu- kya Bj?

Bj- woh rajbeer aur preeto ka rishta tai hogaye hai.

Ishu- Kiya?

Simmi- kiya hua bhabi

Ishu- woh Rajbeer aur Preeto ka rishta tai hogaye hai.

Simmi- WOW! seriously, i'm so happy for them

Dhruv- hume methai leke jaane chaiye.

Simmi- ya, that'd be great.

Dhruv, Ishu and Simmi come to the Dhillon house with sweets.

Dhruv- congrats Rajbeer. But be careful, jise tumhare shadi hone wali hain na woh pehli se mere saali shabeha hain.

Rajbeer- Of course yaar.

Simmi- i'm so happy. Ab hum relatives hogaye.

Rajbeer- maine bhi nahi socha tha ki, ek posting ki wajase hume relatives banegaye.

Ishu- lekin meri behen ka kiyal rakna.

Rajbeer- of course rakhonga.

Meeta- rajbeer mujhe woh din yaad hain. Preeto pada hui thi aur maine use jab apne haatho mein liye tha na. Tab isne muskurana suru kiya tha. Doctors ne heran ho ki bola ek din ki ladki kise muskura sakti hain. Toh mein kaha ki yeh mere bhehen hain. Poore zindagi muskuraigi. Lekin bouth dard mila ise. Kya tum mere bhehen ko zindagi bar khush rakhogay.

Rajbeer- Poori zindagi khush rakhonga.

Everyone was extra happy that day. Especially Preeto cuz it was her birthday, her sister's life was safe and her family approved her rishta with Rajbeer.

While at the Dhillon place there was happiness, at the Ahluwalia house were wasn't any happiness at all. Dhruv, Ishu and Simmi came back to the Ahluwalia house. They were happy and NA saw that.

NA- beta ap itne khush kyu ho?

Their smiles faded.

Simmi- stop it mom. I don't think hum tino mein se kise ko ap se baat karne hai.

NA- but Simmi, i'm your mother. Tumhare khushi ki waja jane ka haak hain mujhe.

Dhruv- you are not our mother. Kise maa ho ap, kise aur maa ki beti ki khushi choora ki apne beti ko di. You're a disgrace to mother kind.

NA- dhurv please forgive me.

Simmi- no mom. Ap maafi ke layak hi nahi hoon. Agar ap Preeto ko sirf Rajbeer se dor jaane ke liye kaha hota. Then i might of forgiven u. Lekin apne ek bhehin ko apne bhehin ki shadi aur apne shadi mein choose karne ke liye kaha.

NA- galti haar kise se hoti hain.

Simmi- what ever mom. I dont want to talk to u. Bhai ap move out hone wale hoona. Can I live with u two.

Ishu- of course Simran.

Dhruv nodds. Then Simmi goes to her room and dhruv n ishu go to their room. NA is left in the living room all by herself.

NA- Preeto tumne mere beti aur bete ko mujhe alag kiya hai. I will not spare u. Main tumhe nahi choudongi.

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Saina

@--Saina--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

Hey, Nice story ... just caught up with all the parts

Nice work !! so Finally Rajpreet ka Rishta pakka

🥳

and NA ko Vaat lagaa daala

Ye sab show mein kab hoga😔

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

NA still going to try to stop RajPreet wedding. But how. That u'll have tO wait for.

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Saina

@--Saina--

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#56

NA ko jo karna hai karne do jab tak Rajpreet saath mein hai I am happy 😃

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

Part 10... will be there tom.

I just wondered. do u guys want more Rajpreet scenes.

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Never mind. I've got time. The part will be uploaded by tonight.

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#59

Part 10 ...

Morning at Ahluwalia house

NA at the dinning table, Drishu and simmi come.

NA- beta maine ap sab ke favourite dishes ready ki hai.

Dhruv- no thanx

Simmi- Bhabhi ap mere liye please cereal lieye.

Ishu- sure Simran

Dhruv- Ishu jaldi karna, hume hamare naya ghar dhoondne jana hai.

Ishu- bas 5 min

After Ishu left for kitchen.

Simmi- NA u asked y we were happy right. Hum khush isiliye the kyunki Rajbeer aur Preeto ki shadi honewali hai.

Ishu brings breakfast and the three of them leave for house searching. NA is left alone.

Dhillon house...

Everyone is there. Including Ridz, rajbeer and sunny.

Meeta- Bj main soch rahe thi ke Preeto aur Rajbeer ka roka mere Sangeet par rakdete hain. Use time, aur paisa bachega.

Everyone agrees.

Papaji comes- Rajbeer aur Preeto ki shadi ki tarek 20 din bad hai.

Everyone is extra happy.

Pankeeta Sangeet and RajPreet roka...

Dhrishu, and Simmi have found a new house to live in and have moved there too. 15 days till Rajpreet wedding.

At first Pankeeta Sangeet takes place. Meeta dressed in a pink lehnga. Preeto wears a orange suit, Ridz wears a white n golden suit. Ishu wears a pink sari, Simmi wear a red suit. Dhruv wears a green kurta, Rajbeer wears a patani and Sunny wears a light brown shearwani. Pankaj wears a cream shearwani. RajPreet, Dhrishu and Ridz Sunny dance on Bole Chudiya and Suno ek thi.

PS- i know the Sangeet wasn't that descriptive but, i promise the roka is going to be descriptice.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago