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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
Wonderfully written...brought tears to my eyes as we will never see this on the show. Thanks for making us feel a little better during this sad time.
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 20...
Dhillon house...
Preeto was all ready for her wedding. Her phone started ringing and before she could pick up the phone, Bani toke the phone away from her. She read the number, it was Rajbeer.
Rajbeer- hello
Bani- hello jiju, agar pane mere aur mere di ke quality time ke jo kuch gante hai usme intrupt kiya na toh phir accha nahi hoga. Phir meine na daheg mein agana hai di ke saath. Come on Jiju sirf 2-3 gante hi toh. Kyunse 2-3 saal hai. Fir toh di se milne ke liye ap ke permission ki sarorat padegi.
Rajbeer- tumhe Preeto se milne ki permission nahi leni padegi. After mere saali ho, yeh tumhara right hain.
Bani- see isiliye ap mere favourite jiju ho. Man of the house ho ke bhi apne saali ko palko pe bethaogay.
Rajbeer- tumhare behen kaha hai.
Bani- thank u for reminding me. Apne mujhe distract kiya tha aur ab bye.
Rajbeer- bye take care
Bani- i will
Then disconnects the phone.
Gurudwara...
Rajbeer was dressed in a golden sherwani, and then Jogi was doing all of the rituals that a brother has to do. After the wedding was over everyone went to the Dhillon house. Ridz and Simran stole Rajbeer's shoes and then Rajbeer ended up paying 2000 rupees to them.
(I know i'm going little fast but I just wanted to get to RajPreet Suhagrat)
RajPreet Suhaagrat...
Simran led Preeto to Rajbeer room and then Dhruv pushed Rajbeer towards Preeto. Simmi closed the door behind them and then Rajbeer went up to the door and then locked it. He went towards Preeto with a devilish smile. Preeto knew that today Rajbeer wasn't going to listen to any of her excuses. So she didn't knew bother. Rajbeer lifted Preeto in his arms and Preeto had wrapped her arms around Rajbeer's neck. They were in a eye lock and then Rajbeer started walking towards their bed. Then he gently placed Preeto on the bed, he kneelt down and then touched her feet. He held her feet to remove her payal, and then he kissed her feet. Preeto started blushing and Rajbeer knew that. He got up and then sat beside Preeto. He removed her necklace and then kissed her neck. Preeto closed her eyes. He then got to her earrings and then kissed her ears. Soon he began kissing Preeto on the places that had jewellery before removing it. He was finally done removing her jewellery and then leaned forwards to kiss her lips. Soon their lips met. Rajbeer was at first giving her a gentle kiss again and then again made the kiss harder. Unexpectedly he decided to bit her lower lip. Preeto pushed Rajbeer away from her.
Preeto- Rajbeer?
Rajbeer- u know meine bhaut sweets kahe hai lekin tumhare lips un bas se ziyada sweet the. Issi kahlia.
Preeto was now mad at Rajbeer. She got up from the bed and then walked over to the dresser. Rajbeer realized that she was angry at him so he followed her. Rajbeer wrapped his arms around her waist and then rested his head on her shoulder.
Rajbeer- Sorry Preeto, please mujhe maaf kardo
Preeto- nahi
Rajbeer- nahi, toh phir tumhe kui itras nahi hoga aur phir mein apne sherwani uttar sakta ho.
Rajbeer started unbottoning his sherwani and then took it off. He then went back to flirting with Preeto.
Rajbeer- accha toh phir at least juza ho ke chela do
Preeto still didn't answer.
Rajbeer- toh ab mein jo bhi karonga uske waja se tum mujhe roka gi nahi.
He again kissed her neck, he knew that she was leaving her anger. Then he noticed that her back was covered with only 3 doris. He moved her hair sideways then started playing with the doris with his fingers on her back. Rajbeer bent down and then opened the middle dori with his teeth. After opening the dori, he kissed her back. Preeto closed her eyes and had a tight grip of her lehenga.
Rajbeer saw that and he got up again.
Rajbeer again placed his head on Preeto's shoulders
Rajbeer in a cute voice- sorry kaha na. Aga tum mujhe kise chis ke liye rok ti nahi na toh phir mujhe itna mazaa nahi ata. I'm sorry baba, I love to death.
Preeto had a little smile on her face.
Preeto- its okay. Lekin mein abhi bhi apse jussa ho
Rajbeer- accha.
Preeto nodded. He started tickling her stomache.
Rajbeer- yaha pe jussa ho, yaha pe.
Preeto started laughing and then said- Okay baba, Jussa nahi ho. Please Rajbeer ruko na.
Rajbeer- nahi.
Preeto who was stilling laughing- please warna, warna... mein maar jaongi.
Rajbeer stopped and then turned her around so they were face to face.
Rajbeer- tum mujhe chod ke nahi ja sakti. Ab toh shaadi ka permit bhi hai.
Preeto blushed and then turned around. Rajbeer from behind lifted her hands and then removed all the bangles and then kissed them. He then carried Preeto in his arms and placed her on the bed. Preeto was lying on the bed and Rajbeer was on top of her. He was gonna burrying his head in her neck but she intruppted.
Preeto- Rajbeer, woh daarwasa toh band hain na.
Rajbeer- ha Preeto
Rajbeer was gonna burrying his head in her neck and then stopped.
Rajbeer- Preeto, abhi tumhe jo bhi karna hai yeh bol na hain woh kardo. Kyunki phir tumhe mouka nahi milega.
Preeto didn't say anything. Rajbeer was gonna burry again but Preeto intruppted.
Preeto- Rajbeer ruko.
Rajbeer with a cute angry face- ab kya hain.
Preeto- woh mujhe kehna tha ke. Main apse bhaut pyaar karti ho. Itna sacha aur zayada pyaar meine khabi kise se nahi kiya.
Rajbeer- ha, ab yeh baat karne ke liye mein tumhe khabi nahi rukonga. Aur meine tumhare sewaiye kise pyaar hi nahi kiya. Mujhe koi issa nahi mile jiske liye apne jaan ek second mein deydo. Kyunki mere jaan toh ab tum ho. Ab agar tumhe itras na ho toh mein apni biwi ke saath apne suhaagrat manao.
Preeto smilied and then Rajbeer burried his head in her neck.
Next Morning...
Sunrays woke Preeto, she woke up see a shirtless Rajbeer sleeping beside her. A sweet memory of last night came rushing to her and then she got back to reality. She got and took a shower, she came back and saw Rajbeer still sleeping.
Preeto- Rajbeer, uto.
Rajbeer opened his eyes to see the most beautiful view in the world. Rajbeer- tumhe nahi lagta ke kal raat bhaut choti thi. Chalo phir se sojate hain.
After saying that he pulled Preeto on the bed with him.
Preeto- Rajbeer kya kar rahe ho
Rajbeer- kyu nahi dekhe ga. Yeh humare ghar hai aur phir ek pati ko apne biwi se pyaar karne ke liye kise aur ki permission ke zarout nahi hai.
Preeto- okay Rajbeer lekin sirf 10 minute.
Rajbeer- 10 minute bhaut kam hai.
He pulled the blanket over Preeto and himself and then they had made love.
THE END!!
how was it, if anyone feels that they can continue the story then I don't mind.
Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83

wow thank you sooo much, the last part was fun & exciting, what a ending hope we could have lived it on tv. You have a wonderful ability to make imagination come alive...thank you for entertaining us..loved it...patiently waiting for your other story line update. 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
Guys i'm going to write more of this story line.
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85

RajPreet had been under the blanket for 5 minutes then Preeto ditched Rajbeer. She got off the bed and started to escape but Rajbeer held her hand. Rajbeer got up and twisted her hand- mujse bhaaj ne ki koshish

Preeto- Rajbeer plz choudo
Rajbeer- nahi
Preeto- Rajbeer plz dard ho raha hai
Rajbeer- itni zoor se kaha pakda hai. Aur agar dard ho raha hai toh bhi sahi ho raha hai. Ek fauji ke saath bemani.
Preeto- im sorry mere fauji plz jaane do.
Rajbeer twisted her hand more and came closer to her- i luv u
Preeto- i hate u too.
Then laughed which made Rajbeer angry. She somehow managed to escape from Rajbeer.
Preeto ran around the bed and Rajbeer chased her. Finally Preeto sat on the bed and Rajbeer was sitting beside her. He pulled Preeto's hair and that made Preeto arch her neck. Rajbeer kissed her throat and then her chin, cheeks, closed eyes. He realized his grip on her hair and went closer to kiss her lips. They fell backwards, Preeto on the bed and Rajbeer on top of her. Preeto's dupatta was on her face which was blocking Rajbeer from seeing her face. He left the dupatta on her face and kissed her forehead and the feathery kiss on the lips. Then he removed the dupatta from her face and gave her a passionate kiss on the lips.
Should I continue?
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
Yes please Sana. Do continue your FF are awesome and full of passion. Blushing ☺️ and well done.

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