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Sneha Patro

@snehapatro

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Posted: 13 years ago

#61

wowww loved it read all 10 parts at a time...😃nice twists Superbb...👏keep writing more...👍🏼

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preeto_fan

@preeto_fan

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Posted: 13 years ago

#62

yaar the period between roka and shaadi wil be a wonderful period; so make many many many many rajpreet scenes in that period, shaadi jaldi math karna

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Sana

@LoveSana

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Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Part 11...

In the evening, RajPreet Roka...

Preeto was in her room, was wearing a turquois lehenga with silver colored embrodery on it. Ishu was adding curls to her hair, bani was doing her makeup. Meeta came upstairs with a silver necklace, silver earings. Simmi made a set of turquois and silver bangles. Ishu, and Meeta helped Preeto wear her jewellery.

Simmi- wow, kitne pretty lag rahe ho.

Ridz came in her room, she was wearing a red and blue suit.

Ridz- Oh my god, u're looking so beautiful.

Preeto- tum bhi bhaut beautiful lag rahe hoon. After all mere salwali ho.

Ridz- Ya, but I was surprised when Sunny ne kaha ki woh Rajbeer ka salwala hai.

Preeto looking at Meeta, Bani, Ishu and Simmi- are, mujhe ready kara rahe ho kabse, ab kud bhi toh ready hogao.

Bj comes upstairs too. Bj- ab lagta hai ke kahan atne sari sal chalegaye. Mere Preeto ka ag roka hai. Aur woh kitne khush lag rahe hai ag.

Sonu hurry in Preeto's room and say- Jaldi karo, Rajbeer Jiju a gaye hai.

Everyone starts laughing.

Rajbeer was wearing a dark brown serwani. Sunny was wearing a orange kurta, Dhruv wearing blue kurta, and Pankaj was wearing a green kurta. Bj wearing a red dress welcomes Rajbeer in the house with Papaji. Mamij and Mamaji are also there.

Upstairs in Preeto's room, Simran wore a purple sari. Meeta wore a blue dress, Ishu wore a golden colored sari, and Bani wore a pink dress.

Bj comes and says- Chalo, Preeto ko nike lao. Saying that she leaves.

Preeto comes downstairs with Ridz by her side. Rajbeer sees Preeto coming and couldn't take his eyes off her. (Their tune starts playing)

Jogi- Kya dekh rahe hoon mere dost.

Rajbeer- Jogi tum, Jassi kahan hai?

Jassi- main yaha hon.

By that time Preeto is downstairs and Ridz makes her sit beside Rajbeer.

Roka starts...

Mamaji- Ab sab suno Rajbeer ke maa baap hone ki rasam hum karengay.

Mamaji pulls out a box from his pocket, takes out a golden ring and hands it over to Rajbeer. Rajbeer takes Preeto's hand and slides the ring in her finger. Papaji pulls out a box and gives Preeto a ring. Preeto slides the ring in Rajbeer's finger.

Everyone starts enjoying and celebrating.

Mamiji- Rajbeer beta, tu sun. Yeh na mere bhateji hain. Ab ise kush rakna warna. Teri maa hun mein. Mere bahu ko pareshan mat karna.

Mamaji- Oye, jab mein Pankaj ko keh raha tha toh mujhe rok diya. Ab mere Rajbeer puttar kyun suna rahi hain.

Mamiji- Chudo

Ridz and Sunny were alone in a corner.

Sunny- woh Riddhima. Salwar Kamez kubsorat lag rahe ho.

Ridz- Kyun, jeans aur t-shirt mein achi nahi lagte.

Sunny- nahi asi baat nahi hai woh bas ag zada kubsorat lag rahe ho

Ridz- thanx waise tum bhi kurte mein achi lagte hon

Sunny- kyun waise jeans aur t-shirt mein accha nahi lagta.

Ridz and Sunny start laughing.

At night, after the Roka ended.

Preeto was in her room, in her bed. She had her hands wrapped around a teddy bear that was gifted by Ridz and was reading a book.

At the force camp, Rajbeer was on his bed. He pictured Preeto at their Roka. He suddenly got an idea of texting her.

Preeto was reading and her phone beeped.

R-'Ag bhaut beautiful lag rahe thi.'

P-'Thanx, ab mujhe distrub mat karo'

R-'Kyun'

P-'kyunki mein ek book padrahe hun'

R-'Mujhse zeyada tumhe book pyari hain? Book ko nike rako aur mujse baat karo'

Before Preeto could text back her phone rang. It was Rajbeer, she decided to ignore it. She went back to reading her book. Her phone rang again and she ignored it. Read again and her phone rang again. This time she picked it up.

Preeto- Agar koi baar baar phone ignore karaha hai toh iska matlab ke woh baat nahi karna chahata. Mujhe disturb mat karo mujhe read karna hai.

Rajbeer- Tum baat mat karo lekin mere baat suno. Main chahata hun ke hum ek date par jaye.

Preeto- kya, date. Kab?

Rajbeer- Kaal

Preeto- Kyun, kya baat hai? Baade romantic mood mein ho?

Rajbeer- Romantic mood mein toh hume sa hoon lekin kise ko bola mat.

Preeto- Wow, fauji ho lekin baate toh ek shayar jise karte ho.

Rajbeer- Mujhe laga ke tumhe mujse baat nahi karne.

Preeto- Okay, Bye

Rajbeer- Nahi,nahi. Baat karo. Bus poch raha tha. Kal sham ke 6 baje boutique se date par legaonga.

Preeto- mein nahi ane wali.

Rajbeer- toh phir mein tumhe boutique a ke, Simran aur costumers ke samhe apni bahoon mein utha ke legaonga. Okay bye.

Preeto- bye

Rajbeer- suno, mujhe ek goodnight kiss toh do.

Preeto- kyun

Rajbeer- goodnight kiss...

Preeto- lekin kese

Rajbeer- ase... (he kisses the speaker on his phone)

Preeto- nahi

Rajbeer- okay, kal le loonga.

Preeto then dissconnects the phone and goes to sleep.

Rajbeer on the other side looking at Preeto's painting says- mujhe ek rent ka ghar dhoond na chahiye.

PS- please comment either its good or bad.

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preeto_fan

@preeto_fan

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

superb , rajpreet scene is so realistic and very nice.
i just love it wen sonu says rajbeer jiju; i hope to hear it on tv too soon

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

Part 12...

It is 5:55 pm and Preeto is at Simran's boutique. After she looked at the time she remember Rajbeer saying 'Mein tumhe boutique a ke Simran aur costumers ke samhe apni bahoon mein uttha ke legaonga'. For a second she thought that he was just kidding and then she relized that it was Rajbeer. He would do anything that he said to do. She turns towards Simran- Simran, mujhe ek kaam yad aya hai, agar tumhare igazad ho to mein jao.

Simran- ya sure, waise bhi 15 min boutique band karna hai. You go.

Preeto- thank you Simran.

Simran- your welcome

Preeto leaves the Boutique and finds Rajbeer waiting outside the Boutique.

Rajbeer- ab chale

Preeto sits the front seat.

Preeto- Rajbeer, kaha ja rahe hai hum.

Rajbeer- surprise.

After 30 min, Rajbeer stops the car. They came outside the car and Preeto looked around. There was a beautiful house.

Rajbeer- kaisa laga mere surprise

Preeto- yeh kunsi jaga hai.

Rajbeer- yeh woh ghar hai jaha pe hum shaadi ke baad rahengay.

Preeto- kitna pyaara hai

Rajbeer- tumhare samhe kuch nahi hai. By the way yeh maine 1 1/2 sal ke liye rent pe liya hai.

Preeto- but still, its beautiful

Rajbeer- Dhruv ne madat ki thi. Aur ab continue kare humare date.

RajPreet walked in the house. As soon as Preeto walked inside the house, Rajbeer closed the door and turned off the lights.

Preeto- Rajbeer, kahan hain ap? Please lights karo mujhe andere se dar lagta hai.

He hugged her from the back and said- mere hote hua kise bhi chise dar ne ki koi zarorat nahi hain. Rajbeer toke her hand and walked her over to their bedroom which was also dark. When they entered, Rajbeer turned on the lights. On the bed with rose petals it said 'I LUV U'. Reading that Preeto blushed. Then again Rajbeer toke her hand and they both started dancing.

After they danced, Preeto walked to Rajbeer's car and stopped. Rajbeer followed her.

Rajbeer- ek chise hai tumhare liye.

Preeto- kya

Rajbeer lifted her and placed her on car trunk. He opened the car door and got ice cream.

Rajbeer- Tumhare liye, tumhare favourite ice cream.

Preeto all excited like a 2 year old says- Give it.

RajPreet start eating their own ice cream. Rajbeer watches her eat her ice cream. Preeto notices Rajbeer looking at her. She takes a spoon of ice cream and bring close to Rajbeer's mouth. Rajbeer opens his mouth to eat the ice cream but, Preeto takes the ice cream and eats it.

Preeto- kyun, apki ice cream kahao.

Rajbeer- Woh ice cream nahi mile toh kiya hua. Yeh wali ice cream toh haina.

Preeto- 'toh kahaona.' and puts her ice cream aside.

Hearing this Rajbeer takes her hands and places them on his shoulders. His own hands are now resting on her waist. His grip is getting tighter aroung her waist, and his lips are still moving closer to her. While the lips are moving closer both RajPreet close their eyes. Preeto hands are now wrapped around Rajbeer's neck. Soon their lips touch, at first Rajbeer was gently kissing her lips. Later he kissed them a little harder and then a little more harder. Preeto tried to fight off the kiss but she couldn't. She could feel his breathe. The only thing that Preeto could do was kiss him back. She began kissing him too. Rajbeer was kissing her upper lip and Preeto was kissing his lower lip. Both were enjoying the kiss but Preeto break the kiss because she needed to breathe. She was smilling with Rajbeer's lips still touching her lips. Rajbeer starting smilling too.

Preeto's remembered the time and broke the kiss. She got off the trunk and said- Rajbeer bahaut late horaha hain. Bj pouche gi. Ab mujhe ghar jaana paadiga.

Rajbeer- thik hai, abhi toh jao lekin kuch dino baad, tum humesha ke liye mere hojaogi. Aur phir ghar jaana padiga, koi dekh lega, late horaha hai. Isse koi bhi distruptions nahi chaleingay.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

Part 13...

Rajbeer was driving Preeto back and then gets a call from Bj saying that he has to come home for dinner tonight. At a traffic signal Rajbeer- Preeto, Bj ne ghar bolaya hai.

Preeto- Thik hai lekin pehle mein ghar jaongi aur phir ap. Warna Bj ko shak hojaega.

Rajbeer looks at Preeto and says- okay

Suddenly Preeto saw pink lipstick marks on his lip.

Preeto- rajbeer, lipstick ka nishan abhi tak hai

Rajbeer- oh, tum he nikal do.

Preeto takes a tissue and cleans his lips.

RajPreet get to Dhillon house.

Preeto goes in first and then few minutes later Rajbeer goes in.

Bj- kaha the tum itne der tak

Rajbeer- woh Bj kuch kam tha.

Everyone has dinner and Rajbeer leaves.

At night, again Rajbeer calls Preeto because he was missing her.

Rajbeer- hello

Preeto- hello, itne raat ko kyu phone kiya.

Rajbeer- I was missing u too much

Preeto- really

Rajbeer- kyun, tum mujhe miss nahi karahi thi?

Preeto- oh, actually nahi

Rajbeer- kyun

Preeto felt like making Rajbeer jealous

Preeto- woh Riddhima ke saath abhi bahar gaythi.

Rajbeer- Riddhima ke saath gaye lekin apne mangetar ke saath thode pyaar ke lamhe nahi bita sakti.

Preeto- bita a toh the.

Rajbeer- woh chodo, pyaar se phone pe baat bhi nahi karsakti.

Preeto- woh sab baad mein, mujhe yeh baatao. Kal boutique drop karne a rahe ho yeh nahi.

Rajbeer- woh thoda busy ho kal subha

Preeto angerly- Ok, mein kud boutique chalejaongi.

Rajbeer- koi zarorat nahi hai. Mein kal subha a raha hoon

Preeto- nahi nahi ap toh busy the na. Mein kud chale jaongi.

Rajbeer- apne bak bak band karo. Kal mein lene a raha hoon.

Saying this Rajbeer disconnects the phone and Preeto is all smiling at the Dhillon place.

Next morning...

Preeto eat her breakfast and she left the house. But as soon as she walked out she saw a angry Rajbeer by his car.

Preeto- Rajbeer ap

Rajbeer- chalo tumhe late hojaega.

While Rajbeer was driving, Preeto noticed he was angry.

Preeto- Rajbeer ap gussa ho

Rajbeer- nahi

Preeto- ap joot bolrahe ho

Rajbeer- ha, gussa ho

Preeto- mujpe

Rajbeer- nahi padosi pe

Preeto- i'm sorry Rajbeer, please mujhe maaf kardo.

She saw that Rajbeer was leaving his anger. She put her arm around his and put her head on his shoulder and looked up. Rajbeer was not angry anymore.

Preeto- waise kal maine ap se joot kaha tha. Maine ap ko bahaut miss kiya.

Rajbeer- aur tumhe patta hai ke tumhare en cute harkato ki waja se tumpe gussa hoona kitna muskil hai. Its almost impossible.

Then the boutique came and Preeto- dekho, ab boutique a gaya hai. Mujhe jaana padega.

Rajbeer grabbed her hand- samko milo gi na.

Preeto- nahi, please Rajbeer ab bas kuchi deno ki baat hai aur phir mein hamesha apke pas a jaongi.

After hearing that Rajbeer lets go and Preeto goes inside the boutique. Rajbeer starts driving again to get to the Air Force Base (not sure if it was base or camp)

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

Guys head up. In my upcoming parts don't think that NA lost. She is going to do something really horrible. But, to whom and how, gotta wait for that.😃 Big hint, there is going to be a relation between blood and haldi.

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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Sonia

@love03

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

can't wait for the next part...love the way the story is going, great details, I hope soon we get to see something like this on tv as well...good job 👏👏👏

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

Part 14... (sorry, I forgot to mention how many days till Meeta's abd Preeto's wedding. For Meeta 3 days and Preeto 6 days)

Preeto goes in the boutique and Rajbeer drives off to the Air Force Base. NA is just passing by when she saw RajPreet, she was so depressed and angry.

NA- Preeto, tumhe kya laga ke tum mere beti aur bete ko mujhe dor lagaoji aur mein chup chap dekhti rahongi. No, i'll get my revenge. Lekin, abhi nahi. Abhi toh tum thodi khushi enjoy karo lekin tumhare haldi pe tumhe ek bahaut bada surprise dongi mein.

Saying that she leaves. Simran is already there and is putting the tags on the clothings when Preeto comes in.

Preeto- are Simran tum yeh sab kyun kar raheho? Mujhe do mein kar detiho.

Simmi hands the tags over to Preeto. Preeto starts putting the tags on.

Simmi- Are Preeto, mein tumhe baatana bhole gaye. Ag boutique hum ek ganta pehle band karengaye. Meeta di ki ag haldi hai na.

Preeto- of course Simran. Tumhara hokam sab se ucha.

Both start laughing.

Meeta's haldi...

Everyone is dressed up in yellow because its Haldi. At first Bj n Papaji, applies haldi on Meeta and Pankaj. Then Mamaji n Mamiji, then Ishu n Dhruv. Our RajPreet comes n applie haldi on Meeta n Pankaj. Everyone applies haldi to Meeta n Pankaj. Bj then comes n applies haldi on Preeto and - dulhan ki haldi ek ladki pe lagti hai toh phir uske shaadi jaldi hoti hai. Teri shaadi toh waise bhi pakki hogaye hai lekin phir bhi.

Rajbeer heard what Bj said and when everyone was distracted he comes to Preeto and wispers- dekha tumhare Bj ko tumhare shaadi ki kitni jaldi hai. Actually mujhe bhi aisa lagta hai ke kab yeh 6 din poore hongay aur kab tum mere pas ao gi. Aur kab humare suhaagrat hogi.

When Rajbeer said that Preeto blushed ☺️. She just walked away from Rajbeer and went to Meeta di. Rajbeer knew that she was blushing when he said suhaagrat. He just loved her too much.

Khoda/Chalere Rasam...

Ishu comes behind Meeta and places the blanket that Bj once placed on her when it was her haldi. Mamaji comes to Meeta and unties the cloth that covering her wrists. After uncovering her wrists he put red and white khoda (sorry, not sure if khoda is the correct word).

Chalere Rasam starts. Meeta does her Chalere rasam on Preeto and the Chalere easily falls on her head.

Dhruv- Oh hoye, Preeto tumhare sirr pe kitne easily Chalere gir gaye.

Preeto- jiju its not funny

Simmi- yeah bhai, ab kehne se kya hoga. Rajbeer aur Preeto ki setting toh pehle se hogaye hai.

Riddhima- thats true

Preeto- Meeta ab sabse pehle na Chalere Simran aur Riddhima pe kar.

Meeta goes to Simran and before she shakes her Chalere the Chalere just falls on Simmi's head. Everyone starts laughing.

Preeto- ab kya hua simran, Meeta di ke hilane se pehle chalere ger gaye. Jiju ab Simran ki shaadi mein zaada waqt nahi bacha.

Meeta then goes to Ridz and shakes the Chalere and after a while the chalere falls on her head.

Rajbeer- ab mein yeh soch rahe hoon ke yeh Chalere kiske naam ki hai?

Preeto looks over to Sunny and says- mujhe patta hai.

Ridz- what nonsense. Rak yeh chalere apne pas.

She walks over to Preeto and says- yaar kyun mere band baja rahe hai. Abhi mere aur Sunny ka rishta ek secret rakna.

End of the Day...

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Sana

@LoveSana

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#70

Part 15...

(this is about RajPreet Sangeet and Pankaj's Bachelor party. Which mean 1 day till Pankeeta wedding and 4 days till RajPreet wedding. By the way, Ridz, Simran, Jassiand Ishu are staying at the Dhillon house.)

Sangeet...

In the Dhillon house the mehndi was all ready, Bj was upstairs getting Preetoready. Bj wore a orange suit,Preetoin front of her dresser dressed in a green and red lehnga.

Bj- Haye raba, mere bachi itni baadiho gayeaur patta bhi nahi chala. Ab bas 4 din ragaye hai aur phir tera chera dekhneke liye bhi hume Rajbeer se ijazad line padigi.

Hearing this Preeto started getting tears.

Preeto- bj, ap issamaat bolo. Rajbeer se apko kise bhikis ki ijazadnahi line padigi.

Bj- pagli, woh sirfiss ghar ka damad hinahi balki tera patti bhi hain.

Before Preeto would answer Ridz came in.

Preeto juz remembered something. Preeto- Riddhima, itne din hogaye aur main yeh toh bhol gaye key tere aurIshu di ki bilkul nahi banti. Chakar kya hain, itne dino se nahi koi jajda. I'm impressed.

Ridz- let it be. Sirf mein jaanti hoon ke Ishmeet ko keyse jaal rahe hoon.For your information,meine aur Ishmeet neyeh agreement kiya tha ki tere shaadi tak, hum jajda nahi karigaye. Lekin jaise he tere bidaai hogi nawaise jajda suro.

Everyone starts laughing at that. Then few minutes later, Rajbeer andother people comefor sangeet.Preeto comes downstairs, and again Rajbeer can't take his eyesoff her.While Rajbeer was gazing at Preeto,Sunny n Ridz noticed. They intrupted Rajbeer's stare. Bj gets Preeto tosit and Ishu sits beside her because she was going to apply mehndi on one of Preeto's hand.

Simmi- Bj, kya meinPreeto ko mehndi laga sakti hoon.

Bj- ha, puttar. Kyun nahi. Yeh le

Bj hands over one mehndi cone to Simran.Simran goes and sits on the left side of Preeto.

Ridz- come on guys, ab dance hojae.

Sunny n Ridz make RajPreet dance with them on Mehndi Laga Ki Rakna. After they finish, Preeto goes and sits where she was sitting.

Ishu andSimran start applying mehndi on Preeto's hands.Dhruv, Rajbeer, Sunny n Ridz dance on Lets rock now soniye.

Jogi n Jassi, Dhruv n Ishu,Sunny n Ridz, Rajbeer n Bani and Pankaj n Meeta dance onMast Kalendar.

Preeto's mehndi is all dried up and she has now removed it. End of RajPreet Sangeet.Everyoneleft the Dhillon house, Simran came to Preeto and took her hand.

Simran- wow, Preeto tumhare mehndi ka rang kitna dark. Kiska matlab Rajbeer jaan diga tum pe. Bhaut pyaar karegay.

Time for Pankaj's Bachelor Party...

Preeto was in roomlooking at her mehndi. Rajbeer was at his rented house, getting ready. He was about to leave and he got his phone. In his phone was a picture of Preeto. Then he thought that he should call her.Preeto's phone started ringing, she was the number and with no surprise she knew it was Rajbeer.

Rajbeer- Hello

Preeto- kyun phone, ap ko Pankaj ki Bachelor party mein nahi jaana hai kya.

Rajbeer- nahi baas nekel ne wala tha aur phir tumhare yaad ae.

Preeto- kyun

Rajbeer- bas itna baata na tha ke ag bahaut khobsurat lag rahe thi.

Preeto- thanx

Rajbeer- your welcome, waise tumhare mehndi ka rang kaisa hain.

Preeto- oh, waise ap ko patta hai, ke dulhan ki mehndi ka rang jitna dark hota hai, toh otna hi ziyada uska patti use pyaar karega.

Rajbeer- ha, patta hai. Lekin mein batta sakta hoon ke tumhare mehndi ka rang bhaut dark hoga.

Preeto blushed. Preeto- nahi, bilkul phika (washed out, light)hain.

Rajbeer- kya?

Preeto then disconnected the phone and smiled.

Pankaj's party...

All the guys were at Pankaj's house.

Sunny- yaar, ag toh please Pankaj thodi drink karle. Kyunki shaadi ke baad toh tere biwi ka raj kale ga.

Rajbeer's, Jogi's and Dhruv's phone rings and they start talking on the phone. After they finish they get back to the party. Pankaj had a little. Dhruv had more than a one glass, maybe even the half ofthe bottle. Jogi and Dhruv made Rajbeer have like 5 glasses.

Jogi- yaar pile, pile. Tere bhi toh shaadi bhaut jaldi ane wali hain.

Everyone had ablast at Pankaj's house. It was around 11pm.

Dhruv- chalo yaar mujhe toh apne biwi ko milna hai. Lekin woh toh apne maike mein hain.

Jogi- i know yaar. Mere biwi bhi Dhillon residence rehne gaye hai. Usne kaha Bj Papaji ko madat ki zarorat hosakti hain. Aur Bj ne kaha ke ag raat yahipe rokja. Aur woh rokgaye.

Dhruv- idea, toh apne Jassi se mile, mein apne Ishu, Sunny tu Riddhima se mil, Pankaj tu Meeta se mil aur Rajbeer tu Preeto se mil.

The boys quietly sneek into Dhillon house. Pankaj goes to Meeta, Jogi goes to Jassi, Dhruv goes to Ishu, Sunny goes to Ridz and Rajbeer goes to Preeto.

Please do comment.:-)

Edited by unknownunknown - 13 years ago

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