ROSID FF: Amazing rosid completed ff

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Posted: 9 years ago
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HEY GUYS...I'M SILENT READER OF FF'F OF SSK AND I HAVE INSPIRED BY UR STORIES AND THAT MADE ME ALSO TO WRITE A FF..SO...GUYS PLZZ BEAR ME
HERE WE GO
The concept is...
In this ff i'm showing our rosid as lawyers and they are family friends . roli's family died in her childood. HOW SIDS FAMILY AND SID MANAGES ROLI IS THE CONCEPT. IT IS LTL TRAGIC,MORE ROMANTIC, AND MYSTERY FF.
so guys...how is my concept...?



AMAZING ROSID
PART:1

DELHI:TWO NEIGHBOUR FAMILIES...
ONE:BHARADWAAJ FAMILY
TWO:DWIVEDI FAMILY
BHARADWAAJ FAMILY MEMBERS:NIRMALA BHARADWAAJ(mataji),RAJENDER BHARADWAAJ(NIRMALA'S SON),SUJATA RAJENDER BHARADWAAJ(RAJENDER'S WIFE),SIDDHANT BHARADWAAJ/SID(RAJENDER & SUJATA'S SON)
DWIVEDI FAMILY MEMBERS:JAMNANLAL DWIVEDI,MEENA JAMNANLAL DWIVEDI(JAMNANLALS WIFE),ROLI DWIVEDI/BHARADWAAJJAMNANLAL & MEENA'S DAUGHTER)
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both families are not only neighbours but also they were like same family members.rajinder and jamnanlal are best friends and matani never used to show any differences b/w both families being elder.sid and roli are best friends though both have 3 yrs age difference.roli is of 8yrs and sid is of 11yrs.both always used to be together{studying,playing,eating,sleeping}.both families were enjoing with their cute kids and families.



(guys im soo sorry if my story is not upto ur imagination bt for me i m trying this for the first time in my life.and sry if any mistakes in my storyline...and guys i m frm andhra.so,my hindi is also poor but i like hindi very much. so, im trying it also in this.pls comment freely whether it is positive or negative no problem.)

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Posted: 9 years ago
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welcome to the forum dear
nice concept and lovely start waiting for next
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank u soo much for accepting me
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part:2
one day jamnanlal's was invited to some buisiness party.so, jamnanlal,meena, and roli started their journey.
roli:pappa plz ghaadi rhukhiye na...muje washroom jaana hai!!
listeting to this both jamnanlal and meena smiled at the cuteness of their daughter and stopped the car nearby a mall.
jamnanlal:meena.. thum jaao roli ke saath. mein ghaadi mein hi rukhungi.
both roli and meena went inside mall and came back.meena went back to car and sat inside it while roli saw some blind man facing difficulty to go...so, roli went to help that blind man.while both jamnanlal and meena were happy and proud of their little daughter.after finishing roli was coming back to their car,that was the moment when she saw some desaster in her life... i.e., some blast happend to their car in which rolis parents were present inside it were dead on spot.seeing this roli became like a statue in shock.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Hi dear welcome to rosid world superb start eagerly waiting for nxt dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
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nice update poor roli waiting for entry of sid
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Welcome to the crazy world of rosid n rosidians dear
I'm also frm andhra where u live in Andhra
Super concept dear waiting for nxt update
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hi dear..welcum to rosid world..hapue to c u here..myself harsha ..call me as honey..n im also frm.andra...by d way wat is ur name? n cumng to concept..i luvd it..n congrates fr starting ur first ff...u should write more n more on rosid..v r always there to suprt i
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Posted: 9 years ago
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thank you soo much guys for ur support. i m devika .i m frm nellore dt,bt studying in salem.again thank you soo much for ur support guys
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Posted: 9 years ago
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part:3
bharadwaaj family while watching news they heard about the incident while sid was egarly waiting for the roli.bharadwaaj family shocked seeing the news and reached the spot immediatly. there they saw roli still standing like a statue without even a single drop of tears from her eyes while bharadwaaj family breakeddown seeing roli like that.they took roli to their home and completed all the rituals.after completion of everything all tried to talk to roli freely but to their shock,now roli is out of world and became highly reserved type and all the time roli stays in her room only.sid tried many times to get her normal but failed to do it and sid started missing roli . on top of that police used to come to their house regularly to take statements from roli and court asked roli to attend every month until the case is closed.mataji always used to consider rosid as her both eyes and now she is not able to see her eyes in that much pain.days passing like that.

meanwhile rajender got order in which he should stay in US for few years for which he should shift his family.all by hearing the news no one knows how to react because news was happy but the situation is not good as roli should stay in india for courts hearing.so mataji decided to stay with roli in india.but sid was not at all listening to anyone.
sid: mein roliko chodke kahinahi jaavunga. plz muje manaane ki koi bhi khoshish mat karna kyunki mein nayi maanne vaale hun.

roli was observing the whole situation and listening to everyone and decided something and went to sids room.
roli:sid maanjao naa yaar. dhekho sabhilog there vajase kaise phareshaan hai.pls sid jaavo naa maa,pappake saath.mereliye.

sid:are roli tum bhi shuru hogai?
roli:haa pls maanjo na...
sid:teake mein jaavungi lekin ek condition par...
roli:kya hai?
sid :pehle tum mujse vaadakarogi...phir mein bataati hun.
roli:teike vaada karthi hum.ab bolo.
sid:thum mujse pehle jaise baat karogi, har din mujse video cal korogi aur thum teikse khaogi,soogi aur thum pehle jaise hoogi.aur jab thumhari courtcase finish hogana, tabse tum muje chodke kahinayi jaaogi.yeh hain meri conditions.kyar thum yeh sanb korogina..?
roli:haa sid mein sab puri karunga.promise...
everyone are now happy for both the children
after a week rajender,sujata and sid left to us.

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