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Posted: 9 years ago
#71
Sorry Sorry sorry guys
I had some problem with my network.
Now no more Waiting here are the updates.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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UPDATE:16


Next day morning.
Roli was first to get up.
Roli found sid sleeping leaning on the bed holding her.
Sorry sorry Roli holding his hand.
Roli swiftly took her hand and got up from the bed.
Roli went near sid and patted on his shoulder softly.
Sid too got up yawning and rubbing his eyes.
Sid: good morning Roli.
Roli: good morning sidji.
Sid got up stood facing Roli while Roli slightly down her face.
After a while...
Roli: sidji I am so sorry to hold you yesterday and you had to stay her the whole night.
Sid: no problem Roli. I know you were scared and hold my hand in sleep. I too din't want t disturb you as you just slept and were too tired.
Roli: thank you sidji.
Sid: you are welcome. Roli now I think I should make a move from here. And ha I wish you go to college.
Roli: no sidji. I can't till my brother is back.
Sid: I know Roli. But I think you should go to college as your exams too are nearing. And you know what... As you a reason Simar too is not going to college. I wish you both go to college. Don't worry about prem. we will surely find him.
Roli was convinced and accepted to resume to college.
Sid: ok then I will come here along with Simar and pick you up in 1hr.
Roli: it's ok sidji. I will come on my own. Why you take strain.
Sid: Roli after all this I never dare to send you alone. And taking care of you is pleasure to me and you can never be my strain.
Sid said sternly and left Roli confused not understanding what he actually meant.
In a while she came back to Senses and moved to washroom as it would get late.

At BW house...
Soon after sid stepped inside the house...
Mataji and Sujatha who were busy drinking coffee posed array of questions at sid.
Simar listening the voice hurried down stairs.
Sid some how managed her mom and grandmother and walked towards his room.
But before he leave he said to Simar...
Sid: simar get ready fast. I will drop you in your college and then carry on my work.
Simar with out any questions went to her room as she knows if her brother say something something to her then there would be a valid reason behind that.
Simar and sid swiftly finished their breakfast.
Sid: maaji can you pack lunch for me too today.
Sujatha: what is this new habit sid. You wish to eat home food.
Sid: just for a change maa. Please.
Sujatha: sure sid I will pack food for you too.
Sujatha swiftly packed 2 boxes and gave to Simar and sid.
Simar and Sid moved towards his car.

sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#73
UPDATE: 17


Soon after taking their seats in the car...
Simar: bhaiyya is everything alright? Where were you whole night? Roli is fine na.
Sid: ayere... meri maa... Now zip up your mouth. And let me speak.
Simar pouted.
Sid: everything is alright. Don't worry Roli is also fine. Ha Roli will also come to college with you.
Simar: excited... Wow bhaiyya so premji has come back...
Sid: my dear sister... Don't jump to conclusions... We are yet to find prem. he narrated all the happenings of previous day. Again continued...if we leave Roli like that she may go into depression. So I asked her to go to college with you so that she can divert her mind.
Simar: hmmm good bhaiyya.
Sid: ok now if you are done with questions we will move. We should also pick up Roli.
Simar smiled..
But before he start he remembered something...
Sid: simar... With hesitation...
Simar: what happened bhaiyya any work to be done by me.
Afterall she is his sister she can very well understand him.
Sid: ha Simar. I want you to give this lunch box to Roli.
He gave her the lunch box.
Simar smiled at him teasingly and took the box.
Simar: I will surely give this and also tell her this is your special order. So that is why you asked maa to pack lunch for you...
Sid:(little embarrassed) not like that Simar. As she is already in grief surely she will not concentrate on her stomach. So just thought of giving it to her.
Simar: ok. Why not I believe my brother... She smirked at him.
Sid: oh ho... I don't mind whether you believe or not. Just take care of Roli. That's it.
Simar: hmm. But i can't assure you that I will take better care than you.
Sid: whattt?????
Simar: ha bhaiyya... See you stayed her so that she sleep peacefully, wanted to divert her mind from these tensions and also now caring about her hunger. And till now I never saw such caring person.
She laughed.
Sid: stop it simar...
Sid started his car...
Sid though tried to convince simar... His own heart is not believing him.
Not only simar he himself din't knew that this side of sid was hidden in him. He smiled thinking about all incidents with Roli.
Simar is observing his brother and she too smiled.
While still on thoughts... They reached Roli's house.
Simar entered the house while sid was in his seat waiting for rosim to come out.
Sid saw himself in the mirror and set his hair and double checked if he is handsome.
Simar who came out by now along with Roli saw this and smiled. Simar knocked the door so as to inform their presence there.
Sid unlocked the door.
The girls took their seats in the back.
Sid through out the way was staring at Roli through the mirror unknown to himself.
Simar too never missed a chance to notice her brother making her smile then and there.
Simar: bhaiyya stop the car. Where are you going.
Sid put sudden break as he understood he just crossed their college.
Simar and Roli got down.
Sid: simar, Roli please take care. If any problem do call me.
Simar: sure bhaiyya.
Sid: and Roli don't worry about prem. I will take care of him.
Roli: thank you sidji.
Simar and Roli smiled at him and waved bye before they turn up to their class.
sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#74
UPDATE: 18


Simar and Roli reached their class.
Their friends who know little about the incident surrounded them.
This made Roli little uncomfortable.
Simar for support hold her hand.
They escaped the crowd with some lame excuses...
Roli was pushing the day hard...
But suddenly something flashed in her mind.
Roli: simar I got it... I found a way to find bhaiyya.
She said hugging Simar with full excitement.
Simar: oh good what is it?
Roli: if the one who attacked me and one behind this kidnap have any relation then I am sure to find any clue in favor in that area where they took me.
So we will go and find it.
Simar: wow that's really a nice idea. Let me tell bhaiyya.
Roli: simar but I think we need to leave right now orelse there are chances of loosing the clue.
Simar: but Roli. How can we go alone.
Roli: nothing will happen. Any ways we are together.
Simar: ok but let me atleast tell bhaiyya that we are going there.
Simar dailed to Sid's phone but there was no answer.
Simar finally texted him and left to that place with Roli.
They took auto from the college and reached the area.
Roli and simar started searching.
Being the place covered with trees all over and darkness it was really a tough task for them to find any clue.
Still these two were adamant searching for long.
Finally they got it.
Roli: she screamed... Simar... Simar...
Simar ran towards her.
Simar: what happened Roli...
Roli showed a piece of paper in which details like contact number and some amount was written.
Simar: you are right Roli. So there is some relation between the 2 incidents.
Roli: hmm now we will leave Simar.
Roli and simar took took few steps forward before 2 men come on their way.
Those 2 men were very stout and had weapons in their hands.
Roli and simar hold eachothers hands for support.
Inspite of all their tries to escape from them they could not withstand infront their strength.
Roli and simar were dragged inside deep into some devastated building.
They snatched mobiles and arrested them in a room.
Now the 2 girls were left there I darkness with bleeding wounds and bruises.
They hugged each other and cried.
Still they had hopes that sid will come to rescue them as he had the information.
Which is their only hope now and prayed for that to happen.

sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#75
UPDATE: 19


Simar: Roli what will we do now. I am afraid.
Roli: me too simar. But I have hope that sidji will come and surely rescue us. Infact now I am little happy too.
Simar saw Roli in puzzle.
Expecting what is running in simar's mind...
Roli: you know now I am sure to find bhaiyya. With this attack they proved us that these are only the people who kidnapped bhaiyya.
Simar: ha Roli. You are right.
While in their conversation they heard someone coming near the door.
Simar and Roli were scared to face the person who would harm them.
When the foot steps were heard louder indicating the person is approximating the room rosim Closed their eyes in fear.
But they opened their eyes next moment on hearing some noise from outside.
They ran towards the door to try to understand what is happening outside.
They heard some screams and banging sounds making them confirm that a tough fight is going on outside.
They some where felt relieved that some one came to realize them still with some sort of fear not knowing what would happen.
Finally the voice they longed to hear came.
Sid called out their names.
Sid: simar... Roli... Are you here.
Simar: bhaiyya save us please.
She cried.
Sid: ha ha don't worry I am here.
Sid broke the door after few invain attempts.
Simar came running and hugged sid.
Roli too smiled with tears in her eyes.
Sid pushed both of them to a safe place by the side.
Sid again started beating the rowdies.
Roli and simar found few police also there.
Suddenly something flashed her mind.
Roli silently moved searching for something.
Simar who realized that Roli is not beside her got tensed and called sid.
Sid and simar were busy searching for Roli.
Roli saw an isolated room in the backyard of that house.
She found someone tied inside through the window.
She was sure it was her brother.
She shouted... Bhaiyya...
With this premji who was inside turned towards the window and tried to convey something. But his mouth was covered with a cloth.
She tried to break open the door.
By now sid and simar reached the place.
Sid asked Roli to move and break the door.
Once the door was broken...
All the 3 entered the room...
Roli ran and hug him...
But something Big was to happen there.
sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#76
UPDATE:20


Prem was about to say something.
But even before he open his mouth he was shot on his head.
All brains there paused for second.
Before perm fall down Roli caught him.
Roli screamed... Bhaiyya...
Sid and simar turned to know the person who fired at him.
But to their surprise now gun was aimed at Roli.
There was no time for him to even react on this.
But may be it's God grace before that person shoot Roli he fell down bleeding.
Veeru was standing behind that guy Holding the gun.
Sid: thank god.
Simar: bhaiyya now first let's take premji to hospital.
Sid and veeru helped prem to bring him to hospital.
As veeru is police he took care of leagal issues.
The staff took him to emergency OT.
Simar was holding Roli as support.
Sid watched Roli helplessly.
The red light outside the OT was switched on.
After almost 8hrs of surgery doctors came out.
Roli rushed to them crying ...
Doctor: we could just halt his death but we could not save him. He went to coma.
Roli, Simar as well as sid were shattered with the news.
Roli could not bear anymore. He went unconscious and fell down.
Simar tried to wake her up...
Being in hospital they admitted her and gave her sedatives as her fainting was due to pressure on her brain.
Simar was left with Roli.
Sid and veeru came out from the ward.
Sid: what is all this veeru. Who are they trying to kill them. He would have killed Roli too. Thank god you saved her.
Veeru: when you called me I was investigating about this case only and got to know that one of the guys who kidnapped Roli that day... One of his relatives heired people to kill Roli and prem. The reason behind was prem beat those guys on Roli's insistence when trying to misbehave with few girls in her college. With the same grudge they kidnapped Roli. But you failed their plan. They kidnapped prem and also attacked him. They also want to kill Roli. But at present the main culprit is hidden. We will surely trace him.
Sid did not understand how to react if n to this.
Sid: oh then what about that SIM card and finger prints on the phone.
Veeru: yes the SIM card was on the name of that relative and we are yet to find about fingerprints. We got some sample from his house.
Sid: well. But what about their security now as they can attack them again.
Veeru: surely they will try to attack. But don't worry I will try to get sanctioned police protection to them with my personal obligation.
Sid: ok thank you.
Veeru: ok sid. Take care. Bye.

Sid on listening to the complete explanation given by veeru now was unable to understand why Roli went there and how she found her brother was prisoner there.
He thought of asking simar about this.

He went to Roli's ward and called simar out slowly not disturbing Roli.

Simar came out and slowly closed the door.
Sid: Simar tell me what made you go to that place. And I told you to inform me when you want something.
He said all controlling his anger.
sameera.2397 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
I Am not sure how far I am conviencing
Please give your feedback on these updates. I will continue with updates again this weekend and if possible give 1 or 2 updates tomorrow.
Good night. Bye
sheetal1979 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78

Originally posted by: ramya2397

I Am not sure how far I am conviencing
Please give your feedback on these updates. I will continue with updates again this weekend and if possible give 1 or 2 updates tomorrow.
Good night. Bye

all updates r fabulous dear I loved it after reading updates sent next all updates continuously without any gap but 😉 I know it's not possible eagerly waiting for further updates gud night
Edited by sheetal1979 - 9 years ago
teja-rosid thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
All updates are super luvd it
Waiting for nxt
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Posted: 9 years ago
#80
oh, this much tragedy...feeling pity on Roli...how will she come out of this?who is that idiot who is behind this?

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